Can someone write this story and let me know? I'm thinking a two or three part. A straight couple just got married wedding night et cetera. You (the author ) could tell of their wedding night sex. Time passes on and they both want to try something new. The wife suggests bdsm where she's in charge. The husband reluctantly agrees. This could be in public and someone (a girl) secretly overhears. Night comes and the wife has the husband tied to the bed. She's in sexy lingerie, he's in tear away clothes. This is where the girl that overheard comes in. As the couple gets halfway through their bdsm sex that girl sneak in quietly with another "girl." They are dressed in black, both are athletic, skinnier and toned. The intruders break into the bedroom and the girl overtakes the wife. The other "girl" -(looks like a girl, has nice tits and a girl's voice) . The guy watches in horror but can't do anything because he's tied to the bed. The real girl strips the wife of her clothes and rapes her. She grabs the strap on and fucks the wife. The strapon meant for the husband. All the while the guy gets turned on. The other "girl " walks in and seductively starts stripping off her clothes and teases the guy while doing it. She stops at "her" panties. She teases the guy. You could have her doing whatever to him here. Finally she strips off her panties and shows her massive cock. She forces the guy to give her a blow job. Then she rapes him up the ass. After she's done with the husband and the girl with the strapon is done with the wife they switch turns. Later you could make it consensual and/or have the intruders have sex with each other and the couple finish up their sex. For a sequel you could make it all consensual where the couple invite the intruders back.
Couple rapes another couple, with a twist
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Being nonPC versus being offensive
Can't make up my mind about this thread title:
Whereas fantasy is different from reality, and anyone is entitled to his/her own fantasy, provided he doesn't act on it (some of my fantasies are weird too),
- Him putting it so bluntly, using the word 'rape'... Does it kinda normalize the real thing?
- Or is he just being nonPC and upfront about one of his fantasies?
Because the issue of PCnness vs. being offensive came up in another thread, where some users got upset about the writer's choice of words. . In that case, I was on the side of the author.
Whereas in this case, I'm in the other camp…
When should the line be drawn?
Can't make up my mind about this thread title:
Whereas fantasy is different from reality, and anyone is entitled to his/her own fantasy, provided he doesn't act on it (some of my fantasies are weird too),
- Him putting it so bluntly, using the word 'rape'... Does it kinda normalize the real thing?
- Or is he just being nonPC and upfront about one of his fantasies?
Because the issue of PCnness vs. being offensive came up in another thread, where some users got upset about the writer's choice of words. . In that case, I was on the side of the author.
Whereas in this case, I'm in the other camp…
When should the line be drawn?
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Sean Renaud
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Hey. . .why hasn't LC come in here and said soemthing yet?!
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He'll be by soon enough. Remember, he also has to read the story ideas and a few selections to his kids and his self-defense class...so he can warn them...I think.
As for the OP: Not my bag....uh, kudos for being straight up with your fantasy? I mean, most of the noncon pitches dance around the word but you were straightforward. Since it seems like the husband and wife end up enjoying it I guess it would fit into the genre...though the sequel idea should probably be scrapped (the two proposed endings are also pretty odd, unless the intruders have sex with each other, high five and then walk away carrying ghettoblasters while the couple just looks at each other completely baffled, unsure whether anything that they experienced was real)
Also, odd observation: The first time the woman's on top in this relationship is when they get assaulted. Sounds like a weird PSA from back in the day: "Men, allowing your women on top will end with a cock up your ass and Communism getting one more foothold in this great country."
As for the OP: Not my bag....uh, kudos for being straight up with your fantasy? I mean, most of the noncon pitches dance around the word but you were straightforward. Since it seems like the husband and wife end up enjoying it I guess it would fit into the genre...though the sequel idea should probably be scrapped (the two proposed endings are also pretty odd, unless the intruders have sex with each other, high five and then walk away carrying ghettoblasters while the couple just looks at each other completely baffled, unsure whether anything that they experienced was real)
Also, odd observation: The first time the woman's on top in this relationship is when they get assaulted. Sounds like a weird PSA from back in the day: "Men, allowing your women on top will end with a cock up your ass and Communism getting one more foothold in this great country."
Sean Renaud
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And this is why I prefer doggy and ballerina positions. Because you know a girl with a phat azz gets much fuck from behind maintaining the purity of our fluids. That's why you've never seen a commie drink water. Only vodka.
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He did and I did too, I don't know why they were deleted.
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Because those posts were negative in regards to a story idea. This board is not a "general chat"/debate/or "fight" board.
Please keep posts on topic and regarding developing a story.
Thank you.
