Country Girl Canyon Cunt: Synopsis

[EroticSounds]

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[Hypoxia]

Stretch that out to at least 750 words and submit it. Add details as needed.

 

[sirhugs]

add lots of detailed sex, it is always needed

 

[EroticSounds]

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[lovecraft68]

Separate any dialogue from your narrative text, each time someone speaks it needs its own line. Makes it easier to follow than having it lumped into a wall of text.

It's not without potential, but you need a little more practice, just keep stretching it out and adding to it.

But don't post much more here. Some forum Karen will show up squealing about lits rule of not posting much more than a paragraph of a story here.