Corrupt *FEMALE* Cop

[Chicklet]

Maybe it's been overdone, but...

I want to read a new story about a corrupt cop. Maybe a sheriff. I've read a million before, but I like them, and I would like to see more. I was thinking, though, that it's always the male cop taking advantage of a female...anyone else but me want to see a corrupt female cop? Maybe she picks up a guy with a clean record for doing drugs. He was just experimenting and happened to be in the wrong place at the wrong time. She takes him back to the station, a small town place where they're pretty much alone, handcuffs him with his back against the bars, and goes down on him. Then she handcuffs him to the bed and fucks him there. Later, an officer comes to relieve her and take over for the evening. She and the officer have been involved intimately, and she directs him to get nasty with the prisoner.

Chicklet

 

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[Chicklet]

she handcuffs him to the bed and fucks him there. Later, an officer comes to relieve her and take over for the evening. She and the officer have been involved intimately, and she directs him to get nasty with the prisoner.

Chicklet

 

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[Chicklet]

Anyone else have an opinion?

 

[Tatewaki]

Anyone else have an opinion?

Have you ever known me to be without one?

I've always liked stories dealing with the abuse of power. Have you given any thought as to the Story Archetype you wish to explore? Many would work, but I think a these few would carry the most 'Oomph.'

Vengeance Archetype:
Betrayal Archetype:
Pursuit Archetype:
Rebellion Archetype:
Ambition Archetype:
Rivalry Archetype:

I'm assuming that everyone here knows what these are, and I need not clarify further. If not, just ask, and I'll expound upon them.

Later!

-T

 

[Chicklet]

Tate = )

Without an opinion? NEVER.

However I must admit <ashamed> that I don't know what most of those archetypes mean. The only one I know isn't mentioned, and that's the hero/quest one...That's the last thing I remember studying in school (10th grade education here, I will admit)

Chicklet

 

[MsLinnet]

The Red Shoe Diary

Wasn’t this done in the red shoe diary? Denise Cosby played the part of a highly sexy cop who abducts a man after stopping him for a broken tail light.

But who cares another woman in a uniform or out of it. You go for Chicklet I would love to read it

Love Linnet

 

[Chicklet]

Going for it

Just to let you know, I'm writing the story! FOR REAL!

Chicklet

 

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[Chicklet]

Here's My Idea (feedback and opinions, please)

Man is speeding through small town and gets pulled over. His insurance card is expired, and the officer (female) takes him and his wife into the station. She and a couple of rough looking men are the only one's there, and they start to taunt the young couple.

The man finds the officer terribly attractive, and she knows it. She teases him about it, taunts the wife for having such a slutty husband, and then comments on his erection. She tells him to strip in front of them.

ETC ETC

(Is this too overdone?)

 

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[MsLinnet]

Chicklet just a question regarding the wife

is she the cops lover and is this all a set up

Love Linnet

 

[Chicklet]

The Wife

I don't know why the wife's there.

I just like women!

I was thinking that the man could have this bitchy little wife sitting next to him complaining "you're going too fast. You're going to get a ticket. I told you so, we're being pulled over. I can't believe that you didn't pay the insurance"

And the female officer sort of notices that he's just sitting there being quiet, a little bit submissive, and she sort of goes with that. I like the idea of a man being humiliated in front of his wife - they've been married for a while now and she's being forced to watch him suck a male officers dick. The wife AND the female cop are getting off on it, and the cop lets the men screw the wife in front of the husband, and stuff like that...

Chicklet

ps - the wife didn't set it up

 

[Tatewaki]

Re: The Wife

I don't know why the wife's there.

I just like women!

I was thinking that the man could have this bitchy little wife sitting next to him complaining "you're going too fast. You're going to get a ticket. I told you so, we're being pulled over. I can't believe that you didn't pay the insurance"

And the female officer sort of notices that he's just sitting there being quiet, a little bit submissive, and she sort of goes with that. I like the idea of a man being humiliated in front of his wife - they've been married for a while now and she's being forced to watch him suck a male officers dick. The wife AND the female cop are getting off on it, and the cop lets the men screw the wife in front of the husband, and stuff like that...

Chicklet

ps - the wife didn't set it up

The shrewish wife is a perfect foil for the meek-mannered man. You can demonstrate his pliancy long before the female cop starts busting on him.

-T

 

[Chicklet]

so is that good or bad?

 

[Tatewaki]

so is that good or bad?

it's a Good thing.

Bitch wife is to lily-livered male as Abbott is to Costello. The dfferences between the two (beefy clown and thin straight-man)enhance the prime characteristic of the other by their juxtapositioning.

-T

 

[Chicklet]

okay, cool!






<and secretly pleased that I know what "juxtaposition" means>

 

[MsLinnet]

Re: The Wife

I don't know why the wife's there.

I just like women!

I was thinking that the man could have this bitchy little wife sitting next to him complaining "you're going too fast. You're going to get a ticket. I told you so, we're being pulled over. I can't believe that you didn't pay the insurance"

And the female officer sort of notices that he's just sitting there being quiet, a little bit submissive, and she sort of goes with that. I like the idea of a man being humiliated in front of his wife - they've been married for a while now and she's being forced to watch him suck a male officers dick. The wife AND the female cop are getting off on it, and the cop lets the men screw the wife in front of the husband, and stuff like that...

Chicklet

ps - the wife didn't set it up

Just Asking love Linnet

 

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[MrFrost]

yeah its a pretty cool idea i'ed read it let us know when its done of course ( have to stress that cause people forget )

 

[Chicklet]

it's not that I forget to tell you...it's that I forget to finish = )

 

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[Chicklet]

okay, i don't forget, i just get distracted

 

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