Corny or Cool?

[sweetnpetite]

Personally, I like it when the sexual description fits into the story- using metaphors that match, without getting to punny about it.

For example, using flower metaphors if your doing it in the garden or if the character or story is tied to flowers in some way. Using weapon metaphors for soldiers ect.

What do you all think of this technique?

 

[Stella_Omega]

Well, without taking too far, sure.

Otherwise, it can overpower the point of the story, whatever that is...

My pirate boy calls his package his "tackle" at one point. But only once.

 

[sweetnpetite]

Well, without taking too far, sure.

Otherwise, it can overpower the point of the story, whatever that is...

My pirate boy calls his package his "tackle" at one point. But only once.

A pirate has a mast- but Santa has a package for you

 

[sweetnpetite]

Let's see what other ones we can come up with

 

[Boxlicker101]

In my narrations I never refer to weapons, unless you think of "shaft" as a weapon. I usually refer to an anus as a "rosebud". If I refer to an asshole, it's describing a nasty person. I might somehow refer to a pussy as an opening flower but I really use few metaphors.

 

[sweetnpetite]

True Story

We had a stray cat skulking around outside the door and my boyfriend fixed it a nice little bowl of tuna fish. (sweet guy) I smiled and said, "You'd do anything for a little pussy wouldn't you?" And he said "yep."

 

[The_Fool]

In my narrations I never refer to weapons, unless you think of "shaft" as a weapon. I usually refer to an anus as a "rosebud". If I refer to an asshole, it's describing a nasty person. I might somehow refer to a pussy as an opening flower but I really use few metaphors.

So THATS what he was talking about in Citizen Kane.....

 

[sweetnpetite]

A beekeeper has (or wants to get to) the honeypot.

A god/dess wants a taste of ambrosia

Lois Lane wants that manhood of steal.

 

[yui]

So THATS what he was talking about in Citizen Kane.....

*snicker*


Hi Sweets,

I'm sure that I use metaphors, though not always consciously. I did a challenge with a jar of honey as a gift and I repeatedly used "golden," "sweet," etc. If used in a clever, creative way, that doesn't detract from the narrative flow, I think metaphors can add a bit of poetry to what could otherwise be trite description.

 

[sweetnpetite]

*snicker*


Hi Sweets,

I'm sure that I use metaphors, though not always consciously. I did a challenge with a jar of honey as a gift and I repeatedly used "golden," "sweet," etc. If used in a clever, creative way, that doesn't detract from the narrative flow, I think metaphors can add a bit of poetry to what could otherwise be trite description.

Yeah, I think that's what I wanted to say.

Thanks yui!

Are you the reason that 'sushi' sounds naughty to me?

 

[Boxlicker101]

Yeah, I think that's what I wanted to say.

Thanks yui!

Are you the reason that 'sushi' sounds naughty to me?

If "sushi" sounds naughty, it may be from a scene in "Sex and the City" where the four women were in a restaurant and the new baby of one of them was there. Another woman mentioned something about a man eating her pussy, and the mother wanted to keep her baby from being corrupted so she corrected the other woman. "Your sushi. He ate your sushi," she said, or something to that effect.

 

[sweetnpetite]

If "sushi" sounds naughty, it may be from a scene in "Sex and the City" where the four women were in a restaurant and the new baby of one of them was there. Another woman mentioned something about a man eating her pussy, and the mother wanted to keep her baby from being corrupted so she corrected the other woman. "Your sushi. He ate your sushi," she said, or something to that effect.

Na. I think it's yui.