Cop beats rapist, saving woman just in time. Now her loins must show their gratitude

[hornyprogrammer]

Here's the original idea I was going with when I wrote this, but I started writing it and I got way too carried away. The basic premise is that a hot girl is walking at night and is attacked by a rapist. A nearby cop hears her cries and rushes to the scene, beating off the rapist and saving the woman. At this point, either the woman loses control and makes out with the cop right there in the dark alley and they end up fucking, or she leaves shellshocked, but in the days that follow she can't help but daydream about the cop. Eventually, she calls the police department and asks if she can thank the cop personally, and then she meets with the cop and she throws herself at him. Details about the rapist's life/physique are optional, as are details about the girl's life. However, the girl's body needs to be described in great detail. It needs to be known that the cop is a badass motherfucker physically and that he is great family man other than, "like most cops", he has a penchant for cheating that his wife isn't as naive about as he thinks she is, or at least they never openly discuss it. Maybe it even turns her on a bit. Anyway, what do y'all think of this idea?

 

[MatthewVett]

Here's the original idea I was going with when I wrote this, but I started writing it and I got way too carried away. The basic premise is that a hot girl is walking at night and is attacked by a rapist. A nearby cop hears her cries and rushes to the scene, beating off the rapist and saving the woman. At this point, either the woman loses control and makes out with the cop right there in the dark alley and they end up fucking, or she leaves shellshocked, but in the days that follow she can't help but daydream about the cop. Eventually, she calls the police department and asks if she can thank the cop personally, and then she meets with the cop and she throws herself at him. Details about the rapist's life/physique are optional, as are details about the girl's life. However, the girl's body needs to be described in great detail. It needs to be known that the cop is a badass motherfucker physically and that he is great family man other than, "like most cops", he has a penchant for cheating that his wife isn't as naive about as he thinks she is, or at least they never openly discuss it. Maybe it even turns her on a bit. Anyway, what do y'all think of this idea?

I would definitely, DEFINITELY, not have it where, immediately after being almost sexually assaulted, she immediately fucks a stranger in an alley. Definitely. Go with the shellshocked version.

 

[GorgeousGeekGirl]

Picturing Vic Mackey from The Shield. I'd so show him a lot of gratitude. In one scene a perp hops a thin wooden fence, but Vic charges straight through it

 

[GorgeousGeekGirl]

Picturing Vic Mackey from The Shield. I'd so show him a lot of gratitude. In one scene a perp hops a thin wooden fence, but Vic charges straight through it. He's freaking hot. Love to show him some gratitude

 

[RuzieD]

I would definitely, DEFINITELY, not have it where, immediately after being almost sexually assaulted, she immediately fucks a stranger in an alley. Definitely. Go with the shellshocked version.

I agree with these sentiments. First, it's unrealistic that woman could barely avoid a rape and then be ready to have sex. Second, it would be hard to see how it doesn't endorse a "rape myth." I doubt anyone on lit erotica approves of that...

 

[RjThoughts]

Here's the original idea I was going with when I wrote this, but I started writing it and I got way too carried away. The basic premise is that a hot girl is walking at night and is attacked by a rapist. A nearby cop hears her cries and rushes to the scene, beating off the rapist and saving the woman. At this point, either the woman loses control and makes out with the cop right there in the dark alley and they end up fucking, or she leaves shellshocked, but in the days that follow she can't help but daydream about the cop. Eventually, she calls the police department and asks if she can thank the cop personally, and then she meets with the cop and she throws herself at him. Details about the rapist's life/physique are optional, as are details about the girl's life. However, the girl's body needs to be described in great detail. It needs to be known that the cop is a badass motherfucker physically and that he is great family man other than, "like most cops", he has a penchant for cheating that his wife isn't as naive about as he thinks she is, or at least they never openly discuss it. Maybe it even turns her on a bit. Anyway, what do y'all think of this idea?

No, absolutely NOT! This is just an impossibility in either plot. As someone that has stopped a rape, no woman would think of the man that saved her from an attack sexually.

You've watched too much tv.