Control over body, mind, and soul

Esmeralda_Tate

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This role play is going to deal with the subject of BDSM. The plot is going to be about a girl whos boyfriend becomes increasingly controlling over her. When they first meet he will be very sweet and caring but soon his dark side comes out and he begins to control her every move. First there will be the isolation of all her friends and family, then the verbal abuse which then escalates to physical abuse and sexual Domination. I want somebody who understands the psychology of abuse and domination to write with. I would prefer somebody who doesn't write one liners such as "oh yeah suck my cock bitch". I would like somebody who can carry on a fluid storyline. There must be sensuality and erotica mixed in with the Domination.
The boyfriend will be very different than the type you would imagine to be Dominant. He will be quite pretty and androgynous looking with long hair. Perhaps a moody emo sort of guy, and of course the girlfriend will think hes safe not realizing that he has a dark side to him.
I will play the girlfriend who will be 18. Roles for the boyfriend and perhaps his friends and her friends are acceptable.
 
Beginnings

Danielle had met Tommy while at a club for those 21 and under back when she was still in high school. Now shes a freshman in college and still with him. He is a very respectful decent guy. Even all her family found him good for her. Hes a bit moody, but she was oblivious to it all. They have been together for almost a year now and she couldn't be happier.
She decided to go to the club to see him again tonight. He worked as a DJ on Saturday nights. She had to go shopping that afternoon to buy a new outfit for the evening. She bought a black mini skirt and a teal blue tank top and put her long brown hair up in a pony tail. She gave her brothers hugs and then set out to meet her boyfriend Tommy at the club...
 
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I had gotten to work earlier this afternoon and had set up my equipment and did the sound tests and I waited for the guy who was to set up the lights. The owner was stocking the "bar" with soda, fruit juices and water. The slushy machine was filled and churing away to be ready.

I tried to call you on the cell and there was no answer and so I called you house and all they could tell me was that you had gone shopping at the mall.
I said thank you and my moody became suddenly blue because I didn't know where and what you were doing. I would have to wait until later, something I didn't really want to do.

I had a small salad at the sandwich place down the street and I help the guy installl the Lights and really poped off at him because he was acting like a jerk and not doing his job.

The boss came over and told me to take a break and to change. It was getting near time and I needed to be ready for a big night. I nodded and went to the back room that was both a lounge and my dressing room. There was a small frig. and I took out a bottle of water and sat on the couch thinking about you.
 
Danielle was smiling widely when she got to the club to meet Tommy. It was still early yet so there wasn't many people around but she liked it that way. She didn't like just walking in when there were tons of people already having fun.
She saw his boss as soon as she walked in and asked for Tommy. She sat down on one of the bean bag chairs and waited for him. When he came out she waved. "Hi Tommy, I told you I would come. I even made it a bit early too" She stood up to give him a kiss and hug...
 
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I walked out of the back and you stood and i let you give me a kiss and a light hug and I pulled back a little. "I been trying all afternoon to reach you and all you kid bother would say is that you went to the mall. I tried calling your cell but you never picked it up or called me back. That's just not right Danielle!" I didn't even give you a chance to explain be fore I continued.

"Look, I have to start now, the boss says there's enought people to start the music. You stay where I can keep an eye on you!" and I turned and went up to the DJ's booth.
 
Danielle was so excited to see her boyfriend Tommy that she continued to rattle on and on about her experience at the mall. He cut her off though and began to tell her how he was trying to get a hold of her all day. "I'm sorry Tommy, I was trying on clothes. I didn't have my phone on. At least my brother told you where I was." She then sighed when he had to get to work. "Well where am I supposed to go so that you can keep an eye on me? I was thinking of getting something to drink and maybe walk around a bit to see who's all coming."..
 
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It was still early so I really didn't have to DJ yet. Iput on a loop and just let the music flow. I cam down and caught up with you at th ber and I took you by the arm and led you over to a small round table in the corner near the DJ's booth. "I'm not finished yet. You do as your told. Stay her and let me know when you go to the girls room. I was worried and upset and I still am. So do as you're told or leave now, call your brothers to come and get you. I mean it", I leaned in closer as I sneered at you, "if you go, don't come back. I don't need an inconsiderate and childish little girl, I thought you were beyond this!" I turned and went up into the DJ's booth and started the evening.

"Hello ........... I don't hear you!" and so the night was started. I glanced over to your table not knowing what I would find. You or an empty seat.
 
She went down to the bar to get a fruit smoothie but then he came by and grabbed her arm to have her sit at a round table where he could see her. "Well I didn't mean to make you upset or worried Tommy. You know I like to go to the mall. I told you I would be here tonight." You then came closer to my face. "I..I..I won't go. I will stay here. My brothers don't have to come and get me. I promise that I won't leave" She then watched him go to the DJ booth and begin the night. More people started to flood the bar and she remained at the table where he put her. She just sat there and drank her smoothie. Every now and then he would look at her and she would wave and smile innocently at him..
 
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It was an early night and by a little after eleven o'clock the dance club was almost empty. I had packed up most of my tapes and special musical pieces. It took only a few minutes to shut the equipment down and to cover it all. I brought my things down and I put them at the table with Danielle. I went over to my boos and he handed me and envelope and shook hands . I came back over to you.

"You ready to go or are you going to sit there all night with your phone off." I picked up my bags and headed towards the door. I got to the door and the doorman opened it and I looked and you were there ready to follow me out. I had my old beatup car with me, the black beast and it matched the mood I was in.

I places my things and opened the door for you and you slid onto the front seat and I walked around to the drivers side and banged on the window for you to unlock the door.
 
I sat there the whole time not moving from my spot. I didn't want to make you mad. I couldn't wait for you to get off work though because I was getting bored and wanted to get out of the club. We got to your car and I sat down and then unlocked your door for you. "I am glad that it was a early night. So where are we going now?" She really didn't detect a change in his mood, although she knew him to be moody she was never really scared around him. There were never any signs that he would hurt her. She felt safe and comfortable....
 
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"WELL that depends on when MA & PA Kettle told their little princess to be home. Going to college and you have a curfew. Well what time is it tonight Danielle. The Strike of Midnight...................................I guess I should take you right home then! HUH...."

I started the black beast and looked over to you, "Put you belt on stupid, you know I can't get another ticket for no seatbelts" as I clicked mine into place. "I'm glad you stayed put like I told you to, at least you can take instructions right!"
 
Danielle looked at him with confusion on her face. "Well, I have to be in by 1am tonight. So we do have some time yet to do something if you want to" She then reached down and put her seat belt on like he instructed. "I'm not stupid. I usually put it on" She pulled her hair out of her eyes and then looked over at him as he drove the car. "I was getting bored just sitting in one spot at the club. I hope you don't do that again. I like it when I can walk around and talk to people while you work"...
 
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"OK, I know where we can go" and ten minutes later I am driving my car into my driveway and park by the garage. I shut down the beast and I get out, "well you coming in or staying there." I hold out my hand and you slide across the seat and get out on my side. I unlock the side door to the house and I take your hand and lead you inside.

I close the door and then take you into the livingroom and I turn on a small light and I direct you to the sofa. "Would you like anything, Chips, cheese and crackers, something to drink. I getting a water for me, how about you?"

I bend down and give your forhead a kiss and I give your ponytail a little tug.
 
Danielle gets out of his car and goes inside of his house. She sits down on the couch that he instructs her towards. "Um, sure, you could get me some chips and a soda if you have some" She said after he asked her what she wanted. He then kissed her forehead and tugged on her ponytail. She didn't think anything of it and just giggled and kissed him back. "You are so silly Tommy" She turned on the tv and began to watch Saturday Night Live. When he brought over her stuff she thanked him and then began to eat.
"Thank you sweetie" she then looked back at the tv set...
 
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"My pleasure", I say and sit down next to you and I turn the tv off. I slide my arm across your shoulders and I look at you and I bend in and kiss you hot and long on your warm moist lips. "I'm sorry I didn't pay attention to you tonight, but you got me so mad and I was real upset. Your little twerp of a brother didn't tell you I called twice and that made me sore too. I know that your family aren't totally in with the idea you are seeing me. Well that's your decision to, isn't it Danielle." I take a drink of my water and and eat a few chips.

"Danielle, why don't you tell me about you day at the mall, now that I have time to listen." I give you a smile and so you tell me about your day's activities. We are having a good time and You are relaxed and we do a little more kissing and I let my hand glide uder your new tank top to cup you young firm breast "Ummmmmmm, these are nice Danielle", and I pull you close and hold you tight.

"Oh NO", I shout standing up. "Come on Dannielle, it's late, I've got to get you home." I take your hand and kiss you again and we go out the side door and I lock it and we get into the beast and I start driving you home.

It's almost one-thirty am when we pulled up in front of your house and I could see figures in the windows watching and I took my time saying good night. Just remember these last hours honey. It was our time togrther, no one else's. I kissed you again and walked you up to the door and you went inside. I smilled all the way back to my car and all the way home.
 
Danielle pouted when Tommy turned the tv off. She was really getting into the tv show. It was one of her favorites. She was soon distracted though by his kiss and she leaned in allowing him to kiss her deeply. She always loved the way he kissed, he had such sensual lips.
"Well actually Tommy, my family never really had a problem with you. They thought you were cool but they think you are becoming a bit overwhelming lately" She shrugged and then giggled. "My brothers feel as though they have to protect me"
When he asked to hear about her day she told him all about and he seemed to listen intently. "I know you hate shopping but I would like it if you came to the mall with me sometime otherwise my brothers come with me"
She hated the realization that it was time to go. She wanted to stay here with him but knew that her parents would be waiting up for her so she nodded and got into the car with him again.
When they pulled up into the driveway she kissed him goodbye and then went inside. She watched as he got back into his car and left.
"I'm home, you didn't have to wait up for me" She said to her parents and brothers...
 
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The next morining I got up showered and cleand up around the house and did my Sunday chores. I called you about one o'clock on your cell and you answered right away. "Hi Danni, get a good nights rest, I hope so. Pick you up at two, OK with you?" ..... pause ..... You didn't answer right away and i could sense something was not right. "Is the a problem with me picking you up at two?" I asked, waiting for and answer.
 
Danielle had made plans with one of her friends that afternoon so when Tommy asked her if he could pick her up then she hesitated on the phone. "Um..well.." She then softly sighed and adjusted the phone on her ear better. "I actually told Jessica that I would go with her to see a movie this afternoon. I was actually on my way out the door" She then stopped and wondered what he was going to say...
 
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"Going to the movies....." I repeated,. "What happened last night when you went inside, I saw four sets of eyes watching us, Ma & Pa and brothers two. You were a half hour late, don't tell me nothing was said. Well then Good bye..... Call when you think you can spare the time. click

I hung up and closed my cell and turned it off. She wouldn't be able to call me back. I'll turn it on in an hour. That would be two-fifteen. I went to the kitchen and heated up some left over Pizza and a beer.

At two-fifteen I turned my cell back on.
 
Danielle sighed when he hung the phone up on her like that. She didn't want to tell him the truth. Her father told her that she had to slow down on seeing Tommy because he didn't like how she was home late all the time. Plus her brothers were complaining about him now too.
She kept trying to call him but he wouldn't answer. He must have turned his phone off or something, she thought.
It was almost 2:30pm and she tried to call him again. This time he answered. "Tommy, I need to tell you something. I have to slow down on seeing you. My dad was so angry at how late I was last night. I tried to tell him that it was only 30 minutes but he didn't care. Hes really mad right now"...
 
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"Dannielle, If he is mad, then I am livid. Slow down, what's he mean by slow down. Your'e in school and I don't think you're neglecting your studies, how's your grades, never told me................ I work two jobs.....what else does he wanT.....Your brothers, what's there story." I really was ticked off and maybe I shouldn't have said what came next.

"Tell, does the men in your family want to keep it in the family!!!!!!!!!
Slow down, you mean stop.........See you baby, do what papa says and listen to your brothers.............click.....

I shut the phone off and went in and streched out on the couch. Damn what a pain. Work hard and you still get stepped on, unless you step back.

The dark cloud moved over me as I lay there looking up at the ceiling. This was going to be one long week at work........ Well I guess I'll have to start looking for another girl. Maybe that new receptionist over at the lumber yard.

I fell asleep in a bad mood and woke up with an even worse attitude. It was four o'clock in the morning and I got up and showered and left for work, but first I went over and parked down the street from your house. It was still dark a five in the morning. I turned on my phone and there was messages there almost every hour up to eleven last night, All from Danielle.
 
Danielle was listening while Tommy began to rant angrily. "Tommy please..I.." But he kept cutting her off. He then told her that the men in the family probably just wanted her all to themselves and she sighed. "They do not! That is gross Tommy!" She felt tears threatening to fall when he suddenly hung up the phone.
She tried to call him all night but he wouldn't answer. She began to leave countless amounts of messages on his voicemail but there was never a response back.
That night she went to bed crying. She didn't know that at 5 in the morning he was parked outside her house. She was still asleep. It was her brother who saw him and woke her up to tell her.
She got out of bed and put on her robe and went outside. She knocked on the passenger car window. "What are you doing here?" She asked him pulling the robe over her chilled body tightly...
 
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I unlocked th car door and pushed it open, "Get in", I snapped. "What are you doing out in the street dressed like that. You really want your family pissed at me. Wow. What am I doing here? It's a public street and I guess I am allowed to be on it. Why here. I don't know." We sat there in silence and then the entire scene blew up. Your father came out in his robe, followed by your mother and then your older brother in just his jeans and all came up to the car.

Your mother was crying and telling your father to come back into the house and not to start any trouble and your brother was yellinf something at me I could not understand. I turned to you, "Danielle, you go back in with them for now. but you think on what I said last night. Look at your crazy brother there. and you say I'm sick. Think about it. Think about it all Danielle. Now go before there is any more trouble. I want to kiss you, but you go now." I reached across you and opened the door and I rubbed your leg as I move back to sit up, I smiled at you as you waved and walked back inside with you mother. Your father and brother stood there still shouting as I started up the beast and drove off down the street and turned the corner as a police car drove up in front of your house.

I drove to work and parked by the construction trailer and opened up. Started the coffee and began signing on the computers for a busy work day.
 
Danielle couldn't understand why Tommy was suddenly acting this way. His whole personality was starting to change and it scared her. He was very angry at her brothers which he never was before and now he kept pushing her away.
"Tommy, what is wrong with you?!" She shouted in the car next to him. "I can't believe that you think my brothers want to have sex with me. You are out of your mind!"
She could hear her father and her two brothers yelling so she finally got out of the car and went back inside. Her robe blew open from the wind and her nipples were hardened against the fabric of her pajamas. She watched as Tommy sped away fast, then she stormed into the house.
"Why did you have to go yelling like that?" She asked Dylan and Tristan, her two brothers...
 
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I timed my lunch when I knew you had your break too. I dialed her number and Danielle answered on the second ring.

"Hello Danielle, this is Tommy. Can you talk now. Pleasr just listen. I know you have classes this afternoon so afterwards, come down to the construction site and we can go get something to eat and talk. We have to talk and I know you need to go to class. Everything will be OK. See you then at around five. Love you. Danielle, Bye."
 
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