Contributors to my story...

[Forsaken One]

You guys probably get a lot of this. But since someone suggested I do this, I'll just go aheah anyway.

I've got a story on chyoo (as if you didn't guess that already) 'Mom's Massive Melons'. It's a incest story (obviously) coupled with slight breast fetish (Yeah I know, you figured that out too) and some blackmail (that one you probably didn't guess).

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hey guys, jake just added a thread to my story. jus though I'd give you guys a heads up, since i always enjoy his threads.

plus. it'll attract some fresh blood to my story. hopefully, people will get the urge to contribute. I'd put up threads myself, but i just cant seem to get myself to write.

maybe in a few days...

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To anyone reading this, feel free to write for it. I pretty much approve anything except gay/bisexual male themes. gotta have some boundaries.

 

[gystex]

I've always felt that having a thread on the board where one makes announcements about one's own stories is a good idea. Regrettably, I don't "do" incest, so I won't be one of your contributors. But I do hope you drum up some business, so to speak.

 

[niceguy2002tim]

Ditto

The same goes for me. I don't do incest either. however welcome to the Chyoo message boards, hope this works for ya. Good to have a new person here. I've heard of your story, but was never compelled to read it. Again, the whole incest is not appealing to me.

Anyway, good luck with your story and future contributions.

-Tim (niceguy2002tim)

 

[Forsaken One]

uhm.. i guess i shouldn't bug you guys about contributing but I'm pretty busy myself and I can't seem to get much time to create new threads.

So if anyone is interested in big tits or mom-son incest maybe you can check out my story and see if you would like to add to it.

I do not allow auto-approving of threads, but i generally aporve all threads. Plus i never deny a thread without giving my reason. and even then, i just ask the contributor to edit what he already wrote.

And by the way, I also edit the work myself. All contributions submitted udergo a rigorous (though not always right) gramar and spelling check. courtesy of me. =)

 

[Forsaken One]

uhm.. i guess i shouldn't bug you guys about contributing but I'm pretty busy myself and I can't seem to get much time to create new threads.

So if anyone is interested in big tits or mom-son incest maybe you can check out my story and see if you would like to add to it.

I do not allow auto-approving of threads, but i generally aporve all threads. Plus i never deny a thread without giving my reason. and even then, i just ask the contributor to edit what he already wrote.

And by the way, I also edit the work myself. All contributions submitted udergo a rigorous (though not always right) grammar and spelling check. courtesy of me. =)

 

[WattsIsnaim]

While I'm at it, I'll plug my story

This is the first story I have started on CHYOO, but I have done a few threads to other stories here and there. It called, "Meeting Your Girlfriend's Mom." The main character is 18, and inorder for him to get anywhere with his GF he needs to be tested and/or educated by her mom and/or her mom's friends. The mom just wants her daugher to have her first time be as good as posible.

ANYWHO, I would apriciate any and all contributions. Meeting Your Girlfriend's Mom

Even if you don't add a thread, I would apriciate any feedback you can give me.

 

[Dr. Tentakelliebe]

uhm.. i guess i shouldn't bug you guys about contributing but I'm pretty busy myself and I can't seem to get much time to create new threads.

So if anyone is interested in big tits or mom-son incest maybe you can check out my story and see if you would like to add to it.

I do not allow auto-approving of threads, but i generally aporve all threads. Plus i never deny a thread without giving my reason. and even then, i just ask the contributor to edit what he already wrote.

And by the way, I also edit the work myself. All contributions submitted udergo a rigorous (though not always right) grammar and spelling check. courtesy of me. =)

No no it's fine to ask, I encourage all to do it

and you have a really fair and active editor's aditude I think we all appriate that.

I personally never let any of my own works go without at least a quick scan by msworks(ox-E-more-ron of the century)

although I too am not one to "do incess," however if that is where the other authors take one of my stories I'm cool with it, I just don't write stories that are specifically that, so I will have a look and if the muses see fit to give me an idea I will pass it on.

 

[Dr. Tentakelliebe]

just got done reading the first page and i'm a bit confused by it

 

[Forsaken One]

just got done reading the first page and i'm a bit confused by it

confused how?

'cause i've gotten a relatively low rating on that particular thread. maybe you could help me make it better.

 

[Dr. Tentakelliebe]

I could tell if this

Immediately, the hard-on tenting the sheet covering you tells you exactly what. Your naked mom lying beside you, letting your hands grope her unbelievably large breasts.

was a day dream or evidence of a previous incessuous relationship

ps sorry my spelling is horrible

 

[Forsaken One]

uhm. well the line previous to that asks 'what could be better' and then that line goes on to answer it.

but yes, i do see your point. it could be taken as if there already was a prior relationship. although i thought the line after the one you quoted explained that it was just a... wish or daydream. but i guess i'm looking at from a writer's point of view. i'll see waht i could do to change that.

by the way, were you the one who asked me to edit out the 'hairy assshole part'?

 

[Dr. Tentakelliebe]

*chuckle* uh nope hadn't read that part, but an interesting phrase.

 

[Forsaken One]

*chuckle* uh nope hadn't read that part, but an interesting phrase.

ok. if you say so. anyway to whoever it was, i already edited it out.

 

[Forsaken One]

ok. to the guy who asked me to edit out the 'hairy asshole' part, I swear I've taken it out now.

I could've sworn that i edited out everything the first time. either the guy snuck it back in (w/c i think is unlikely) or i just missed that one 'hairy' (w/c is very likely since it's hard to concentrate on editing when what you're reading is erotica, and viewing porn at the same time may i add.)

at any rate, it's gone now. so thanks for pointing it out and thanks for giving me a 5 even though you didn' like the 'hairy asshole' part. it's gone now. i promise.

 

[Forsaken One]

New additions.

I'd just like to say that there are several new aditions to my story.

And i'd also like to thank darren j for contributing again.

 

[Forsaken One]

there are now several new threads to the story.

plus, i got back to writing some threads. I'm trying to make it like the choose your own adverture books. so if you reach these particular threads, NO QUICKIES. sorry to be so strict, but that's just how it is. anyway ,there are so many other paths you probably wont come acroos mine.

 

[Forsaken One]

I've Added a few more threads to my story. it's still not as deep as i woud hope but it's getting there.

To anyone reading this, feel free to write for it. I pretty much approve anything except gay/bisexual male themes. gotta have some boundaries.

 

[Forsaken One]

there hasnt been much updates here. I'm just a little too busy to write right now. but i just brought this thread back to get some interest back into my story. you never know, maybe someone will be reading it for the first time and decide to write a thread for it.

 

[Forsaken One]

I would just like to say that i've been very busy the past couple of weeks.

I thought that after the holidays, I'd be fresh enough to start writing again. I was, trouble is I didn't have time. Schedules kept changing and things kept bogging down.

Anyway, I hope i'll be able to start writing again after a few days or so.

 

[Forsaken One]

hey guys, jake just added a thread to my story. jus though I'd give you guys a heads up, since i always enjoy his threads.

plus. it'll attract some fresh blood to my story. hopefully, people will get the urge to contribute. I'd put up threads myself, but i just cant seem to get myself to write.

maybe in a few days...