I recently posted a short First Time story, which I thought was kind of cute. It is very light on the sex, though. It has gotten more comments than many of my other stories, and I've been surprised by the sharp divergence in the feedback, ranging from "I thought the story was well done.... Really really cool. This is the first time I've ever left a comment here but you've earned it" and "The most intriguing story I've read in a while" to "Just bad" and "total rubbish." I find it interesting that this story got such an intense response.(Note--one commenter pointed out a minor error, and I have submitted a revised version to fix it and a couple of typos, but I don't think that is the source of the hostility)
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