Considering a Story...

[SteamyAsia]

I am new to this site, and to erotic writing, and am planning on writing a short story to submit based on a breeding/slave fantasy. The story actually is a fantasy of mine that involves the forced breeding of a wife and daughter, where the women can make a selection to voluntarily be bred or be forced bred in conditions where sperm competition (i.e. multiple fit men) is the norm and female orgasm a necessity. The women are monitored and then bred for 2 days when they ovulate. They will all finish the breeding session pregnant - and if not, are bred again the next month. I think it is an exciting story and possibly a 'series' and am going to go about starting to write the first chapter. Any thoughts, suggestions are most welcome as this is my first time

 

[PennLady]

It's not something I'd read, but there are tons of readers out there and I've seen a lot of stories on a fetish like this. If you want to write it, then go ahead.

 

[AMoveableBeast]

It sounds interesting and arousing. As far as suggestions, let me only say that such stories work best when there is a strong psychological element to them. Explore your fantasy. Find the center of it, what makes it so enticing to you, and share a bit of that with your reader. Things born of real passion and emotion are rarely disappointing.