Conscious of the kick ass sister (role-play)

[RealxPassionx]

This could be either a four-piece (mfmf), three-piece (mfm) or a 1 on 1 role-play.

I'm looking for a female with decent writing skills for a long-running role-play.

It's the story of a brother and sister. There parents passed away a few years back. Since then, the sister has become the woman of the house and tasked with being both a sister and mother to her younger brother. The brother doesn't have much confidence and is like a lightning rod for being bullied. Several punks have pretended to be her brothers dotting friends to get into her good graces only to sleep with her. Unfortunately for them, she's a lot smarter than they thought. She makes sure she puts them in there place and kicks there asses.

Her brother befriends a young man at school who the sister, after what other boys have tried to do, is skeptical of the young mans intentions. She gets to know him and realizes that he's genuine in his compassion towards her brother. It pricks her heart to see her brother make a friend. The young man looks after the brother at school and casually. He becomes like a big brother to him. The sister can rest easier knowing that there's someone else taking care of her brother when she's not around.

Overtime, the young man and the sister become close and form a strong attraction. They want to take it further, but they're the only people who the brothers trusts. They feel that it would betraying someone they both care for. But then again, maybe the brother would be happy if they were together.

A potential subplot could be the brother finding a girlfriend once his friend has bestowed him with confidence, in which case there could be a second female role-player, or if one feels comfortable with two female roles.

This could be a three or four-piece role-play (brother. Sister. Young man. Potential girlfriend) or a 1 on 1 juggling of characters.

I'm open to tweaking the story upon discussion if you have suggestions.

 

[IlsaBlackbone]

Their. As in she kicks their asses.

A wonderfully therapeutic past time by the way.

However why would a dominant woman wish to (eventually) partner with a dominant male? That one confuses me. I don't think that's a dynamic that would work in real life, let alone a role play. There'd be a background of tension and suspicion (on her part at least) that wouldn't go away.

Unless of course the brother's friend subordinates himself to the sister. Then you have a proper story.

The brother becomes the omega (as well as any future mate of his). The sister becomes the true alpha of the group, with the male friend of her brother her subordinate. Thereby the universe is in proper balance.

 

[RealxPassionx]

Their. As in she kicks their asses.

A wonderfully therapeutic past time by the way.

However why would a dominant woman wish to (eventually) partner with a dominant male? That one confuses me. I don't think that's a dynamic that would work in real life, let alone a role play. There'd be a background of tension and suspicion (on her part at least) that wouldn't go away.

Unless of course the brother's friend subordinates himself to the sister. Then you have a proper story.

The brother becomes the omega (as well as any future mate of his). The sister becomes the true alpha of the group, with the male friend of her brother her subordinate. Thereby the universe is in proper balance.

I think you're overthinking it. It's not about power dynamics. I came up with this an the antitheses to role-plays where naive mothers sleep with there sons bully. I know it's just fiction, but I can't help it that that concept horrifies me. Maybe I'm too sensitive or I have a hard time putting my personal ethics aside for a story.

I agree that the sister would be suspicious of the young mans intentions given her past experiences. However, she would eventually realize that he's genuine in his fondness for her younger brother. Now, she'll have someone she can trust to look after her brother as well. The brothers well being would be there common welfare, which would bring them closer.

 

[IlsaBlackbone]

I don't delve in the fascist community of requiring single space behind periods. That's a level of inanity I never wish to occupy.

But their, there, they're - that kills it. This isn't Russian whereby we need to worry about grammatical gender with nouns. Please!

And it's always about power dynamics. Good luck on your venture.

A good story ought to stretch and affront, prick, tickle, confound, proselytize, offend, provide a counter balance, confront, offend and otherwise kick the juices out of ethics. Or it's boring.

Most (note the caveat please) people on this site would get a raging case of the vapors if in real life they were handed a crop/cane/whip and told to lay a good and proper set of stripes on the backside of another. Yet time and time again - that's what the voyeuristic public wants to read. And fantasize about as they shudder poring over each and every word of how the heroine shuddered and wept inside as the lash tore into her pure ivory skin (oops - yummy thought there, must save for later).