I've got an idea for a short story involving incest and anal.
Its 3rd person from the brothers point of view and shows him walking in on his sister whilst she is crying about something her mum has said. He tries to comfort her but his male urges take over and the end up having anal sex. During this the father walks in and caches them. The next few weeks are hard as they try to explain to a disgusted father without telling there over protective mum.
I've made up a quick draft from half way trough the story if anybody interested to see my writing style or the story in more detail.
He held her tightly and rubbed her back. He knew how cruel mum could get sometimes and he was feeling her pain. But this was not the only think he was feeling. As he held he young body against his chest with her sweet scent filling his nostrils he was becoming unmistakeably more and more attracted to her.
She gave a small hiccup which brought him out of his thoughts. She continued to sob into his shoulder which was now stained with tears. By now all sorts of wild things were running through mikes mind. He kept questioning and daring himself. An army of What Ifs and Maybes invaded his better judgement.
“she's your sister!”
“But you haven't scored for so long!”
“Your related!”
“But she's perfect!”
“she's only 18!”
“But she's very mature!”
“you will be taking advantage of her!”
“you'll be consoling her! And it it will only happen once. She can keep a secret!”
“Yeah!” He thought.
“Its only a one off!” His mind was made up.
“shhh.” He whispered and slid his hand down her back. He kept going until his palm was lightly squeezing her left cheek. She stopped sobbing and stiffened in slight confusion. Pulling her off his shoulder and removing his hand from her buttocks, he gripped her by both shoulders and looked into her watery eyes.
“I'm here for you” He whispered. They looked at each other for a moment before there lips slowly met. She lent back slightly as his kiss was deeper than she expected. As there lips locked together his hands slipped from her shoulders and down to her hands. They locked together for a moment until her hands slowly lifted to his face and pulled him in, forcing her tongue through his lips.
Now his hands had slipped over her hips and were sliding there way down the back of her trousers. He gripped her ass cheeks from inside and pulled her into a closer embrace. Her erect nipples were now lightly brushing his top which sent small shots of pleasure trough her nerves and to her vagina. One of his hands slipped out of her trousers and began to unbutton her shirt.
“No! We cant... I haven't...” she whispered between kisses. He stopped kissing her and rested his forehead on hers.
“shhh.” He whispered again and put his free hand under her. Lifting her slightly to allow for more room his submerged hand slipped inside her knickers and gently stroked her ass hole. She gave him and understanding look before covering his lips with hers once more.
Any comments or criticism will be noted.
Its 3rd person from the brothers point of view and shows him walking in on his sister whilst she is crying about something her mum has said. He tries to comfort her but his male urges take over and the end up having anal sex. During this the father walks in and caches them. The next few weeks are hard as they try to explain to a disgusted father without telling there over protective mum.
I've made up a quick draft from half way trough the story if anybody interested to see my writing style or the story in more detail.
He held her tightly and rubbed her back. He knew how cruel mum could get sometimes and he was feeling her pain. But this was not the only think he was feeling. As he held he young body against his chest with her sweet scent filling his nostrils he was becoming unmistakeably more and more attracted to her.
She gave a small hiccup which brought him out of his thoughts. She continued to sob into his shoulder which was now stained with tears. By now all sorts of wild things were running through mikes mind. He kept questioning and daring himself. An army of What Ifs and Maybes invaded his better judgement.
“she's your sister!”
“But you haven't scored for so long!”
“Your related!”
“But she's perfect!”
“she's only 18!”
“But she's very mature!”
“you will be taking advantage of her!”
“you'll be consoling her! And it it will only happen once. She can keep a secret!”
“Yeah!” He thought.
“Its only a one off!” His mind was made up.
“shhh.” He whispered and slid his hand down her back. He kept going until his palm was lightly squeezing her left cheek. She stopped sobbing and stiffened in slight confusion. Pulling her off his shoulder and removing his hand from her buttocks, he gripped her by both shoulders and looked into her watery eyes.
“I'm here for you” He whispered. They looked at each other for a moment before there lips slowly met. She lent back slightly as his kiss was deeper than she expected. As there lips locked together his hands slipped from her shoulders and down to her hands. They locked together for a moment until her hands slowly lifted to his face and pulled him in, forcing her tongue through his lips.
Now his hands had slipped over her hips and were sliding there way down the back of her trousers. He gripped her ass cheeks from inside and pulled her into a closer embrace. Her erect nipples were now lightly brushing his top which sent small shots of pleasure trough her nerves and to her vagina. One of his hands slipped out of her trousers and began to unbutton her shirt.
“No! We cant... I haven't...” she whispered between kisses. He stopped kissing her and rested his forehead on hers.
“shhh.” He whispered again and put his free hand under her. Lifting her slightly to allow for more room his submerged hand slipped inside her knickers and gently stroked her ass hole. She gave him and understanding look before covering his lips with hers once more.
Any comments or criticism will be noted.
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