Confused words about "Okay I Created a Monster"

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http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=101178

Okay, I Created a Monster by BigFoot15


I've been wanting to say a word or two about this story for a while but have been discussing it with others over time and I forgot to make a thread for it. Anyway. I am confused about the story. At one point the wife pretends that a stranger is her husband and that the real hubby is a pick up. She invites real hubby to have sex with her and pretenc husband, but soon has pretend husband ask real hubby to leave since he and his wife want to be alone and they don't want a pick up around anymore. Hours later she comes back their room and has sex with real hubby and stays in room with hin all the next day. She won't say answer any questions of what she was doing or did after real hubby left. If you are confused read the story and it at least will help you understand what I am trying to describe.
Anyway I asked the writer why she did that but got no response. I had two reasons I thought so but I thought of a couple more later. One: she was becoming a bitch slut and was trying humiliate him. Two: She was just playing a game, that he incourged her to do, but got carried away. Three: She was trying to teach a lesson. I forget what the fourth reason was.
While talking this over with a couple of other readers, one was postive she was trying to teach him a lesson and another reader didn't blame me for being confused since the fault probably lays with BigFoot15 for finishing the story too fast. He didn't clarfy as much as he could have. Could be since the wifr never explained the why of it and that is a technique sometimes used by writers when they don't want to say or can't think of something to say.
I personally think it was to teach him a lesson that would go along with her wanted to have sex with him even after having sex for hours with the stranger. Or did she have it for hours? He doesn't know what she did after he left and so we don't either.


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TT,
in 20 words or less, what the f*** are you trying to say or ask?

It's not that confusing a story, nor tremendously deep, for analysis, and it's not yours.

So if it's so weird or confusing for you, why post about it?

Why post in prose more confusing that the crappy story itself? Give it a 1 and move on.

 

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TT,
in 20 words or less, what the f*** are you trying to say or ask?

It's not that confusing a story, nor tremendously deep, for analysis, and it's not yours.

So if it's so weird or confusing for you, why post about it?

Why post in prose more confusing that the crappy story itself? Give it a 1 and move on.

I post to see if anyone else has any ideas. I like discusing stories. And some stories just stick with me rather I like them or if I understand ever thing about them or not. As to my words being more confusing than the story, Well, sorry about that. And I kinda hope the writer may see this and decide to say something. I know probably not but it could happen.


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Too much analyzing??

Meant to answer this a couple of days ago, but here it is now:
Like to discuss stories my own or those written by others.
Yes, some times I do over analyze some of these stories but that’s the way I have been trained you might say. In high school and collage and even now on the internet, as I learn to write better, I have been taught to take apart stories. To look at them deeper. Now after all that its a mind set, I do it automatically.
However even with that I believe some stories here on Liteerotica are not just sexual fantasies. They are good, solid, entertaining, beyond the sex, stories. They just happen to contain sex scenes.
K.K. has some of these stories as does Patricia51 and to a lesser degree some of Msseminolewind’s are that way. There a couple of other such writers but I can’t think of their names right now. But each of these have good, mostly well, written stories that entertain beyond the sex. Well worth reading.
I believe that well written stories should have certain characteristics even if they are sexual fantasies. One is consistence, in other words a character doesn’t change part way through the story without some reason to change. Or a nephew turns into a brother half way through the story. That type of thing.
But if anyone disagrees with that or is too lazy to want to read a critique of the stories here they don’t have to read what I say. As I understand it this forum is for feedback to the stories that appear on Liteerotica some of my feedback just happens to be a bit more involved than others. But than again I have received some involved criticism
so I am not the only one that does this.


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What is it about the 'monster' story that makes you want to analyze it? Does it have hidden merits? I understand wanting to look deeper into one's favorite authors, but I gather that's not the case, here.

J>

 

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What is it about the 'monster' story that makes you want to analyze it? Does it have hidden merits? I understand wanting to look deeper into one's favorite authors, but I gather that's not the case, here.

J>

In this case I am curious what was in the wirter's mind. In other words why did he have her play that strange game. Since he won't respond I have to see if others have the same mind as I do about it or might come up with an answer that might make more sense. Its not that important but at the same time as I said I am curious. And as I write my own stories, found at http://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=233490 , I could learn something.


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