Confession as Submission?

MiriamL

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Anyone who's read my posts knows that I enjoy scenes of erotic submission with supernatural overtones...even more so if we can throw in an incest angle!

So an idea I had recently would involve all my favourite elements...a 40something suburban mother making a VERY SLOW long drawn out confession to her 19 year old son, after his discovery of some old photographs taken during her initiation into a fetish cult just five years ago.

Its very important that all the characters be very ordinary looking people you would see everyday at the supermarket or the public library.

Could there be anything sillier than the mother figure described as if she was a 28 year old porn star????:mad::eek:

Ah no...how about some real people for change...all the better when the flipside of their secret lives is rolled over and revealed, in all its shocking intensity!:kiss:


Hey, didnt you see her at the donut shop...driving off in a Toyota SUV to pick up her her husband's suits at the drycleaners???;)

Now, imagine her sitting down with her teenage son in the quiet space of the family's living room, lit by two or three candles. Its 10pm at night, when the house is silent, her husband away on business...and it is NOW that she must make her CONFESSION.

The photos he found do not lie...yes thats his own well mannered mother stripped nude before the altar in just shoes and pearls, the silky fleshtones of her back and hips towards the camera as she kneels in submission!
 
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That could make for a very arousing read.

I enjoy the device of "secrets uncovered."
 
So just what is a fetish CULT anyway? A few people have asked in PMs, so I should start off by saying its very different from a fetish CLUB.

A club is a gathering of people meeting to enjoy an unusual sexual affinity in a fun and frivolous way.

A cult on the other hand, is a far more serious affair in which the fetish is given an almost religious reverence...almost as if it were an icon of worship.

Religion and sexuality are very closely related in that they both about creating rituals of communion.

As an example, this mother and son speak in a very hush-hush interview about their obsessive need to BOND physically to create a more perfect spiritual union...and dont we LOVE it!:kiss::kiss::kiss:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GktR9fRI3BI

What could be better for the wife and mother in question playing the starring role in my story. An initiation into a cult of sexual submission is exactly what she needed, in light of her husband's lack of interest in her strange fantasy world.

An initiation which has come back to haunt her...as she is now compelled to make her CONFESSION, and turn to face her own increasingly curious boy!
 
Have you ever experienced a conversation that felt like MIND CONTROL...even though the other person did nothing but ask questions?

From the point of view of an older women who enjoys the role, this is the most delicious form of sexual submission.

Submission meaning that you voluntarily allow someone else to control you.

Yes, its a drama made all that more intense by its paradoxical nature.
 
We have a mother who was in a fetish cult five years ago and it would be silly to dress her like a 28 year old porn star? :rolleyes: It be silly to have dress frankly like anything else. At least how real 28 year old porn stars dress not how they dress in the movies.
 
We have a mother who was in a fetish cult five years ago and it would be silly to dress her like a 28 year old porn star? It be silly to have her dress frankly like anything else.
The difference between what is called 'beautiful' and what is called 'hot' is very interesting to me.

Some people obviously think purple eye shadow is HOT...but if you applied some to a marble sculpture of an ancient Greek goddess you would destroy her BEAUTY.

http://www.art-prints-on-demand.com/kunst/antonio_canova_1577/paulina_bonaparte_1780_1825_v_hi.jpg

Its far more powerful for me to have a beautiful character do something HOT than look HOT.

And that goes for beautiful BOYS too!:kiss:
 
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Very erotic plot. Have you got anyone to write this yet?
 
The point I was making was that a 40 year old woman five years out of a fetish cult is functionally a 28 year old porn star. That's how her head works. She'd probably dress how porn stars dress in real life not like they dress on set but still. I wouldn't expect her to be all covered up. The idea of this woman not wearing heels is laughable. They might not be see through platform stillettos but unless she's exercising this woman is not rocking tennis shoes. Her hair isn't up in a bun or cut short (most likely anyway).
 
Well, Sean, I'm not so sure that I agree. I love this sort of story - I've written one just recently. The point here is that the mother is confessing to her son ONLY because he discovered the photos. The implication is that she had left the cult a while back, but underneath, she still has a need to be submissive. Perhaps the cult (we can define that any way we like) didn't suit her, hubby doesn't cut it - but maybe son can fill the gap (so to speak :devil:). She's dressing like a "40 year old suburban housewife" in an attempt to exorcise the memories - but they won't be exorcised!

Yes, this has definite possibilities. And possibilities that could extend outwards; older sister was also a cult member. Mother contacts other ex-members at son's insistence to join them for a "debriefing" session. I like it! ;)
 
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I like this basic idea. I don't do incest, so I tried to imagine the step-son who is living off the tit so to speak, perhaps enrolled in college, using the revelations about the step-mom's life prior to going "born-again virgin" and marrying naive dad to blackmail her to stop being a mom, i.e. pick up after self, get job, be an adult, with sex added. Perhaps sheis not sexually satisfied by the dad anyway. Just my thoughts.
 
The point I was making was that a 40 year old woman five years out of a fetish cult is functionally a 28 year old porn star. That's how her head works.
Why?

From my point of view the woman's assumed normality and demure facade is very much a part of the submissive aesthetic.

And of course, there are many people belonging to swapping and swinging clubs who look exactly like accountants, businessmen, bankers and church going librarians.:eek:
 
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The point here is that the mother is confessing to her son ONLY because he discovered the photos. The implication is that she had left the cult a while back, but underneath, she still has a need to be submissive. Perhaps the cult didn't suit her, hubby doesn't cut it - but maybe son can fill the gap (so to speak :devil:).
You understand perfectly...yay!

Of course, her marriage was one of convenience. Most men have no clue as to their wife's secret desires...the need to exorcise a repressed guilt by turning it over to another's control.

The need to stand in silence, nude and attentive by candlelight...in the centre of her own family living room....with her pantyhose pulled down and twisted around her ankles...restricting her movements...her black pumps pressed tightly together...her hands bound with silken cord behind her head...and around her neck!:cattail:

What a delicious contrast, with the image presented just last week, of the well mannered wife and mother handing out muffins at the school bake sale!;)


http://28.media.tumblr.com/tumblr_llpp0e0MZE1qhalefo1_500.jpg
 
Confession as Submission

Hi everyone. Following an interesting discussion on this thread, and with great input, support and encouragement from MiriamL, I have now completed a story that appears in http://www.literotica.com/s/a-new-domination, for anyone who may be interested

This has now been posted in BDSM under the title, "A New Domination", and even this early there are requests for a sequel. That may happen, although I'm not sure when as I am engaged on another story. But we'll see.

Regards

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