Confessing wife’s stories

[bemalol2]

I wish somebody could write a story where wife/girlfriend confesses to her husband/boyfriend.

Story should be in the form of conversation.

certainly, it should not be like "honey i just fucked the guy on the bus stop". Wife should be reluctant to tell the truth and try to avoid details and may be even lie.
it is certainly a plus if lady is 25-35 years old and not an easy woman. Actually I prefer respectable and attractive, wealthy and exquisite women to be taken by somebody who never deserved them...

 

[dirtycarol]

Maybe I'm writing something you would like but, I"M IN DESPRATE NEED OF AN EDITOR. I've contacted several with no luck.

 

[bemalol2]

English is not my first language, but I still offer you my assistance.
Send me what you have, and I will let you know what I think.

 

[BedtimeStories77]

Well, the story idea is actually pretty good.

DirtyCarol, you're lucky that Bemalol said he'd edit your work for you, because (IMO, at least) it's rude to hijack someone's story idea in the Story Ideas board asking for an editor. There's an Editor's Forum on Lit.

Also, Bemalol, it's a violation of Lit's rules to post your E-mail addy.




Back to the story idea... i may have to think up some things for this idea. i like it. i've never written a story that was basically all dialogue. i think that would be a fun challenge. As is, i love adding a lot of dialogue in my stories!

 

[dirtycarol]

Well, the story idea is actually pretty good.

DirtyCarol, you're lucky that Bemalol said he'd edit your work for you, because (IMO, at least) it's rude to hijack someone's story idea in the Story Ideas board asking for an editor. There's an Editor's Forum on Lit.

Also, Bemalol, it's a violation of Lit's rules to post your E-mail addy.




Back to the story idea... i may have to think up some things for this idea. i like it. i've never written a story that was basically all dialogue. i think that would be a fun challenge. As is, i love adding a lot of dialogue in my stories!

My story is already written and is'nt EXACTLY what he wants but, close enough to be interesting. The story has been written for several weeks now waiting for an editor to reply! I'll post in the editors forum and try to get one. You see, I didn't hi-jack anyone's story idea, I just thought he would like to read mine. PM me with your e-mail and I'll send it to you also for your opinion.

BTW...bemalol2 had my story within 5 minutes of his 2nd posting.

 

[snoopercharmbrights]

... You see, I didn't hi-jack anyone's story idea, ...

If anybody posts an idea in this forum it is open for any author to use it. It is in no way hijacking to use such a suggestion.

 

[bemalol2]

My story is already written and is'nt EXACTLY what he wants but, close enough to be interesting. The story has been written for several weeks now waiting for an editor to reply! I'll post in the editors forum and try to get one. You see, I didn't hi-jack anyone's story idea, I just thought he would like to read mine. PM me with your e-mail and I'll send it to you also for your opinion.

BTW...bemalol2 had my story within 5 minutes of his 2nd posting.

Dirtycarol sent me her story and I confirm that. By the way, Dirtycarol you should know that
I LIKED IT!!!

 

[BedtimeStories77]

...You see, I didn't hi-jack anyone's story idea...

If anybody posts an idea in this forum it is open for any author to use it. It is in no way hijacking to use such a suggestion.

And never once did i say that. i KNOW posted story ideas are open game. i never implied that hijacking a thread, which i thought was happening when i thought it was an OPENED request for an editor or someone else's thread, was "hijacking a story".