complicated story idea

[tdcolt44]

okay here it is, a wife is seen having an affair by her husband. He is outraged so he decides to impregnate his wife's lover's wife. He fucks her and gets her pregnant then begins to have an affair of his own with someone new. His wife finds out and leaves him, so now he is "together" with the woman who had his child and his new lover. In the end he gets them both pregnant

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

okay here it is, a wife is seen having an affair by her husband. He is outraged so he decides to impregnate his wife's lover's wife. He fucks her and gets her pregnant then begins to have an affair of his own with someone new. His wife finds out and leaves him, so now he is "together" with the woman who had his child and his new lover. In the end he gets them both pregnant

His wife has a lot of gall to leave him over a revenge affair, but it might work. There are certainly bitches enough to do shit like that.

 

[capecodmercury]

okay here it is, a wife is seen having an affair by her husband. He is outraged so he decides to impregnate his wife's lover's wife. He fucks her and gets her pregnant then begins to have an affair of his own with someone new. His wife finds out and leaves him, so now he is "together" with the woman who had his child and his new lover. In the end he gets them both pregnant

It could be done, but it would take a lot of work to make the characters appealing. Who would the readers be rooting for and identifying with. The wife who had the affair doesn't seem to be very palatable. First she has the affair and then leaves when the husband does the same. The husband also seems like a jerk if his idea of getting even is to impregnate the other guy's wife. What did she do to him?

The only way I could see it working would be to tweak it slightly. The idea of a revenge affair is ok (I've used it myself) but what if it turned into a mutual affair from which the pregnancy was a mutually planned or unplanned occurence. Then when you add in the new lover you have the potential for a nice love triangle.

 

[Texguy84]

It could be done, but it would take a lot of work to make the characters appealing. Who would the readers be rooting for and identifying with. The wife who had the affair doesn't seem to be very palatable. First she has the affair and then leaves when the husband does the same. The husband also seems like a jerk if his idea of getting even is to impregnate the other guy's wife. What did she do to him?

The only way I could see it working would be to tweak it slightly. The idea of a revenge affair is ok (I've used it myself) but what if it turned into a mutual affair from which the pregnancy was a mutually planned or unplanned occurence. Then when you add in the new lover you have the potential for a nice love triangle.

Hmm... if you want to make the characters a little more sympathetic, you could have the wife's lover (would a male mistress be a mister?) be infertile or something, and his affair with the first man's wife may have been partially a result of her comforting him because of his frustration at not being able to sire a child (for the sake of discussion, the wife and her mister (Mr. Mister) are friends or have some social bond outside of the regular neighborhood order. Maybe they are both model train hobbyists or something, we'll also assume that Mr. Mister doesn't KNOW he's infertile, only that he's failed so far to impregnate his wife).

The husband (Mr Hubby) has his affair with Mr. Mister's wife (Mrs. Mister) in secret, and impregnates her. Mrs. Mister is finding the secret affair a huge turn-on for her, and partially as a cause of that, and partially because she feels bad for cheating on her husband, she begins to bed him more often. Mrs. Mister becomes pregnant, Mr. Mister, due to the timing, has cause to think it was because of him. Hubby gets his revenge (sorta), and Mr. and Mrs. Mister get a child of their very own, because Mrs. Hubby cheated on Mr. Hubby with Mr. Mister.

Not sure where Miss Mistress comes in, but then, I'm tired from trying to keep all those names straight. Could be that Mr. Hubby picked her up at a bar and they hit it off.