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BlackSnake

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Couple 1:
Stay at home wife, not a very good homemaker. Holds out on her husband, wanting him to take her by force. The husband works long hours, complains about the mess of the house-he makes the mess for her to clean up, but she doesn't. He wants to have sex with her, but doesn't want to pressure her into it. Both are miserable.

Couple/Family 2:
Husband sleeps around and goes after everything with a pussy. The wife has an active libido; she discreetly has sex with all her friends’ husbands and their sons. The son has a thing for his mother.

Couple/Family 3:
Husband and wife are swingers, but often will take in a third, which often mean the wife gets two cocks.

Couple/Family 4:
Husband and wife are also swingers, but often have one-on-ones with other people. Daughter has a thing for her father; the mother knows but keeps it to her self.

The 4 couple/families summer vacation in Brazil along the Sao Francisco River and the Atlantic Ocean. What was supposed to be an exotic vacation turned out to be more of a rustic outing. No electricity, running water or phones. There location is so remote that transportation or communication would not return until the end of summer.

Their caretakers are a local tribe who provide them with food and protection. The tribes’ people don't speak the language of the visitors, and main stay out of sight, except during meals.

For the most part they are comfortable.
 
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nice set of characters in search of a plot ( though wife #1 seems a tad too complex- are both attributes needed? )
 
sirhugs said:
nice set of characters in search of a plot ( though wife #1 seems a tad too complex- are both attributes needed? )

Maybe not, I want to show that she wants her husband to take the lead during sex, and not to be passive.
 
BlackSnake said:
Maybe not, I want to show that she wants her husband to take the lead during sex, and not to be passive.

I can see how their mutual frustration due to lack of communication could be believable, and set up sexual surrogacy or cheating plot lines.
 
BlackSnake said:
Couple 1:
Stay at home wife, not a very good homemaker. Holds out on her husband, wanting him to take her by force. The husband works long hours, complains about the mess of the house-he makes the mess for her to clean up, but she doesn't. He wants to have sex with her, but doesn't want to pressure her into it. Both are miserable.

Couple/Family 2:
Husband sleeps around and goes after everything with a pussy. The wife has an active libido; she discreetly has sex with all her friends’ husbands and their sons. The son has a thing for his mother.

Couple/Family 3:
Husband and wife are swingers, but often will take in a third, which often mean the wife gets two cocks.

Couple/Family 4:
Husband and wife are also swingers, but often have one-on-ones with other people. Daughter has a thing for her father; the mother knows but keeps it to her self.

The 4 couple/families summer vacation in Brazil along the Sao Francisco River and the Atlantic Ocean. What was supposed to be an exotic vacation turned out to be more of a rustic outing. No electricity, running water or phones. There location is so remote that transportation or communication would not return until the end of summer.

Their caretakers are a local tribe who provide them with food and protection. The tribes’ people don't speak the language of the visitors, and main stay out of sight, except during meals.

For the most part they are comfortable.

Hmmmmm... got my interest! :)

Keep us posted on how things are going with this story, okay BlackSnake? Complicated tales are good, yes, but you don't want to overextend yourself as a writer, loosing the flow and fluidity of the story in the process! :D

I think I'm pretty okay at making long stories with a big list of characters that are still good to read, but it's quite a difficult thing to do! Though I don't really have to tell you that, do I? :p
 
I forsee two probable endings:

1 They all die of boredom.
2 The tribe turn hostile and cook them all for dinner.

On Lit the only possibility is a lot of hidden sex,
then someone finds out about someone else's sex play,
then there is an orgy,
then they invite the tribe in and the orgy grows.
 
snooper said:
I forsee two probable endings:

1 They all die of boredom.
2 The tribe turn hostile and cook them all for dinner.

On Lit the only possibility is a lot of hidden sex,
then someone finds out about someone else's sex play,
then there is an orgy,
then they invite the tribe in and the orgy grows.

or, the sex could be not hidden....
 
snooper said:
I forsee two probable endings:

1 They all die of boredom.
2 The tribe turn hostile and cook them all for dinner.

On Lit the only possibility is a lot of hidden sex,
then someone finds out about someone else's sex play,
then there is an orgy,
then they invite the tribe in and the orgy grows.

What if someone learns something? How about having a lesson in the story? What can the reader learn by reading this story?
 
BlackSnake said:
What if someone learns something? How about having a lesson in the story? What can the reader learn by reading this story?

How to participate in a nice big group orgy, interracial-style? lol :p
 
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