Compare and contrast.

[NaokoSmith]

A is a bit verbose, but on the second reading I like it better, it better carries the "flavor" of the moment.

Thank you.

Learn the difference between specific and particular.

General includes the whole genera...say porn or erotica.
Specific involves the whole category...say romance or mature or incest.
Particular is limited to your story.

I am looking for specific feedback, from the fantasy romance readers.

However I started this poll thread asking for particular feedback to check how crap my starting paragraphs are.

And now I know! LOL