Comments That Make Your Day

[crookedletter]

It sounds as if he believes that longer stories are inherently of lesser quality.

Yeah, or at least the best (shorter) story is the best story full stop. I'm okay with the qualifier.

 

[Kumquatqueen]

My first foreign language comment, which I'm impressed by because someone's taken the effort to read Last Christmas despite English not being their first language or easy for them to write in. And I was also chuffed I could decide the second and third words:
Удивительная история! Браво!

(Amazing story! Bravo!)

It wouldn't be an easy read for anyone not fluent in English: as @AlexFourways said, 'Took me a while to read, as it is so tightly written that you can't (well, I can't) race through it without losing the blend of pathos, love and raunchy sex.'

 

[Actingup]

Yeah, or at least the best (shorter) story is the best story full stop. I'm okay with the qualifier.

Some people are there for the journey, and some for the destination!

 

[Eosphorus]

Some lovely comments on my new story, The Opposite of Jealousy...

@Eosphorus' comments always leave me feeling warm and gooey!


@Prettylynne left me my favorite kind of comment in the whole world


@NudistJayByrd wants to hang out some time

Some lovely comments on my new story, The Opposite of Jealousy...

@Eosphorus' comments always leave me feeling warm and gooey!


@Prettylynne left me my favorite kind of comment in the whole world


@NudistJayByrd wants to hang out some time

I really enjoy your work. It has inspired me to push myself harder to do better in my own stories.

 

[NaughteeDragon]

A couple of days ago I got this comment on my Christmas story, A Gift She Wasn’t Expecting

This was equal parts sweet and hot, and your writing is excellent! I’m not ace, but I am autistic and I’ve never read anything I related to as much as this. I spent years looking for answers with the wrong people before I finally found the right one, and I loved the resolution and relief you gave Hope.

This was exactly what I wanted from the story, and it touched me that someone connected to it beyond ‘I loved it.’

 

[Actingup]

A beautiful comment on my 'Memories of Sandy' (in T/I but without Mom sitting on Son's lap, @iwatchus !)

LoveIsGood
Some stories tell of the difficulties of real life, and even though there is testimony to the satisfying goodness that comes with carrying on in spite of the pain, I miss the joyful delight of happy endings. But I recognize, and cherish, the works that tell the aching stories well. Thank you. sigh

 

[Erozetta]

These came in while I was at work. Was nice to see when I logged on


The first is on Masked, a 750 word essay I wrote based on a dream and a writing exercise from the AH. (Also, the repeated "pleasure" makes my eye twitch, but I'm not submitting an edit for one word...)

The second is on I Love You, a letter I wrote to my friends. I honestly don't even know why I have comments and votes turned on for this one. Its only purpose is to exist so that if I die, my friends might come across it and see what they meant to me.

 

[sister jenny]

Got this today and it made me so happy. She had first commented on two of my poems and then I got this on a story.
And if you read this, Thank you so much

”From tender poetry to beautiful taboo/incest filth - I wish I could do that.”

 

[ICantLeafYou]

An excerpt from a much longer, entirely great, comment.

I love your writing style even though I hate giving you 5-star reviews - you deserve at least 10-stars for your work!! [...] You have a rare and unique talent for the erotic - more! Give us more!!!

 

[SavannaT]

I realize how dumb this is but.. being called a slut by men angry i write about cheating wives

 

[AlexFourways]

I realize how dumb this is but.. being called a slut by men angry i write about cheating wives

I think this would be more at home in the Comments that leave you shaking your head forum.
But it goes along with a comment on my third story* "Well Dan must not care about catching whatever disease she's carrying around from having sex with anybody and everybody. Hope he gets to the doc soon!"

*The Missing Person Ok possibly it should have been in Group Sex, not Erotic Couplings, but its storyline is... After her GangBang Carol starts to wonder about events?

 

[MiaBabe23]

I think this would be more at home in the Comments that leave you shaking your head forum.
But it goes along with a comment on my third story* "Well Dan must not care about catching whatever disease she's carrying around from having sex with anybody and everybody. Hope he gets to the doc soon!"

*The Missing Person Ok possibly it should have been in Group Sex, not Erotic Couplings, but its storyline is... After her GangBang Carol starts to wonder about events?

Lol she posted it here because she’s pretending she likes it, she’s a troll and you’re feeding her

 

[AlexFourways]

Lol she posted it here because she’s pretending she likes it, she’s a troll and you’re feeding her

Oops! I hope I haven't given her more landscape for her Trolling activities. Thanks for being one of the Billy Goats Gruff!

 

[MiaBabe23]

Oops! I hope I haven't given her more landscape for her Trolling activities. Thanks for being one of the Billy Goats Gruff!

Lol think that’s the first time I’ve ever been called that, so that made my day
And nah, would be no more than a drop in the ocean

 

[ElectricBlue]

This comment, received today:

I am always amazed how things arrive in our lives, like a puzzle piece we need. I just read your wonderful tale, The White Swan. It was just last week as winter here (MN/WI) has gripped us with snow and the lakes and rivers has iced up. I had a quick glance of five flying in the distance, most have come up off the river.

I am a carver of wooden fish and wooden fish spearing decoys, who has started writing words for mangled poems. Mostly to get things out of my head.

Your words connected and helped my soul breathe. I take great care to make my fish and decoys, giving them a price of my soul.. being childless I do look at them as my flock I guess. But I find the greatest joy in the wabi sabi that comes from the use of them from my customers. My favorite, one money could never buy is mangled and chewed, cracked. It has been used, and has been about as productive as it could ever be.

Your story and its meaning you tried to express touched me, thank you!

The White Swan (900 words)

 

[Actingup]

I'm feeling this one. On 'A crack in the glass', set in Japan. I'm WASP and male, and although I lived in Japan for a period, I was pretty nervous about getting this one way wrong.

Rauthor6
I have lived in Japan for many years. This story is very well written and is an accurate reflection of life in Japan in almost all ways. Japan is changing culturally and has been significantly impacted by exposure to foreign attitudes brought here by various media and the Internet. If you have a chance to visit Japan, do so with a local guide and by all means stay at a ryokan and visit an onsen. Stay away from those places set up for tourists. And, please treat Japanese culture with respect. I enjoyed reading his wonderful story told from a woman's point of view.

 

[NoTalentHack]

On Funeral Dirge for a Fairytale:

Easily my 4th read and it’s still 5 stars. Sometimes love conquers even if the haters don’t agree.

 

[Fatdog25]

ADirtyPerv about 5 hours ago
Wonderfully written. Really fun. Naughtee Dragon killed it with the editing, this reads like a professional novel.

{Edited to remove spoilers]

I appreciated the shots taken at Texas's power grid. It will never not be stupid.

++++++++++

It's been a while since I've added anything here but I couldn't resist this one. It's not everyday you see the beta reader/editor/critic getting the love.

I appreciate the kind words.

 

[iwatchus]

Not actually a comment, but a post on another thread (about How To Be An Author On Literotica):

@iwatchus 's article is the only reason I wandered on here at all. It gave me a glossary with which to interact with y'all, as well as filled in a few gaps that I didn't pick up in the time I've been posting. It's awesome and highly recommended.

Thank you! That is why I wrote that! I just don't know how to get it into the hands of people not yet coming onto AH.

 

[Actingup]

Thank you! That is why I wrote that! I just don't know how to get it into the hands of people not yet coming onto AH.

Get it to walk through the mall in body paint only with a sign saying ‘touch me’ around its neck.

 

[Just4Sheets]

My favorite comment so far was for my latest published story, April, The Queen - Pt. 01:

by Will527 on 11/10/2025

Finally, someone else writes about the soft side of femdom, i.e. just being used at the woman's discretion, no pain, no humiliating or degrading, name calling, etc. it's all about the sex and you've nailed it here. What more can a guy ask for than what Carl has? Aggressive women are hot and get what they want.

I love that comment because it reiterated my reason for writing the story in the first place.

J4S

 

[RRRyan]

I got my first comment overnight.

by UAlbanyGirl518 on 13 hours ago

What a great story. 5+ stars. So well written and well paced. Just enough background to set the scene and then smoldering heat from then on, your wording and phrases burned off the screen and the sex was hot AF. Thank you for sharing your work with us.

And for a little while, I have a hot rating. I'm sure that will not hold. But it's fun that I have it. If I understand how the HOT works, you must keep a 4.5 or higher. I'm not the kind of writer who gets that high a score.

 

[AlexFourways]

And for a little while, I have a hot rating. I'm sure that will not hold. But it's fun that I have it. If I understand how the HOT works, you must keep a 4.5 or higher. I'm not the kind of writer who gets that high a score.

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Yes 4.5 and above are HOT.

 

[Djmac1031]

Just left on The Devil And Angel Em:

Aoife_from_Ulster 4 minutes ago

This was an absolutely phenomenal tale of life, both human and unhuman. I love the detail. I love the descriptions. I love the fantasy, and I love the reality.. truly bravo to you for bringing to us this spectacular story

My Fantasy stories don't get as much feedback so its always nice to get a new reader.