Comments/Suggestions on the New Story Review Thread

[Ada Stuart]

Abduction Ch. 15 by Ada Stuart Sci-Fi & Fantasy

The final chapter of a series, the author paints a fascinating sci-fi world that comes across well. I didn't feel lost coming in on the last chapter, although I'm sure the emotions would have hit me even stronger if I had read the entire story. The hologram angle is fascinating, and the romance is sweet - Highly recommended.

WOW, what a wonderful review!!! I'm completely gobsmacked....

Thank you so much, Darkniciad!!! You've really saved my day and given me the inspiration to continue writing.

Thank you, thank you....

 

[Aurora Black]

WOW, what a wonderful review!!! I'm completely gobsmacked....

Thank you so much, Darkniciad!!! You've really saved my day and given me the inspiration to continue writing.

Thank you, thank you....

You needed inspiration to continue? You've got to be kidding me.

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

I'm incapable of doing reviews today. I'm in a shitload of pain and my mind is not clear enough to read and give a just appreciation of anything.

I'm sorry.

*hugs* Get well soon Lady C.

 

[Darkniciad]

WOW, what a wonderful review!!! I'm completely gobsmacked....

Thank you so much, Darkniciad!!! You've really saved my day and given me the inspiration to continue writing.

Thank you, thank you....

You're very welcome I saw that one comment on the story, and if that is what was getting you down... Don't worry about it! You can't please everyone, and your story is excellent. I hope I'll have time to go back and read the rest of the series so I know everything that led up to the ending

 

[Aurora Black]

You're very welcome I saw that one comment on the story, and if that is what was getting you down... Don't worry about it! You can't please everyone, and your story is excellent. I hope I'll have time to go back and read the rest of the series so I know everything that led up to the ending

I reviewed a previous chapter of the series, and believe me...

 

[sack]

some metaphors for Lady Cibelle....

L.C., I'm sorry to hear you are in obvious pain. Being no stranger to pain this year...I needed to be on morphine for a time....here's a list of some metaphors that remind me of you. Feel better soon!!!


Metaphors for Lady Cibelle:


An exquisite, half opened flower
a delicate seashell washed up on the beach
the twinkle in a baby's eye
autumn leaves reflected in a lake
friends shaking hands
lovers kissing
the world at peace


Thanks for your greatness,

Sack

 

[deathlynx]

I'm incapable of doing reviews today. I'm in a shitload of pain and my mind is not clear enough to read and give a just appreciation of anything.

I'm sorry.

As a reader and writer (but not reviewer) let me add my wishes...Take all the time you need to get well!
Your reviews are appreciated!

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

Don't worry about it, Lady C. We'll hold the fort. Do what you need to do.

 

[LadyCibelle]

Gosh guys.....I don't know what to say.

Thank you, thank you. Pain has been a constant companion of mine for the past couple of weeks and today wasn't much different but I felt really bad for not doing my reviews.

Thank you all for all your good wishes and nice words. You all are simply THE BEST and I'm grateful to have you!

 

[Guest]

I'm incapable of doing reviews today. I'm in a shitload of pain and my mind is not clear enough to read and give a just appreciation of anything.

I'm sorry.

From one chronic pain sufferer to another, I send you all the good and healing thoughts I can. No one should have to deal with the kind of debilitating pain that back problems can cause. You are in my prayers, LadyC.

 

[Ada Stuart]

You're very welcome I saw that one comment on the story, and if that is what was getting you down... Don't worry about it! You can't please everyone, and your story is excellent. I hope I'll have time to go back and read the rest of the series so I know everything that led up to the ending

I reviewed a previous chapter of the series, and believe me...

Oh well, I must admit I was a bit put out by the comment, especially since I'm currently working on a sequel to this story. Makes you think "why do I bother" and all that.

Anyway, thank you both for cheering me up!!! You make me blush with gratitute here.... (and I'm making a mess of the english language - again - sorry, folks, english is not my first language...)

Ada

 

[Aurora Black]

Oh well, I must admit I was a bit put out by the comment, especially since I'm currently working on a sequel to this story. Makes you think "why do I bother" and all that.

Anyway, thank you both for cheering me up!!! You make me blush with gratitute here.... (and I'm making a mess of the english language - again - sorry, folks, english is not my first language...)

Ada

Our pleasure (The snake likes it too).

 

[deathlynx]

Laresa's World Ch. 08: Dolph is Deathlynx's contribution to the chain. I like this series (and kudos to RedHairedandFriendly for the idea) because once you understand the premise of Laresa as a genie, these stories can be read independently of one another or together. This chapter sort of asks, what would happen if a Gordon Gekko type(character 80's "Wall Street") got a hold of a magic genie? What does the man who have everything ask for? This one is just masterfully done! Extremely well-written, the dialogue is snappy and clever, and the wonderful twist at the end made me smile with glee. Kudos do you, Deathlynx, you've made a fine contribution to this chain!

Thank you so much for your wonderful review! I've enjoyed working on the chain so much and am looking forward to all of the (hopefully many) chapters to come...

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter in particular...I wanted to add this side of genies into her personality...It's not all happy and submissive...she can twist and turn wishes to her desires if she wants

 

[Selena_Kitt]

Thank you so much for your wonderful review! I've enjoyed working on the chain so much and am looking forward to all of the (hopefully many) chapters to come...

I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter in particular...I wanted to add this side of genies into her personality...It's not all happy and submissive...she can twist and turn wishes to her desires if she wants

You're welcome... it was a pleasure to read! (well, so to speak... )

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Thanks for the kudos Selena. Everyone has done such a great job on this and keeping up with details for her and the rules, as well as adding other things as the story progresses, it is a blast to write and I look forward to more too.

 

[fieryjen]

I got reviewed!

*dances*

Thank you very much, S-Des

 

[S-Des]

I got reviewed!

*dances*

Thank you very much, S-Des

I should thank you. It was a nice read at 4:00AM by myself....*cough*

 

[fieryjen]

I should thank you. It was a nice read at 4:00AM by myself....*cough*

I'm glad to hear that

 

[Selena_Kitt]

Switch

S-Des and I are switching... I'm taking Tuesday, he's taking Monday...

just a head's up!

Also, I will be gone from Oct 21-29, so can someone take Tuesday the 24th? (That's not next Tuesday, but the Tuesday after)

 

[Guest]

S-Des and I are switching... I'm taking Tuesday, he's taking Monday...

just a head's up!

Also, I will be gone from Oct 21-29, so can someone take Tuesday the 24th? (That's not next Tuesday, but the Tuesday after)

I could if no one else wants to do it. My life has slowed down a lot since Mom is now getting some of her therapy at home.

 

[Selena_Kitt]

I could if no one else wants to do it. My life has slowed down a lot since Mom is not getting some of her therapy at home.

thanks, DK...

 

[Guest]

thanks, DK...

No sweat SK, us kittens have to stick together..lol

 

[Jenny_Jackson]

Aww thanks for the mention, Aurora. This story is the beginning of a novel I'm working on. It's very biographical. This story is the Peface and stands alone as a story on it's own.

You are always kind, my friend

JJ

 

[Aurora Black]

Recent feedback

I've tried to settle this privately, but there was an internet glitch so here we go:

This message contains feedback for: Aurora Black
This feedback was sent by: XXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

Comments:

You say to go over to those stupid review. I go there and find my story listed with no review. You are a piece of work. Some of us wonder just who you are trying to fool. You are such an arrogant phony.

Dear XXXXXXXXXXXX,

I'm sorry you feel that way. As I explained in my post, I don't have time to give full reviews today. I sent a message out to everyone whose story was linked so they would know. I understand that you put a lot of time and effort into your work, and because of that I thought a link in the review thread was better than not featuring the story at all. I hope that the link will give you plenty of reads to make up for the missed review.


Aurora

 

[fieryjen]

I've tried to settle this privately, but there was an internet glitch so here we go:



Dear XXXXXXXXXXXX,

I'm sorry you feel that way. As I explained in my post, I don't have time to give full reviews today. I sent a message out to everyone whose story was linked so they would know. I understand that you put a lot of time and effort into your work, and because of that I thought a link in the review thread was better than not featuring the story at all. I hope that the link will give you plenty of reads to make up for the missed review.


Aurora

Sheesh, some people