Comments/Suggestions on the New Story Review Thread

[Decayed Angel]

Thank you

Severusmax for your mention and kind words on my story Ethnic Minority Girl. It was inspired by a Vietnamese painting...

da

 

[FallingToFly]

Thanks Rob, for reading and reviewing Bug Eyes.

It's probably the worst of all the Playlists series so far, but I'm really glad it did ghet the message across, and that it spoke to you.

 

[rgraham666]

Thanks Rob, for reading and reviewing Bug Eyes.

It's probably the worst of all the Playlists series so far, but I'm really glad it did ghet the message across, and that it spoke to you.

You're very welcome.

 

[Brandii]

Reply to S Des re Stepping Stones

I read you're comment. You're absolutely right I do need an editor, especially since I can get so engrossed in what I'm writing that even on proofreading my own work I can miss things I should be picking up. I also wanted to thankyou for the single red rose at the end. It is true, every word written. Even though it is highly personal, I wrote this story because I wanted to see what other emotions my use of words could induce in men besides arousal. I think I reached my goal.

 

[FallingToFly]

Thank you!

To Red, to Rob, and to Sirhugs, thank you so much for reading and reviewing my stuff.

And I promise, chapters 3 and 4 clue you in a whole lot more to what's going on. I'm off for a bit now, as I have to finish the final edits and submit those two. .

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

Thank you!

To Red, to Rob, and to Sirhugs, thank you so much for reading and reviewing my stuff.

And I promise, chapters 3 and 4 clue you in a whole lot more to what's going on. I'm off for a bit now, as I have to finish the final edits and submit those two. .

I look forward to them and you are very welcome.

 

[oggbashan]

Since I can't think of anywhere better to post it:

Thank you to anonymous who read ALL my posted stories over the last two months and sent feedback detailing the favourites and why.

An anonymous with stamina...

Og

 

[sirhugs]

Thank you!

To Red, to Rob, and to Sirhugs, thank you so much for reading and reviewing my stuff.

And I promise, chapters 3 and 4 clue you in a whole lot more to what's going on. I'm off for a bit now, as I have to finish the final edits and submit those two. .

oh, I was clued in just fine...merely hungry for more.

 

[BrettJ]

Editing

BRANDI, should you decide you require the services of an Editor, I offer my services. I have done some editing for various writers out here, including RED and a few others. I have 119 stories posted on site as well.

Feel free to ask, should you decide you need help.

I yam a reely gud spellur, u sea.

BrettJ

Awther / Creeatur / Senshoealisk

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

Severusmax for your mention and kind words on my story Ethnic Minority Girl. It was inspired by a Vietnamese painting...

da

You're very welcum. I like Asian girls anyway, so it was a bonus when reading it.

 

[Guest]

Thanks, LadyCibelle for your review on The Other Woman

Thanks for your kind comments on your review of "The Other Woman."

It's not everyone that can take a cheatin' wife story and make it into a romance. I guess I'm just an old softie!

Regards, Jack

 

[LadyCibelle]

Thanks for your kind comments on your review of "The Other Woman."

It's not everyone that can take a cheatin' wife story and make it into a romance. I guess I'm just an old softie!

Regards, Jack

You're most welcome, sweet. It's always an honour and a pleasure to work with you and "The other woman" deserves all the praise it can, should and will get.

 

[~Breathe~]

Thank you, Aurora Black for a great review
I feel very honoured to have been chosed for a review and that you enjoyed my ramblings enough to give me a 5

 

[Aurora Black]

Thank you, Aurora Black for a great review
I feel very honoured to have been chosed for a review and that you enjoyed my ramblings enough to give me a 5

You're welcome, and your "ramblings" were very sexy. I enjoyed them very much.

 

[rgraham666]

Thanks for the review for A Treat For Halloween, Sev.

That was a damn nice surprise to wake up to.

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

Thanks for the review for A Treat For Halloween, Sev.

That was a damn nice surprise to wake up to.

You're welcome. It seemed to fit both my mood and the holiday. Plus, I haven't reviewed your stories before and wished to correct that oversight.

 

[Guest]

Thank you!

 

[RedHairedandFriendly]

SEVERUSMAX - - Thanks for the review mention this afternoon for "Blade Play." I was glad to see the twist stay through most of the story. joeys_game loved it too, good thing since it was his fantasy. Glad you enjoyed and again thanks.

 

[cawastedyouth]

Thank you for reviewing Holding Amy Chap. 01 cawastedyouth!

I appreciated your comments, vote, and praise. But I really enjoyed the fact that you saw Sam and Amy the way they exist in my mind. No greater praise exists than that.

Sincerely ~ Thank you for taking the time to read and review it.

Always fun to read something that someone has clearly spent time on. Can't wait for more...

 

[SEVERUSMAX]

SEVERUSMAX - - Thanks for the review mention this afternoon for "Blade Play." I was glad to see the twist stay through most of the story. joeys_game loved it too, good thing since it was his fantasy. Glad you enjoyed and again thanks.

You're very welcum. I enjoyed reading it.

 

[curl4ever]

Thank you, rgraham666

The Bodyguard by Colleen Thomas.

Sigh. I keep reading her stuff. It's so good and always worth reading.

This one is one of her SF pieces and about a Marine who ends up with a job guarding a young woman.

As always, it's well written and drew me right in. Love the central character as well. I have a thing for tough women.

Voted on this the day it came out. A five of course.

Miss you a lot, beautiful. Till we meet again.

This is one of my all-time favorite stories. I am very happy to see it brought to people's attention again.
-curl

 

[rachlou]

Thanks Aurora for the review - yes you were right about that line, i completely missed it! Thanks for pointing out the error, I will change it.

Rach

 

[Aurora Black]

Thanks Aurora for the review - yes you were right about that line, i completely missed it! Thanks for pointing out the error, I will change it.

Rach

You're welcome.

 

[curl4ever]

Thank you.

Dear Aurora,

Thank you for your thoughful comments about my story. It was only recently that I checked the "New Stories" page and was amazed by how many stories are posted each day. My hat is off to you and all the reviewers and editors who sift through the sheer volume of contributions.

Thanks again,
curl

 

[Aurora Black]

Dear Aurora,

Thank you for your thoughful comments about my story. It was only recently that I checked the "New Stories" page and was amazed by how many stories are posted each day. My hat is off to you and all the reviewers and editors who sift through the sheer volume of contributions.

Thanks again,
curl

You're welcome, and there are indeed a lot of new stories every single day. We try to keep up, though.