Comments/Suggestions for X-men:Bast

[Crouching_Buddha]

Same as the Rising thread, just looking for feedback on my X-men story. Scott fans may want to avoid, but I'd like to think it's a decent story.

So what do YOU think? Please let me know!

My work can be found here: http://english.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=764362&page=submissions

Please read and gimme your thoughts, everyone!