comments on my story

[Munachi]

Hey... I would quite like to hear what people think of my story... *blatant attention craving, hehe*

Well, actually the reason I am curious is, that in the German (original) version I got very positive comments but several not very good votes without comments. In the English version interestingly votes were somewhat better (which makes me wonder if I write worse in my native language, or if the Germans are stricter) - but hardly any comments at all. Anyway, I would really like to know what I could do better, whta those that did not like the story disliked about it, etc., so I can work on those things in the next story I write...

The link is in my sigline (sorry I can't put it into the post right now, I am in an internet cafe at a somewhat crappy computer)...

Thanks.

 

[windstormy]

I read your story and sent you a private contact mail. I enjoyed it very much. It had some very good strong points that I described in the email. I hope to see more writings from you soon.