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TruthwithaTwist

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The Halloween Contest will mark my one-year submitting stories on here and I'm happy with the overall results (favorites/votes/ratings) improving over time.

That being said, the comments have been minimal, so I'd love any feedback on what people think the stories are missing or what can be improved upon.

As I try to state, most of my stories are fairly realistic as I take true events and then embellish a bit to make them interesting.

Any thoughts or criticisms are welcome. THX

And no....when I came up with my screen name, I didn't realize the acronym would be TWAT :(

https://www.literotica.com/stories/memberpage.php?uid=5639216&page=submissions
 
Well, the forum maintenance seems to have deleted my response, which was something along the lines of Tia Carrera is hot in True Lies and I love Por una cabeza.

Oh, and something about punctuation in dialogue...
 
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