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[Mollys Will]

I am a newbie writer, and posted my first story ("Aligning the Planets") in Group Sex a few days ago. The feedback I've gotten from men has been encouraging so far, but I'm wondering what women might think I could have added or left out to make it more appealing to them.

If any women reading this might be willing to look at it and comment here, or send me feedback there, I'd really appreciate it! Thanks!

 

[Guest]

Well, I read the story and thought it was extremely well written and hot.

Good work, sweetie.