AgentDoiron
Secret Agent
- Joined
- May 17, 2025
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I'm looking for feedback and suggestions on my 'Collar Girls' series.
The most recent entry is:
Collar Girls - Rosie's Bar
https://literotica.com/s/collar-girls-rosies-bar
Category: Science Fiction / Fantasy
My name: Agent Doiron
The collar girls stories started with 'Jessica's Choices'. The intent was to write a story where mind control and pokegirl style capture could be consensual. From there, I ended up writing two more stories, 'Jessica's Decision' and 'Jessica's Ending'.
Now, I have a whole bunch of ideas for stories that could exist in the same world. The intent of Rosie's Bar is to show the different directions the concept can go.
I am interested in feedback on what I've written. I'm also interested in suggestions on story direction. I'll write what inspires me, and politely ignore suggestions that don't interest me.
Thank you in advance.
The most recent entry is:
Collar Girls - Rosie's Bar
https://literotica.com/s/collar-girls-rosies-bar
Category: Science Fiction / Fantasy
My name: Agent Doiron
The collar girls stories started with 'Jessica's Choices'. The intent was to write a story where mind control and pokegirl style capture could be consensual. From there, I ended up writing two more stories, 'Jessica's Decision' and 'Jessica's Ending'.
Now, I have a whole bunch of ideas for stories that could exist in the same world. The intent of Rosie's Bar is to show the different directions the concept can go.
I am interested in feedback on what I've written. I'm also interested in suggestions on story direction. I'll write what inspires me, and politely ignore suggestions that don't interest me.
Thank you in advance.
