Coitus Interruptus?

[Nightwaves]

Is it just me, or does anyone else feel guilty taking a pause in writing when the characters are in the middle of some really hot sex? It's like they're in suspended animation until you return.

 

[MColton84]

Is it just me, or does anyone else feel guilty taking a pause in writing when the characters are in the middle of some really hot sex? It's like they're in suspended animation until you return.

Not particularly, I would rather take a break in the middle of writing then force my way through creating a half-hearted result. Think about it this way, they're still having sex until you get back.

 

[AvroAnson]

Think about it this way, they're still having sex until you get back.

A comedian had a quip about a grade school that was in the news for banning the game of tag.

He said: "Think about the last recess it was played. Some poor kid is now "it" for life."

 

[SamScribble]

It's just you, Nightwaves. The characters are just characters in a story. They don't even know that you've gone away.

Oh, yeah ... and there's no Santa Claus either.

 

[ElectricBlue]

It's just you, Nightwaves. The characters are just characters in a story. They don't even know that you've gone away.

Oh, yeah ... and there's no Santa Claus either.

Virginia hoped her author would return soon. She was getting a sore leg from the strange angle the elf had put her in, and she was getting sick and tired of the sleigh bells.

 

[Nightwaves]

Shattered

What, no Santa? Guess I need to get back to work. That cunnilingus isn't going to finish itself.

 

[2soon2no]

Sometimes you go down a rabbit hole, and a pause is the best answer. Often it results in a line or a paragraph being trashed, but that is probably best.
Perhaps you are riding her doggy and a tit pops into your mouth. You have to reconstruct, make her very limber, add a woman, or put it in the alien category.

 

[jehoram]

Sometimes you go down a rabbit hole, and a pause is the best answer.

In a story I'm writing, I'm wondering if I should change the first-person narrative from the male to the female MC. It might get me out of a couple of plot problems.

Stories are like that. Sometimes they flow, sometimes they don't. The trick is to write them so that the readers can't tell.