rjordan
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I've been scanning through the Loving Couples area and have run across a number of stories where the cuckolded husband smells another man's cock on his wife's breath.
OK...just how skanky would a cock have to be to be noticeable on a woman's breath several hours afterward? What kind of woman would put up with such a lapse in hygiene?
I know we're writing fantasy here, but that sort of thing usually ruins an otherwise good story for me. There are other clues that a writer could use to indicate to the cuckold that his wife had been with another man. Cock breath stretches credibility a bit too far.
Rick
OK...just how skanky would a cock have to be to be noticeable on a woman's breath several hours afterward? What kind of woman would put up with such a lapse in hygiene?
I know we're writing fantasy here, but that sort of thing usually ruins an otherwise good story for me. There are other clues that a writer could use to indicate to the cuckold that his wife had been with another man. Cock breath stretches credibility a bit too far.
Rick
