Club orgy

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[Chicklet]

dunno

none of the clubs I went to in Canada were like that!

 

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[Chicklet]

well anyways what kinds of ideas do you have for this club?

 

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[Chicklet]

well go ahead and write the random scenes down! they don't have to make any sense, maybe you can re-use them again some day!

 

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[Chicklet]

I don't have the patience for a novel. After about 7 pages I get bored.

 

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[MrFrost]

that sounds intresting and it could happen i've heard of stuff like that happening from my clubbie friends

 

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[MrFrost]

lol i didnt say that you werent crazy i just said it is a pretty good idea. but will someone write it ?

 

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[Chicklet]

Okay, so I have an experience to share. No one can steal this because I'm going to write a story (actually, you can use it, or else I wouldn't be posting it here) But I went and listened to a Samba band last night. It was really fun, the performers were down on the sidewalk in a half circle and slowly people joined in clapping their hands and dancing in the center of the circle. Watching everybody's body moving, everyone pulsing to the beat, everyone forgetting their "personal space" was really erotic. I didn't join in, just stood to the side, observing. I'm going to try to write something about the experience. It wasn't sexual, but it definatly WAS erotic.

Chicklet

 

[Tatewaki]

Shameless Plug ...

Okay, so I have an experience to share. No one can steal this because I'm going to write a story (actually, you can use it, or else I wouldn't be posting it here) But I went and listened to a Samba band last night. It was really fun, the performers were down on the sidewalk in a half circle and slowly people joined in clapping their hands and dancing in the center of the circle. Watching everybody's body moving, everyone pulsing to the beat, everyone forgetting their "personal space" was really erotic. I didn't join in, just stood to the side, observing. I'm going to try to write something about the experience. It wasn't sexual, but it definatly WAS erotic.
Chicklet

A story about Latin Dance and sensuality, you say?

Stranger on the Shore

It might give you a few ideas. (And me another read! The story's been wallowing in the shoals lately.)

-T

 

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[fanzee1]

the reggae clubs in toronto can get like that, on a good night.


Ah Toronto. My favorite town in all the world.

 

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[Dr. B Evil]

Rave sex

Hey Pretty,

I've known quite a few refreshing encounters in the bathrooms of clubs as well as some handywork on the dancefloor. However, I have seen the real deal done at a rave party. Of course, they were off to the side, but it sure got me in the mood!

 

[fanzee1]

Re: Rave sex

Hey Pretty,

I've known quite a few refreshing encounters in the bathrooms of clubs as well as some handywork on the dancefloor. However, I have seen the real deal done at a rave party. Of course, they were off to the side, but it sure got me in the mood!

A rave. Now that would be the setting for it. Anything seems to go at those things. They're young, they're sleep deprived, the beat keeps pumping and XTC flows freely. It can be a deadly mix but it can be sexy, too. There are so many dark nooks and crannies in the halls that usually host those things. Plenty of opportunity to pair people off or whatever for action. That would be a good setting.

 

[MrFrost]

i agree who knows what could happen at a rave someone should write this story im sure i would read it.

 

[MsLinnet]

i agree who knows what could happen at a rave someone should write this story im sure i would read it.

why don't you have a crack at it?

 

[Chicklet]

Re: Re: Rave sex

They're young, they're sleep deprived, the beat keeps pumping and XTC flows freely. It can be a deadly mix but it can be sexy, too.

I have to disagree. I'm the group prude, I guess = )

I think that the idea sounds good, and every rave I've been to has been a blast, but I don't want to read or write any erotica about young people getting high on every kind of drug and then banging their bodies around until morning.

So what if I've done it? I don't want to read or write about it, not under these contexts.

Here's an idea - perhaps a stupid one = p
Well this is what I'm thinking of writing (some day, sigh) anyways: You have a band playing, live, with lots of base. The thumping music seriously does go straight to your pussy. Or my pussy at least, maybe you're a man. It starts to make the main character, anyway, really really hot. There are men dancing all around her, women dancing, men and women dancing together. But basically they're all dancing as a group.

She moves over in front of a man, hardly even noticing what he looks like. She's really, REALLY into the music. For this story I think it would be important to get into the music, pull out some musical terms to describe what is going on on stage.

So she's in front of this man, contorting her body. It's throbbing in front of him, and of course like any man with a beautiful woman in front of him (the attraction thing) he gets a little hot. He's completely swimming in the music as well. They press their bodies against each other and are sort of dancing in a sexual way. I mean, they're thrusting towards each other, holding each other tight, breathing heavily into each others ears.

These two do this for a while. Describe their feelings, the setting around them, the fact that other bodies are rubbing up against their sides. They can't talk to each other, due to the noise, but they might try. Everything just comes out as murmurs. I like murmurs, I think that they're sexy.

Thrusting against each other, ok? So the girl is like, grinding her pussy against his hard cock from beneath his pants. What kind of pants is he wearing ? What kinds of pants is she wearing ? How does the fabric feel grinding against her pussy? (You girls all know what I mean - Jeans feel a LOT different than cotton slacks)

I am picturing this couple, basically touching themselves through the other persons body. It gets more frantic, and the girl cums right there in the middle of all those people. Do they see? Do they know what's going on? I dunno, that's up to the author.

Actually, everything is up to the author, which so far is not me = p so nobody has to listen to me babble!

Chicklet

 

[fanzee1]

Chicklet, my only complaint about your story would be that it's awfully similar to other "rubbing" stories i have read. You suggested really playing up the music element and if you did that it could be unique, i suppose.

BTW, i know i mentioned the Xtc and everything but if i were actually writing this story, there would be no mention of drugs, i don't care how unrealistic that makes it. I just wouldn't feel right writing a story about folks using.

 

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