ChilledVodkaIV
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ChilledVodkaIV
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just in case this missed.
Svenskaflicka
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Is it open for people outside of UK?
Selena_Kitt
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This sounds perfect for Og! 
gauchecritic
When there are grey skies
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Svenskaflicka said:
Doesn't say it isn't. Go for it Svenska.
I took a two hundred and eighty odd word piece, which didn't include any of the given words and with my son managed to savage it into 100 words.
It was the most difficult edit I've ever done. I had to cut out the most telling paragraph, excised a poignant piece, changed the ending and probably re-did every sentence that was left but I think I still managed to get across the sense of it (about sleeping rough)
oggbashan
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Literotica version
The evening that had begun with my girlfriend being wistful about her former lover’s impending marriage ended happily when a moon from a passing car changed her mood for the better. It was an unlikely incident but when I contrasted the fleeting buttocks with her pert buns she started laughing broadly. After that we fucked hard in the back of my car. She was receptive, responsive, encouraging and delightful. That night at home in my bed she followed the best auto sex I’d ever had with a master class in sexual perversion. In the morning I was happily fucked out.
100 words including the seven required ones.
Og
The evening that had begun with my girlfriend being wistful about her former lover’s impending marriage ended happily when a moon from a passing car changed her mood for the better. It was an unlikely incident but when I contrasted the fleeting buttocks with her pert buns she started laughing broadly. After that we fucked hard in the back of my car. She was receptive, responsive, encouraging and delightful. That night at home in my bed she followed the best auto sex I’d ever had with a master class in sexual perversion. In the morning I was happily fucked out.
100 words including the seven required ones.
Og
Honey123
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oggbashan said:
og????
what do you think:
The full moon provided perfect light for the unlikely couple sitting on the beach. Beth and Frank were in quite a wistful mood as they held onto each other knowing better than to let go, especially now that they had found each other after all these years. Gazing into each other’s eyes, they happily contemplated their future. Bending his face toward Beth’s, Frank rested his forehead upon hers, and gently rubbed her nose. Could they ever be more happy? Could life provide them more than what they have right here, right now? So many questions, yet a lifetime to answer.
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