Clinical words mixed in with dirty words

[Pirate23]

Am I alone in being turned on by writing that mixes clinical words like "ejaculate" and "penis" with regular old dirty words like cock or whatever?

 

[DeeZire]

I keep confusing vulva with Volvo.

 

[Stella_Omega]

I like to mix my metaphors too.

 

[jomar]

Aerole, aureole and areola can get you into trouble if you're not careful.

 

[DeeZire]

Wasn't there a pop song in the late 60s/early 70s called Arial? (The Hollies, maybe?) I wonder if it was a hidden reference to tits?

 

[dr_mabeuse]

There are women (possibly men too, but I definitely know about women) who are specifically turned on by the use of technical jargon and scientific-speak in porn. It's one of the things that makes Victoriana so popular. I just have to write about his "penis ejaculating with repeated, peristaltic eructations" and they go weak.

I think it's the masculine power of the words and also the clinical, objective feel of them, so paradoxically cold and unemotional for such a hot and intimate act.

In any case, the technique can be used to very good effect, especially in BDSM or in genres where you want to establish emotional distance.

 

[NoJo]

I keep confusing vulva with Volvo.

Just remember, only one of them can accomodate five Hassidic Jews in comfort

 

[Bakeboss]

I enjoy writing where one person is proper and telling the storry using words such as member, ejaculate, and breasts and the one that he is relating about uses cock,cum, and tits. I think the contrast makes the proper person seem timid and afraid to use the vernacular.

 

[shereads]

Just remember, only one of them can accomodate five Hassidic Jews in comfort

This made me laugh so hard there are no smilies for it.