Cleansing

[Monkeybacon518]

I love this idea that's a fairly narrow fetish, and while there are a few stories out there that fit this theme, there aren't very many (that I've been able to find...) and I've read them all. And, seeing as I'm not an especially gifted writer, I figured I'd see if the fine folks here could come up with something.

My thought is this: it starts with a WAM BDSM scene. After that's done, the domme decides he/she needs to clean up the sub, which he/she does by going to the local automatic carwash, tying the sub onto the car, and running them through the carwash until they're clean, no matter what the sub thinks about the plan. (even better if the sub is afraid/doesn't want to do it!)

The more details about the inside of the carwash, the better! (and for those that don't know, WAM is wet & messy, scenes involving messy stuff like paint, food, etc.) The only other thing is, I don't mind the genders involved, so long as the sub and domme are different genders. My reasoning for the last point is, I'm straight, and I love being able to imagine myself in the story, in this case as either domme or sub.

 

[hylas_]

I think this is a really funny and potentially sexy idea! You should try and write it yourself! If it seems daunting, maybe start with the story in media res, perhaps right after the wet and messy BDSM scene has ended (since the carwash aspect is the real draw of the story, in my opinion.) Focus on the sub's inner thoughts and physical sensations during the carwash.

Possible twist: Male sub is a greasy, musky, wife-beater wearing blue-collar type who works at the carwash.

Alternate possible twist: Domme is a a tomboy car mechanic who works at the carwash. Sub is a fancy douchy dude who gets washed along with his fancy douchy muscle car.

Good luck!

 

[LeandraNyx]

After that's done, the domme decides he/she needs to clean up the sub, which he/she does by going to the local automatic carwash, tying the sub onto the car, and running them through the carwash until they're clean, no matter what the sub thinks about the plan.

IDK, I've been through some pretty intense car washes, couldn't that cause some pretty serious physical damage? Does it have to be a car wash? I like the fundamental premise of a terrifying cleansing experience, but the suspension of disbelief is a bit much for me, personally. :/

 

[Strangebuddy]

There was a story I read on here a few years ago about a girl whose mom/step-mom takes her to a spa where she is pretty much tortured into being utterly clean. It reads more like a horror story and wasn't really sexy in my opinion but i guess someone could find it sexy.

Things that happened in it:

1. Girl was roughly scrubbed and exfoliated
2. All of her body hair was tweezed out
3. She was put into a special shower that hit her with extremely hot water that filled up to her chin.
4. Enema

 

[Monkeybacon518]

Everyone above, thanks for the responses!

Hylas, both of your twist ideas are awesome! Hadn't considered doing anything like that, but it really adds interesting dynamics. If I ever end up writing anything myself, I'll for sure keep those ideas in mind.

LeandraNyx, I see where you're coming from, but I'll at least say this: a friend of mine growing up used to work at an automatic car wash as a summer job, and he told me stories of people doing this idea as a dare (though probably not naked...) and coming out a little cold and with red/pink skin. It certainly wouldn't be pleasant, but I don't think it would do permanent harm.