Civil war era thread gone bust

[BigBlackGodess]

Question: #1..Is there a rule about having the same story in more than one forum?
#2...What can I do to jumpstart my story, and is it too wordy??

The Undoing of Heaven http://www.literotica.com/forum/showthread.php?s=&threadid=66671[/URL]

 

[Merelan]

The story sounds good, might have been too specific in the characters you wanted. Alot of players like to create their own. Started out good.

One note though....

not sure why you posted this thread here. It is primarily for interest in BDSM, I realize there is a bit of that in your story, but not sure you will get much response here.

And as for having the same thread in more then one forum... no rules, as far as I know, though it mightput people off. Not me.

Good luck in the future you write well.