Chyoo Murder Mystery - The Story.

niceguy2002tim

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Note: This is a role playing type story, where you create a character and write for them. You can interact with other character, just keep it tasteful. The following people have agreed to take part in the story...

Niceguy2002tim, Daciasdesire, Lostandfounder, Gystex, OoohKitty, Zingiber, Augy6666, Antics, Gizmoo69, Deathofcards

Other who are invited, are...

Jakelyon, Kendalh6969, Torg, AaronWebster, Sim8425, Android1966, Switch76

Anybody not listed are welcome to join. All I ask is keep it tasteful and put some thought into your character.

Lastly, Enjoy and have fun!

Chyoo Murder Mystery

Heather pulled her lower lip into her mouth and bit softly down on it as a pleasure filled moan escaped her. She pressed her left hand against the wall to support herself, while her right hand moved between her legs. The blonde slipped two fingers between the pink folds of her pussy and began to massage herself. The hot, steamy water showering down on her large breast caused her nipples to perk up. She was deep into the moment, rubbing her clit and pushing herself to a gushing orgasm when the door bell rang. At first she didn’t hear the door bell, but after it rang it’s “ding dong” a couple times she found it impossible to ignore. She reached down with a little hesitation and turned off the shower, then proceeded to open the door and step out into the steam filled bathroom. Heather grabbed a towel and quickly wrapped it around her wet hair into a homemade turban. Once her hair was up she slipped into her white robe and pulled it tight around her tiny waist. The doorbell rang out again, reminding her that the caller wasn’t going away until she opened the door.

Heather made her way across the bathroom floor, leaving drops of water on every tile that she stepped on. She walked into the living room and felt a nice change of texture under her feet. The black and white bathroom tiles had been cold, while the plush carpet in the living room was warm. The 23 year old house-wife didn’t bother with the peephole, instead she flipped the deadbolt and pulled open the door.

“Good morning!” came the greeting from the male caller.

“Richard, I thought that was you,” Heather replied, “why don’t you come in?”

Richard was a very attractive 25 year old, he had the blonde hair of a surfer/beach bum and the tan and physique to match it. During the afternoons Heather knew that the beach was exactly where Richard spent most of his time. It was in the mornings that he worked for the post office, and today like every other day he was wearing his gray uniform and carrying the mail bag.

“You’re all wet,” Richard said. “Did you start without me?”

Heather blushed and giggled, “I was just getting warmed up for you.”

Richard tossed his mail bag on to the end of the couch and moved toward the beautiful blonde with her white robe and hair up in a towel. The young lovers met with their lips first, as the shared a series of hot, wet kisses. A couple seconds later the young man’s hands were all over the tight blonde, he unraveled her towel-turban and allowed it to drop to the floor. Heather’s long flowing hair fell free and reached half way down her back. Once the towel was off, Richard made quick work of her robe. The white cotton robe fell around Heathers ankles. Richard bent down and slipped one arm under the back of Heather’s legs, then he swept her up off the floor and into his arms. He carried her from the living room, into the kitchen. Richard lowered Heather’s naked round ass down onto the top of her breakfast island. The marble material was cold against her skin and sent goose-bumps up her arms. “Don’t worry, I’ll warm you up,” the beach-bum told her as he climbed on the Island.

Heather took control by mounting her hunky lover. She sunk herself down on his large 9-inch hard-on, it slipped into her already wet pussy. Richard let out a little sigh as he buried the full length of his rod into Heather’s small box. She moved her body over his, allowing her perky nipples to brush against his chest. Then she pushed down hard, forcing every inch of his thick penis into her. Richard slipped his hands from the petite blonde’s hips, over the curves of her body and to her C-cup breasts. Heather sat up and raised her arms to her damp hair. As she moved quicker, bouncing up and down on top of Richard his hands squeezed and pinched her nipples. Heather reached up and wrapped her hands around the hanging pot and frying pan rack above her head. Once she had a good grip she used the muscles in her arms to pulled herself up and down on the large throbbing cock. Heather watched the expression on her mail-man’s face and was pleased that it matched hers. She felt the first little waves of a much larger orgasm flowing through her lower body.

“Oh god yes, fuck me Heather!” Richard moaned as he slammed his hips up and down. Heather matched his speed and both of them came hard and fast, Heather threw her head back and screamed out her lover’s name over and over, between panting for breath. She collapsed on to Richard’s muscular chest and they both came down from their own orgasms.

“So what do you have for me today,” said Heather, motioning towards the mailbag.

Richard finished buttoning his shirt then made his way over to the mailbag. He reached inside and removed a couple pieces of mail. “Let’s see. It’s mostly bills for your husband… Oh wait… here’s something with your name on it,” he said handing her a large brown envelope.

Heather read the front and saw it was addressed to Heather and Alex McKay. She ripped into one side of the envelope and removed a folded piece of paper. “What’s it say?” Richard asked.

Heather read the letter out loud, “Dear Heather and Alex, you have been selected to take part in the first ever Chyoo Murder Mystery television program. You are invited to an all inclusive 14 day stay at the Chyoo mansion, where your only obligation will be to take part in the taping of a new reality television program that focuses on Chyoo. As incentive, the winner of the 14 day contest will be rewarded a $250, 000 publishing contract.”

Heather looked longingly at the screen of her laptop computer. She had left it open and on the screen was one of the many steamy sex stories she had written.

“Are you going to go?” asked Richard.

“I dunno…” she responded.

“I would go if I were you. Trust me, I’ve read your work before and I know there are lot of other people who deserve to read it too.

“You know, you’re right!” Heather said with a smile, “now you better get out of here before Alex gets home from work.”

Inside the Chyoo Mansion

Several days later Heather found herself inside the Chyoo mansion on the arm of her husband. She looked around the large room that they were in. She saw a couple heavy, oak wood end tables with tall brass lamps sitting on top of them. Between the tables was a huge leather couch and on either side was another couch. The sofa’s had been arranged in a U-shape with another of those oak tables in the middle. The one in the middle however was a small flat coffee table. Heather noticed that all three of the couches were loaded with people. She counted and discovered that there were just over a dozen people in the room. Her eyes moved to the front of the room, where the open U of the couches was. Standing there was a short, portly man in a tuxedo.

“May I have you attention?” asked the man. The room went silent and everybody focused on the person who had spoken.

“The Master will be with you shortly, please take a minute and introduce yourselves to your fellow Chyoo’ers,” he said before turning and leaving the room.

Meeting the others…
 
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A tall lanky man in a black T shirt and with a black fedora pulled low over his face scanned over the gathering of people. His gaze fixed on a lovely blonde woman. A slight smile rose to his lips and he walked over to her.

He took off his hat, exposing a head of close cropped brown hair and a smooth, pale face with shinning green eyes. He extended his hand to her. “The man did say to introduce ourselves. My name’s Jet Spiegal.”

The woman nodded and shook his hand, “Hello Jet, my name’s Heather, and my husband's name is Alex."

Jet laughed. “Ha! I thought I had a better poker face than that! I should have known that a beauty like you would already be spoken for.”

Heather smiled back. “What do you do for a living Jet?”

“I’m a professional gambler. So, I do a little bit of everything. Poker, the ponies, sports, if there’s a way to make money, I’ll do it. I once even bet a man five thousand dollars that I could make his wife fall for me.” Jet watched Heather closely, trying to judge her reaction to his comment. “The key to being a good gambler isn’t so much knowing what you’re betting on; it’s knowing who you’re betting against.”

Heather asked, “Did you win the bet?”

“On the man’s wife?” Jet smiled and put his hat back on. “You better believe it. And I intend to win the publishing contract here as well. No offense to you my lovely lady, or to anyone else here, but none of you stand a chance.”
 
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He straightened from his task of adjusting the background music. Bolero was more muted now. The man's hair was short and straight, yet still long enough for some to fall across his eyes as his skirted the end oak table to meet the new arrivals. Of medium build, he had on a white linen shirt, messily tucked into his black jeans. The shirt was open three buttons, some fluffy hair and a silver chain were visible. His left hand glinted as light caught the three gold rings he wore.

His arm extended as hie came up to the trio.

"Ambrose. First Assistant Director." He shook Richard's hand; Jet's.

"A gambler, Jet, I hear? Well our industry's a bit like that - everything's a gamble.
You know though, reality TV, that's where its all happening. What we're doing here should be the first of many programmes - after all, we humans are all after the same thing aren't we...?

"Heather - nice to meet you." He silently drank in her scent.

Whooo.She's was all right, he decided... Such hair. His two weeks here were going to be a bit of all right. What a plum job - especially from behind the camera! His tongue was briefly visible as it flicked across his lips.

"How did you guys get invoved with Chyoo?"
 
The Bet.

“Holy shit Heather, isn’t that our postman?” Alex asked, elbowing his wife, while he watched the tall blonde man enter the room.

Heather’s eyes grew as big as dinner plates and her chin almost hit the floor. “What the hell is Richard doing here?” she said to herself.

Alex leaned in close to his wife, “I’m sorry honey, what was that? I couldn’t hear you.”

“Oh, uh nothing,” she responded.

Richard walked into the room and began introducing himself to the other people. “Hello there, I’m Richard Carver,” he said to the gambler.

“Good to meet you Rich, call me Jet,” the man responded.

Heather’s heart skipped a beat when Richard looked up at her, then began making his way over. “Well hello there, I’m Richard,” he spoke and extended his hand. Heather blushed and placed her hand in his. “Heather,” she told him, as if it were their first meeting. Suddenly before Heather could pull her hand away, Richard lifted it to his lips and placed a kiss on the back of her hand. “Ah hem!” came the sound of her husband as he stepped up between the two. “Any mail today?” he laughed, mocking the younger man.

“I can see why your lovely wife married you,” Richard jabbed as he turned and walked away from the couple.

As he made his way across the room he was joined by the man known as Jet. “Did I tell you I am a professional gambler?” he asked. “Oh really?” Rich said, “I’ll make you a bet, if you’re man enough to take it.” He looked at the pale face below the black fedora and knew he had the man’s attention. “I’ll take any bet, and win,” he proudly responded.

Richard smiled. “Very well. I bet that I can sleep with the blonde before you even have a chance. Do you accept the challenge?”
 
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Jet studied the man closely. There was an air about him, a smugness that suggested something. Jet smiled back at him. "I think I know when a guy's got an ace up his sleeve."
He looked over at the stunning blonde. "Still, that's a prize worth the risk. You're on. We need to set up a few ground rules though."

"Such as?" Richard asked.

"Well, it has to take place during our little television adventure here. It has to be full penetration. She has to be awake and willing..."

Richard interrupted him. "What kind of guy do you think I am?"

Jet smiled and put up his hands, "Just covering the bases. Sorry if I offended you." He drew Richard in close. "I think that the main issue here will be verification. I suggest a picture or a videotape of some sort. Clearly shown faces and acts. Agreed?"

Richard nodded. "Alright then."

The two men shook hands. They both walked over to Heather, but before they could say anything a garish looking man introduced himself as Ambrose, one of the directors. After some small talk, he asked how they got involved in with Chyoo.

Jet answered, "I heard about it from a friend called Lostandfounder. I was cleaning him out in a poker game one night and he told me about the site. I went and checked it out and decided to enter myself in the contest. I've been told I'm too competitive for my own good, but I've found that it works for me. "

Jet looked over at the blonde woman again. "Speaking of which, excuse me, I'm got a little something I've got to take care of."

Jet waited until Alex was bust talking to someone else and then walked up to Heather and whispered in her ear. "I want to make love to you."

Heather's eyes went wide with shock. Jet whispered again, "I want to make love to you right now. I've never met a woman that had such a powerful effect on me. I need you. I need you like the sun needs the sky, like the wind needs the air. "

Alex suddenly pushed in-between the two. "All right Mister 'Jet' I'm going to ask you to put some distance between yourself and my wife!"
 
The tension between the two men was disrupted unceremoniously as the door swung open and a petite brunette walked in, her hair, formerly neat and bunched, now wet and dishevelled from the rain that had started to fall steadily outside. She dragged two cases behind her. Jet and Alex, seeing that she was struggling, rushed over to her aid.

"Oh, thank you," she said as the two men took a case each. "I'm a little late so there was no one at the gate to help me. I'm Tanya."

The men introduced themselves. Jet eyed her up and down. She wore a black, long sleeved top which cut low to emphasise her breasts, big despite her size. Her beige skirt looked a muddy brown because of the rain, and her knee-high black boots had flecks of mud on them. Alex was also clearly enjoying the view, which drew dark looks from Heather.

"I'm soaked," commented Tanya. Is there anywhere I can change?"

Exactly on cue, the portly butler appeared at the door. Tanya did not see him until he started to speak, and she grabbed Alex's arm with a start. Heather silently fumed as, rather than letting go immediately, Tanya caressed his bicep and pressed her sizeable breasts into him.

"The Master has some business to attend to, so has requested that I show you to your rooms for the time being," the butler announced. "You will be called in due course for a proper introduction. In the meantime, please make yourselves at home and feel free to explore the premises. Be aware that others are due to join you, so when we return there will be formal intorductions."

A busboy came from behind the butler and grabbed Tanya's cases. He scuttled off as the butler led the group up the grand staircase. Each person was shown their room, and Tanya realised her mistake as Heather and Alex entered their room together. A dirty look from Heather confirmed her ownership of Alex. Tanya muttered under her breath. "Real smart, Tanya, what a way to make a first impression."

Tanya was last to be shown to her room. Her cases were already waiting for her. She slumped on the sumptuous king-size bed and considered what to change into. She stood up, peeled off her black top and let her skirt fall to the floor. As she stood there, wearing only a black bra with red trim, matching thong and her black boots, there was a knock at the door.
 
Tanya took a deep breath and held it in for what seemed like forever, then released it. She thought the knock from the door had been a figment of her imagination. Then she heard the latch on the door click, followed by the sound of the knob being turned. Suddenly, the door burst open and a man entered into the room. Tanya sat bolt up right in bed and screamed so hard that it came out more like a shriek.

The portly man who had entered the room dropped two large square objects on the floor and screamed too. One of the objects landed squarely on the butler’s foot and he screamed again. His second scream was of agony instead of fright.

“Jesus lady!” the man shouted as he hopped around on one foot.

Tanya clawed at the edge of the blanket, hoping for something to cover up her nakedness. He attempt was fruitless as the bedding had been tucked so tightly under the mattress that it refused to give. Finally, the petite brunette gave up her struggle with the blankets and turned her attention to the butler. “What the hell do you want and why are you barging into my room!” she demanded.

“I like your fiery nature,” commented the butler.

“What’s your name, I demand to speak to your manager!” Tanya snapped back.

“Madame, my name is Oliver, and speaking to my manager would do you no good. He sent me on this errand,” answered the man.

“Don’t get smart with me! Now what do you want?” Tanya demanded again.

Oliver the butler took a couple seconds to reply. For the first time since busting into the room, he had noticed the attire of the woman on the bed. He smiled as he looked her shapely body up and down. At last he spoke, “Miss Tanya, for the sake of entertainment everybody has been assigned a room-mate. Allow me to introduce you to…”

(ENTER ROOM-MATE - Somebody join in the story now. Thanks)
 
Anybody still interested?

Hello,
lately I've noticed a few new names on the forum. I was wondering if anybody is interested in the Chyoo Murder Mystery. I created it a while back, and it was a slow time for the message boards. I'd love to see some new life in this "Forum exclusive" story.

So if anybody is interested, just add a new character and write. If you have any questions about the story, check out this link...

Chyoo Murder Mystery Info

-Tim (niceguy2002tim)
 
I was intrigued to see the Chyoo Ball make a come back and was wondering if there would be any interest in this other forum based story that I created a couple years ago.

I was also considering converting the story from the form to Chyoo, making it much more interactive. Any thoughts?

-Tim (niceguy2002tim)
 
Probably not a bad idea. No one's actually done a story yet that is about CHYOO itself. It may be quite interesting.

I think it might be quite a good idea to do the CHYOO ball on CHYOO as well. It might be quite fun to do a story where you play the role of your CHYOO persona rather than a fictitious character.
 
gizmoo69 said:
Probably not a bad idea. No one's actually done a story yet that is about CHYOO itself. It may be quite interesting.

I think it might be quite a good idea to do the CHYOO ball on CHYOO as well. It might be quite fun to do a story where you play the role of your CHYOO persona rather than a fictitious character.

You mean like the "Chyoo revealed" storyline of lilguy's Chyoo Crossover 2?

-Z
 
I've submitted the CHyoo Murder Mystery as a story and it's waiting for approval.

By the way, I really like your AV Gizmoo69. Always had a thing for school girls.

-Tim
 
niceguy2002tim said:
By the way, I really like your AV Gizmoo69. Always had a thing for school girls.
Thanks, me too. I've finally gotten round to picking out an AV, and have been toying with about five or six for the last couple of months. Think I've found the one I like now, though.

Incidentally, the AV is of Alison Angel, and you can view pics of her as a schoolgirl in these websites: part 1; part 2; part 3; part 4; part 5 part 6; part 7.

I love her. :)
 
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