Christmas present

[MysteryStranger]

A young couple in their mid 20s have been together since their teens, but haven't had any expericence with sex outside of each other.

The gf is into woman but has never acted on it. The bf knows this and, having been struggling with what to get her for christmas, comes up with the perfect idea. On christmas morning, the gf goes to shower and when she comes back to the bedroom she finds her best friend lying on the bed naked, save for two pieces of ribbon around her breasts and pussy. The gf, horny, wet (not just from the shower), and wearing only a towel, is confused, at which point her bf appears and explains why she's there. Then he leaves, asking if she's going to unwrap her present now.

 

[nicenotherner]

drop the fact it's her best friend, much more likely t be the guys fantasy than his girlfriends. I like the idea for the story though but you do need to keep it believable and the best friend bit adds nothing to the story.

 

[DRS_EROS]

A young couple in their mid 20s have been together since their teens, but haven't had any expericence with sex outside of each other.

The gf is into woman but has never acted on it. The bf knows this and, having been struggling with what to get her for christmas, comes up with the perfect idea. On christmas morning, the gf goes to shower and when she comes back to the bedroom she finds her best friend lying on the bed naked, save for two pieces of ribbon around her breasts and pussy. The gf, horny, wet (not just from the shower), and wearing only a towel, is confused, at which point her bf appears and explains why she's there. Then he leaves, asking if she's going to unwrap her present now.

Not a bad storyline, needs more detail, history and buildup to the beroom scene and of course the bedroom scene needs alot of work and a good storyline after the bedroom scene to what happens after her first sex with another woman.... lots of possibilities.

 

[DRS_EROS]

A young couple in their mid 20s have been together since their teens, but haven't had any expericence with sex outside of each other.

The gf is into woman but has never acted on it. The bf knows this and, having been struggling with what to get her for christmas, comes up with the perfect idea. On christmas morning, the gf goes to shower and when she comes back to the bedroom she finds her best friend lying on the bed naked, save for two pieces of ribbon around her breasts and pussy. The gf, horny, wet (not just from the shower), and wearing only a towel, is confused, at which point her bf appears and explains why she's there. Then he leaves, asking if she's going to unwrap her present now.

PS, if your bio pic is any indication, you have some experience with other women.

 

[danicanuck]

drop the fact it's her best friend, much more likely t be the guys fantasy than his girlfriends. I like the idea for the story though but you do need to keep it believable and the best friend bit adds nothing to the story.

I agree drop the idea of the girl/present being her best friend. If it was her giving him the present than okay it works but he wouldn't approach his girlfriend's best friend for a sexual present unless he is really brave lol

However, maybe the other woman is an ex-girlfriend of his that she has never met but he has kept in touch with (email or social media) and is very comfortable with because he knows her so well. The ex is more than happy to be a present and has seen pictures of the current girlfriend and finds her attractive. Of course he doesn't dare admit to his girlfriend at the time that she is an ex but someone else, maybe a work friend or friend of a friend.