flawed_ethics
Professional Dufus
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- Jul 14, 2001
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It's that time of the year again - I've actually finished a story, and it's in dire need of a edit.
The story is Christian Loving: Xmas, and continues the plotline of the central charaters from the Christian Loving series. (There are eight prior chapters, so if you'd like the history lesson, I'll just refer you to my Author's Page here on Lit.) This will also be the final installment of the series as it is.
Themes in the story include Incest, oral, lactation, preggo sex, phone sex, and cheating. It's a heavyweight by my standards - 41,775 words (82 pages in MS Word), and it ALL need to be hacked away at. Needless to say, I'm willing to wait a long time for anyone willing to wade through it (I've scared off two so far)! I'll make your life a little easier by sendng it as an .rtf.
I'm primarily looking for a straight grammar check. Verb tense is my weakness, I'm told. I'll give it a spell check and all, but don't expect 100% perfection. Adding insight to character continuity, character dynamics and plot flow would be a huge plus, but not necessary.
Feel free to PM with any inquiries. Thanks for your time!
The story is Christian Loving: Xmas, and continues the plotline of the central charaters from the Christian Loving series. (There are eight prior chapters, so if you'd like the history lesson, I'll just refer you to my Author's Page here on Lit.) This will also be the final installment of the series as it is.
Themes in the story include Incest, oral, lactation, preggo sex, phone sex, and cheating. It's a heavyweight by my standards - 41,775 words (82 pages in MS Word), and it ALL need to be hacked away at. Needless to say, I'm willing to wait a long time for anyone willing to wade through it (I've scared off two so far)! I'll make your life a little easier by sendng it as an .rtf.
I'm primarily looking for a straight grammar check. Verb tense is my weakness, I'm told. I'll give it a spell check and all, but don't expect 100% perfection. Adding insight to character continuity, character dynamics and plot flow would be a huge plus, but not necessary.
Feel free to PM with any inquiries. Thanks for your time!
