Choose your own adventure, ambitious first try.

[Jimmy1988]

Hey all,

I'm new to the erotic literature scene, and my first attempt was an ambitious choose your own adventure. I had to host the story on a video game platform that allows the reader to click links to take them to the desired passage. Plus, certain selections in the story will trigger alternate endings and story trajectories. It is adventure, thriller, comedy, but very much rooted in erotica. All the stories surround the lead character exploring sexual adventures.

There is a survey built into the end, but I would love to hear what people think in the comments.

The story is called Nocturnal Transmission
Authors is: Jimmy1988

Here it is:

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[AlinaX]

This forum is for Literotica stories.

Supposedly Literotica is working on adding a new, proper interactive fiction mechanism, but it could be years away.

TBH, the opening puts me off and looks like a porn advert, not an invitation. More violence than seduction.