Choc. Syrup and Handcuffs....
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that is quite a combo!!! *grinz* I love the new signature that Endlessly has.. too awesome!
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WOW!
I'm gonna cry here.. Someone started feedback on something I wrote.. And it wasn't me!
Jade, it means a lot to me you think so highly of that poem, not only because I value your opinion, but because it was literally the first erotic work I ever wrote. I think I was 16 at the time.. A friend of mine and I used to write poems together by choosing a first line, writing to that line, switching and comparing. He was always teasing me because I never wrote any erotic poetry even though many of my favorite poets concentrate on it.. And once chose the first line 'Chocolate syrup and handcuffs' for us to write to.
I'm gonna cry here.. Someone started feedback on something I wrote.. And it wasn't me!
Jade, it means a lot to me you think so highly of that poem, not only because I value your opinion, but because it was literally the first erotic work I ever wrote. I think I was 16 at the time.. A friend of mine and I used to write poems together by choosing a first line, writing to that line, switching and comparing. He was always teasing me because I never wrote any erotic poetry even though many of my favorite poets concentrate on it.. And once chose the first line 'Chocolate syrup and handcuffs' for us to write to.
Endlessly...
First of all, you completely deserve the praise.
Second of all, there you go again impressing me with your abilities (you were 16? GEEZ!)
Thirdly (is that a word? haha) I used to do that with my friends in college and we got some cool ones out of that... but never did we try erotica!
Keep at it girl, that way I can say I knew ya once you're famous!
First of all, you completely deserve the praise.
Second of all, there you go again impressing me with your abilities (you were 16? GEEZ!)
Thirdly (is that a word? haha) I used to do that with my friends in college and we got some cool ones out of that... but never did we try erotica!
Keep at it girl, that way I can say I knew ya once you're famous!
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