Lovelynice
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Cherry Knights in a Dark One’s keep
CLOSED THREAD, for Silvergirl, Sylph54, Lovelynice, and cgraven (as the evil sorcerer)
There is a very, very, very old story about a time of the far long ago…
The World was yet very young, almost new born, and the plants, the trees, the flowers, the grass, the birds of the sky, the fish of the many waters, and all the creatures of the land were filled with magic. Nothing on the land, in the sea, or in the air was mundane.
All was magical, and magical creatures abounded everywhere on the face of this World.
There was in this far long ago time no men, nor elves, nor dwarves, nor hobbits, nor even dragons. Yet all the creatures of this world could talk, and many could do wonderful things that very few can do today.
They were innocent of all evil, and there was no taint of evil in the entirety of the World.
All the creatures of this World lived in harmony, and no animal fought nor ate any other animal.
But…
…the greatness of the magic of this World was like a beacon in the night that could be seen far beyond even the stars of the sky….
Some say that among the very first to answer that beacon’s call were the elves; coming in their great cloudships to settle the lands of Middle Earth, but some few ventured further over many millennia. Those who came to the vast lands of the Neverwhere failed to return to Middle Earth, but were instead lost, disappeared it seemed, and thus the Neverwhere was named. It is said by the most ancient and wisest of the elves that the elves eventually made it a law among them that none of the elves could ever go to Neverwhere, as far too many had never returned; dead or lost, nobody knew…
…and for a very long time, the great land of Neverwhere remained a mystery…
Long ages of the World passed, and many things happened. The elves themselves changed over time, and some hills grew into mountains, while other mountains became worn and old or fell down into becoming only hills themselves. Some elves discovered the eternal Land of the West and many elves left Middle Earth to travel there, and later returned to be known as the High Elves. Other elves began to live in the sea, or the forests, and they changed. Then the dwarves came, digging into the rock of the World, searching for precious metals and gems under the mountains. Then came men, but not in search of anything but sanctuary, and the elves accepted these bands of newcomers who were always bedraggled and fearful when they first arrived on their small ships and boats, but it was a long time before the elves learnt of their story…
…of why these men and women came begging for sanctuary, and spoke so little of their origin across the seas.
The men began slowly to tell tales of the land from whence they came, a land of terror, of horror, a land ruled by fear. The men spoke of the Neverwhere, a land that was to the elves of Middle Earth a deep and fearful mystery, for as it was said, no elf had ever returned from any journey there. The men also told the elves of the evil creatures that ruled the land of Neverwhere; demons who had come from deep and distant places while the World had been very young, summoned by the same beacon call of the magic of the young World perhaps even before the arrival of the first elves. The demons varied in all sizes and shapes, but great were their perverted lusts and greed and hunger. The men spoke also of an even greater horror, of sad creatures that may have once been elves, kept captive in crystal prisons, their magic drained slowly and torturously from them, as they screamed every night and day but never died. The demon kings used this twisted magic to do even more terrible things, to fight amongst themselves in constant wars, and to wreak havoc upon the land.
Hearing of this great evil being committed upon their own kind, and the evils committed against the people of the land of the Neverwhere, the entirety of the Elven race was filled with fury at such injustice and horror. Hearing also of this horror were the dwarves, and they were always good friends and allies of the elves in those long ago days (for no war or misunderstanding had yet come between them), and so the dwarves too were filled with a fury and anger at the evils of the demon kings who ruled the land of the Neverwhere. The elves realized quickly that the demon kings would ignore all their demands, and so a great army was formed by all the elven tribes and they were freely given metal weapons and armour by the dwarves who would fight along side them.
A great fleet was constructed to carry the Elven army across the seas to the land of the Neverwhere, and the war that was fought to free the people of the Neverwhere was a long and desperate campaign for the demon kings were mighty, and their hordes of lesser demons and demon-beasts were vast and uncountable. The Elven army had not expected such a powerful enemy, yet their hearts were set on their goal, and their souls screamed for vengeance for their enslaved and fallen comrades who had been taken by the demons long before. Eventually, after many great and terrible battles the Elven army freed the land of the Neverwhere, and the demons were forced to flee and hide in the deep places of the World, and uncountable numbers of the demon kind were vanquished as the Elves allowed none of the demons to remain in existence where ever they discovered them. Their ancient Elven comrades were freed, but all of them had gone mad and soon were finally given the mercy of being allowed to die.
All except one that refused to die and nor did he beg for mercy. Some say that this one was not even of Elven kind at all, but none could be sure. Perhaps his soul had become twisted by the evils committed upon him by the demons. He was found alone, the only survivor in the greatest fortress of the demons, a place filled with only the bodies of the dead and vanquished demons. Yet, the dead and vanquished had not been touched by any Elven or Dwarvish weapon. They had been burnt by a terrible fire, the heat of which was enough to melt the very stones inside the walls of the fortress. His name was Arawn, and he later became known among the elves and all peoples of the World as “The Dark One”, for none would speak his name except in the darkest of whispers lest his attention befall upon them…
(to be continued)
The intrepid adventurers arrive…
Across the length and breadth of Neverwhere their little band of adventurers had travelled. They searched for the source of a mystery at first, but as they found more burnt-out villages, more desolated towns, more places that had been attacked by horror during the night, their quest began to change. In the devastated places where people had once lived, increasingly the band found strange clues….
The Dead City
The fire-blackened foundations and ash-covered bones were all that remained, with here and there scattered grasses and other weeds were growing thickly. The ruins covered the hillside, and the plain in front. The once mighty stone walls of an extensive castle had been smashed to rubble. The huge castle keep was the only building stood at the very top of the hill. Around the hill, once plentiful fields and orchards had become wilderness barely showing the signs of previous cultivation and farming. A city that once was the residence of ten-thousand men, women, and children, was now as empty and desolate as many others that the adventurers had seen.
Amaran the Wizard shook his head sadly and slowly, then said aloud to the others, “This is all that remains of Stratfenhold, a city that had been famous for it’s beautiful houses and skilful carpenters. I have a chair in my study that was made here, the most comfortable and well-made that I have ever had.”
Erik Slayfoe merely grunted, his eyes watchful as they carefully walked through the ruins. His great axe shone in the occasionally bright sunlight through the broken cloud-cover. The ground was moist and muddy from recent rain, but apart from their footsteps there was no noise of anything moving. Not even the flapping of bird wings or the stir of a rodent.
Hairy-footed little Bernard, the hobbit, scouted ahead with Ivorwen the Elven maiden following close behind him, while keeping her bow and an arrow in hand just in case some potential attacker still lurked among the black ruins. So it was they who reached the massive, but darkened castle keep. The great iron-bound doors were only rusting and half-melted remnants hanging from their heavy hinges, but beyond it was worse than anyone had expected. What Bernard and Ivorwen saw was worse than they had expected, and they had seen many awful things during this quest already.
Inside the halls of the keep, the bones of the dead were as fragile as ash, some skeletons were in metal armour that had melted…and in many places the stonework of the walls had a charred and half-melted look as if greater heat than any blacksmith’s furnace had assailed them. The main hall was cratered, but of what kind of weapon that did such a thing, neither of them knew.
When the others reached the keep, even Erik’s usually hard countenance was shocked and pale. Busty Abigail, her blonde hair waving freely in the ash-laden wind from within the keep, looked as if she would be ill when she saw within the halls. Arien said nothing, but though she tried to hide her feelings with a grim determination, the sight of melted armour worn by distorted skeletons that once were men filled her with fear and revulsion.
Amaran’s expression was almost unreadable; a mixture of thoughtfulness, fear, surprise, and horror. He said nothing but only wandered the halls, not daring to touch anything.
Arien whispered as they all followed Amaran’s wandering, “This reminds me of something from a story that I’m sure that I heard once…”
“Shh…”, said Bernard, “Our wizened old one is thinking.”
Erik, finally unable to hold back his curiosity suddenly asked aloud, “Amaran? What manner of magic could’ve done this? It is like nothing we have found before!”
Amaran shook his head at first, but then stopped and looked back at them. His eyes stared at each of them, but his mind seemed also far away in other places and other times. For a moment there was a flicker in his ancient eyes, the tiniest flicker of fear, but now his face was grim and determined like a man facing death but refusing to back down. Even Erik stepped back unsteadily from that stare.
“I will not say his name”, Amaran’s old voice was deep and fatherly, “There has not been anything like this for longer than my order has existed. I have only old legends that could explain who did this. You may have heard his name as children and grown to disbelieve in such tales that are nowadays used only to frighten children. You may have noticed that in all the towns and villages that we have found that were destroyed in the night that there were not as many bodies as there should’ve been. Like you, I had originally thought that many of the people had been taken away as captives to be enslaved. But, there were things that didn’t fit that assumption quite as well as they should. I began to realize that the attackers were very specific in who they had taken with them. Young women and teenage girls I have guessed. Now I see these signs of ancient legend…”
Amaran stopped to breathe deeply before going on, “…we are not far from his old residence either. Although it has been said that he is long dead, I was always suspicious that he still lived. He has lived perhaps longer than mankind has been on this World, so I saw no reason to believe that a mere few millennia would bother him overmuch.”
Frustrated by Amaran’s hints, but not understanding them at all, Erik asked grumpily, “Who is this HE, that you keep talking about?”
Thus interrupted, Amaran looked at Erik in surprise and answered, “The Dark One”
“The dark one?”, Bernard echoed in confusion, “Which dark one?”
“THE Dark One”, replied Amaran in a fluster.
“But which one is THE dark one?”, questioned Bernard, “Is he rather shadowy and evil, or only darkly dressed, or what?”
Amaran finally said, “No, THE DARK ONE!...as in ARAWN!”
“Oh, that DARK one!”, said Bernard thereafter going very quiet.
Erik gave him a glare.
Arien whispered, “Let’s hope it’s just a myth then and that he didn’t really notice.”
Erik looked around in confusion, “Who didn’t really notice?”
Amaran simply gave him a stunned look.
CLOSED THREAD, for Silvergirl, Sylph54, Lovelynice, and cgraven (as the evil sorcerer)
There is a very, very, very old story about a time of the far long ago…
The World was yet very young, almost new born, and the plants, the trees, the flowers, the grass, the birds of the sky, the fish of the many waters, and all the creatures of the land were filled with magic. Nothing on the land, in the sea, or in the air was mundane.
All was magical, and magical creatures abounded everywhere on the face of this World.
There was in this far long ago time no men, nor elves, nor dwarves, nor hobbits, nor even dragons. Yet all the creatures of this world could talk, and many could do wonderful things that very few can do today.
They were innocent of all evil, and there was no taint of evil in the entirety of the World.
All the creatures of this World lived in harmony, and no animal fought nor ate any other animal.
But…
…the greatness of the magic of this World was like a beacon in the night that could be seen far beyond even the stars of the sky….
Some say that among the very first to answer that beacon’s call were the elves; coming in their great cloudships to settle the lands of Middle Earth, but some few ventured further over many millennia. Those who came to the vast lands of the Neverwhere failed to return to Middle Earth, but were instead lost, disappeared it seemed, and thus the Neverwhere was named. It is said by the most ancient and wisest of the elves that the elves eventually made it a law among them that none of the elves could ever go to Neverwhere, as far too many had never returned; dead or lost, nobody knew…
…and for a very long time, the great land of Neverwhere remained a mystery…
Long ages of the World passed, and many things happened. The elves themselves changed over time, and some hills grew into mountains, while other mountains became worn and old or fell down into becoming only hills themselves. Some elves discovered the eternal Land of the West and many elves left Middle Earth to travel there, and later returned to be known as the High Elves. Other elves began to live in the sea, or the forests, and they changed. Then the dwarves came, digging into the rock of the World, searching for precious metals and gems under the mountains. Then came men, but not in search of anything but sanctuary, and the elves accepted these bands of newcomers who were always bedraggled and fearful when they first arrived on their small ships and boats, but it was a long time before the elves learnt of their story…
…of why these men and women came begging for sanctuary, and spoke so little of their origin across the seas.
The men began slowly to tell tales of the land from whence they came, a land of terror, of horror, a land ruled by fear. The men spoke of the Neverwhere, a land that was to the elves of Middle Earth a deep and fearful mystery, for as it was said, no elf had ever returned from any journey there. The men also told the elves of the evil creatures that ruled the land of Neverwhere; demons who had come from deep and distant places while the World had been very young, summoned by the same beacon call of the magic of the young World perhaps even before the arrival of the first elves. The demons varied in all sizes and shapes, but great were their perverted lusts and greed and hunger. The men spoke also of an even greater horror, of sad creatures that may have once been elves, kept captive in crystal prisons, their magic drained slowly and torturously from them, as they screamed every night and day but never died. The demon kings used this twisted magic to do even more terrible things, to fight amongst themselves in constant wars, and to wreak havoc upon the land.
Hearing of this great evil being committed upon their own kind, and the evils committed against the people of the land of the Neverwhere, the entirety of the Elven race was filled with fury at such injustice and horror. Hearing also of this horror were the dwarves, and they were always good friends and allies of the elves in those long ago days (for no war or misunderstanding had yet come between them), and so the dwarves too were filled with a fury and anger at the evils of the demon kings who ruled the land of the Neverwhere. The elves realized quickly that the demon kings would ignore all their demands, and so a great army was formed by all the elven tribes and they were freely given metal weapons and armour by the dwarves who would fight along side them.
A great fleet was constructed to carry the Elven army across the seas to the land of the Neverwhere, and the war that was fought to free the people of the Neverwhere was a long and desperate campaign for the demon kings were mighty, and their hordes of lesser demons and demon-beasts were vast and uncountable. The Elven army had not expected such a powerful enemy, yet their hearts were set on their goal, and their souls screamed for vengeance for their enslaved and fallen comrades who had been taken by the demons long before. Eventually, after many great and terrible battles the Elven army freed the land of the Neverwhere, and the demons were forced to flee and hide in the deep places of the World, and uncountable numbers of the demon kind were vanquished as the Elves allowed none of the demons to remain in existence where ever they discovered them. Their ancient Elven comrades were freed, but all of them had gone mad and soon were finally given the mercy of being allowed to die.
All except one that refused to die and nor did he beg for mercy. Some say that this one was not even of Elven kind at all, but none could be sure. Perhaps his soul had become twisted by the evils committed upon him by the demons. He was found alone, the only survivor in the greatest fortress of the demons, a place filled with only the bodies of the dead and vanquished demons. Yet, the dead and vanquished had not been touched by any Elven or Dwarvish weapon. They had been burnt by a terrible fire, the heat of which was enough to melt the very stones inside the walls of the fortress. His name was Arawn, and he later became known among the elves and all peoples of the World as “The Dark One”, for none would speak his name except in the darkest of whispers lest his attention befall upon them…
(to be continued)
The intrepid adventurers arrive…
Across the length and breadth of Neverwhere their little band of adventurers had travelled. They searched for the source of a mystery at first, but as they found more burnt-out villages, more desolated towns, more places that had been attacked by horror during the night, their quest began to change. In the devastated places where people had once lived, increasingly the band found strange clues….
The Dead City
The fire-blackened foundations and ash-covered bones were all that remained, with here and there scattered grasses and other weeds were growing thickly. The ruins covered the hillside, and the plain in front. The once mighty stone walls of an extensive castle had been smashed to rubble. The huge castle keep was the only building stood at the very top of the hill. Around the hill, once plentiful fields and orchards had become wilderness barely showing the signs of previous cultivation and farming. A city that once was the residence of ten-thousand men, women, and children, was now as empty and desolate as many others that the adventurers had seen.
Amaran the Wizard shook his head sadly and slowly, then said aloud to the others, “This is all that remains of Stratfenhold, a city that had been famous for it’s beautiful houses and skilful carpenters. I have a chair in my study that was made here, the most comfortable and well-made that I have ever had.”
Erik Slayfoe merely grunted, his eyes watchful as they carefully walked through the ruins. His great axe shone in the occasionally bright sunlight through the broken cloud-cover. The ground was moist and muddy from recent rain, but apart from their footsteps there was no noise of anything moving. Not even the flapping of bird wings or the stir of a rodent.
Hairy-footed little Bernard, the hobbit, scouted ahead with Ivorwen the Elven maiden following close behind him, while keeping her bow and an arrow in hand just in case some potential attacker still lurked among the black ruins. So it was they who reached the massive, but darkened castle keep. The great iron-bound doors were only rusting and half-melted remnants hanging from their heavy hinges, but beyond it was worse than anyone had expected. What Bernard and Ivorwen saw was worse than they had expected, and they had seen many awful things during this quest already.
Inside the halls of the keep, the bones of the dead were as fragile as ash, some skeletons were in metal armour that had melted…and in many places the stonework of the walls had a charred and half-melted look as if greater heat than any blacksmith’s furnace had assailed them. The main hall was cratered, but of what kind of weapon that did such a thing, neither of them knew.
When the others reached the keep, even Erik’s usually hard countenance was shocked and pale. Busty Abigail, her blonde hair waving freely in the ash-laden wind from within the keep, looked as if she would be ill when she saw within the halls. Arien said nothing, but though she tried to hide her feelings with a grim determination, the sight of melted armour worn by distorted skeletons that once were men filled her with fear and revulsion.
Amaran’s expression was almost unreadable; a mixture of thoughtfulness, fear, surprise, and horror. He said nothing but only wandered the halls, not daring to touch anything.
Arien whispered as they all followed Amaran’s wandering, “This reminds me of something from a story that I’m sure that I heard once…”
“Shh…”, said Bernard, “Our wizened old one is thinking.”
Erik, finally unable to hold back his curiosity suddenly asked aloud, “Amaran? What manner of magic could’ve done this? It is like nothing we have found before!”
Amaran shook his head at first, but then stopped and looked back at them. His eyes stared at each of them, but his mind seemed also far away in other places and other times. For a moment there was a flicker in his ancient eyes, the tiniest flicker of fear, but now his face was grim and determined like a man facing death but refusing to back down. Even Erik stepped back unsteadily from that stare.
“I will not say his name”, Amaran’s old voice was deep and fatherly, “There has not been anything like this for longer than my order has existed. I have only old legends that could explain who did this. You may have heard his name as children and grown to disbelieve in such tales that are nowadays used only to frighten children. You may have noticed that in all the towns and villages that we have found that were destroyed in the night that there were not as many bodies as there should’ve been. Like you, I had originally thought that many of the people had been taken away as captives to be enslaved. But, there were things that didn’t fit that assumption quite as well as they should. I began to realize that the attackers were very specific in who they had taken with them. Young women and teenage girls I have guessed. Now I see these signs of ancient legend…”
Amaran stopped to breathe deeply before going on, “…we are not far from his old residence either. Although it has been said that he is long dead, I was always suspicious that he still lived. He has lived perhaps longer than mankind has been on this World, so I saw no reason to believe that a mere few millennia would bother him overmuch.”
Frustrated by Amaran’s hints, but not understanding them at all, Erik asked grumpily, “Who is this HE, that you keep talking about?”
Thus interrupted, Amaran looked at Erik in surprise and answered, “The Dark One”
“The dark one?”, Bernard echoed in confusion, “Which dark one?”
“THE Dark One”, replied Amaran in a fluster.
“But which one is THE dark one?”, questioned Bernard, “Is he rather shadowy and evil, or only darkly dressed, or what?”
Amaran finally said, “No, THE DARK ONE!...as in ARAWN!”
“Oh, that DARK one!”, said Bernard thereafter going very quiet.
Erik gave him a glare.
Arien whispered, “Let’s hope it’s just a myth then and that he didn’t really notice.”
Erik looked around in confusion, “Who didn’t really notice?”
Amaran simply gave him a stunned look.
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