Check out my story

[thechangedone]

Hi, check out my story:

http://www.literotica.com/s/the-tenth-one

Cheers!

 

[estragon]

Not my genre, and your story requires a lot of background knowledge on the part of the reader. The writing is good enough from a technical point of view, but I was totally unengaged.

 

[Guest]

Not my genre, and your story requires a lot of background knowledge on the part of the reader. The writing is good enough from a technical point of view, but I was totally unengaged.

Same here. Your actual writing style is very good, but I wasn't sure what was happening. Silent Hill, maybe?

If you included a synopsis of the setting for this story, I might be able to understand it better.