Cheating turned cuckolding turned cheating

[GlennJenko]

Hello all,

For most of the year, I've been trying to write and plan a continuation to my What Katie Wants trilogy. I had 10k words written, but something just feels really... off... about it, so I wonder if it's the premise itself I need to change. For those who haven't read my works, it is a story centred around a white woman (Katie) who is seduced by her husband's black friend on her honeymoon. The three works cover the period up to the friend (Daniel) going home. My premise for the fourth entry was Katie's husband inviting Daniel to stay in the week leading up to and covering his wife's birthday. The reasoning was that Daniel was moving to town but would have nowhere to stay for a week.

Now I've thought of a different angle, with the husband ostensibly offering Daniel a place to stay for the above reason, but REALLY wanting him there to hace sex with Katie while he watched - the idea forming in his head after hearing people fuck on the honeymoon, who turned out to be Daniel and Katie. The dilemma is thus - Katie has already slept with Daniel multiple times, unbeknownst to her husband, so would need to pretend to NOT have done that. The added twist would be that Katie's husband calls it off, but it's too late for Katie already wants Daniel again, her husband's misguided cuck fantasy making her cheat again.

Any thoughts and ideas are much appreciated! I'm still kinda spitballing here, after all.

 

[MikeXIrons]

I like the idea of the wife and friend having to pretend to be nervous and unsure with each other so as not to give away that they've been together before.

I like the idea that maybe the lovers had put the previous cheating behind them, not wanting to ruin relationships... regretting it and moving past it. But, now, the husband keeps asking her to fantasize about it... putting the idea and desire back into her head.

She (and the friend) keep telling him to forget about it. But he can't, so winds up pressuring the other two to give the hotwife thing a try... inch by inch, always resisting and leaving him wanting a little more. And he loves that his wife admits she is turned on, even if worried about the risks.

Slowly the lovers stop resisting... and give in to the desires that the husband has carefully stoked and orchestrated.

And then he wants to pump the breaks because now he's jealous. Nice twist.

So the wife has to sell HIM to keep him on board and not have him panic... "Honey, you put these naughty ideas in my head... you ignited a fire. You're SO loving and trusting... allowing me to indulge in your fantasy and making it my fantasy... you're SO generous to allow it. I'm so lucky to have you to teach me to be a little naughty..."