Cheating turned cuckolding turned cheating

[GlennJenko]

Hello all,

For most of the year, I've been trying to write and plan a continuation to my What Katie Wants trilogy. I had 10k words written, but something just feels really... off... about it, so I wonder if it's the premise itself I need to change. For those who haven't read my works, it is a story centred around a white woman (Katie) who is seduced by her husband's black friend on her honeymoon. The three works cover the period up to the friend (Daniel) going home. My premise for the fourth entry was Katie's husband inviting Daniel to stay in the week leading up to and covering his wife's birthday. The reasoning was that Daniel was moving to town but would have nowhere to stay for a week.

Now I've thought of a different angle, with the husband ostensibly offering Daniel a place to stay for the above reason, but REALLY wanting him there to hace sex with Katie while he watched - the idea forming in his head after hearing people fuck on the honeymoon, who turned out to be Daniel and Katie. The dilemma is thus - Katie has already slept with Daniel multiple times, unbeknownst to her husband, so would need to pretend to NOT have done that. The added twist would be that Katie's husband calls it off, but it's too late for Katie already wants Daniel again, her husband's misguided cuck fantasy making her cheat again.

Any thoughts and ideas are much appreciated! I'm still kinda spitballing here, after all.

 

[MikeXIrons]

I like the idea of the wife and friend having to pretend to be nervous and unsure with each other so as not to give away that they've been together before.

I like the idea that maybe the lovers had put the previous cheating behind them, not wanting to ruin relationships... regretting it and moving past it. But, now, the husband keeps asking her to fantasize about it... putting the idea and desire back into her head.

She (and the friend) keep telling him to forget about it. But he can't, so winds up pressuring the other two to give the hotwife thing a try... inch by inch, always resisting and leaving him wanting a little more. And he loves that his wife admits she is turned on, even if worried about the risks.

Slowly the lovers stop resisting... and give in to the desires that the husband has carefully stoked and orchestrated.

And then he wants to pump the breaks because now he's jealous. Nice twist.

So the wife has to sell HIM to keep him on board and not have him panic... "Honey, you put these naughty ideas in my head... you ignited a fire. You're SO loving and trusting... allowing me to indulge in your fantasy and making it my fantasy... you're SO generous to allow it. I'm so lucky to have you to teach me to be a little naughty..."

 

[GlennJenko]

So the wife has to sell HIM to keep him on board and not have him panic... "Honey, you put these naughty ideas in my head... you ignited a fire. You're SO loving and trusting... allowing me to indulge in your fantasy and making it my fantasy... you're SO generous to allow it. I'm so lucky to have you to teach me to be a little naughty..."

Overall, thanks for your thoughts!

As for this part in particular, I really like it. Katie can have the "excuse" of flirting with Daniel and whatnot brazenly by saying that it's what Shaun wanted after all - and to make it seem like everything is still his idea when really it's rapidly spiralled beyond that.

Plus, if I keep the birthday angle, Katie can incorporate that into things by saying that her husband wanted to give her something thrilling and special for her birthday, and she's just enjoying the gift that he presented her with.

 

[MikeXIrons]

Overall, thanks for your thoughts!

As for this part in particular, I really like it. Katie can have the "excuse" of flirting with Daniel and whatnot brazenly by saying that it's what Shaun wanted after all - and to make it seem like everything is still his idea when really it's rapidly spiralled beyond that.

Plus, if I keep the birthday angle, Katie can incorporate that into things by saying that her husband wanted to give her something thrilling and special for her birthday, and she's just enjoying the gift that he presented her with.

Yeah... I like the idea of her doing it altruistically "for him" initially... but, slowly wanting it more for herself, even if initially she's lying to herself... and, slowly, eventually, lying to him.

 

[GlennJenko]

Yeah... I like the idea of her doing it altruistically "for him" initially... but, slowly wanting it more for herself, even if initially she's lying to herself... and, slowly, eventually, lying to him.

Agreed.

I think Katie's guilt over what she did previously has to be weighing on her no matter what - indulging her husband despite her misgivings, as you say altruistically, would be a great way of opening herself back up to the idea. Then yeah, the lying comes back in over the course of the story until it hits its crescendo.

 

[MikeXIrons]

Agreed.

I think Katie's guilt over what she did previously has to be weighing on her no matter what - indulging her husband despite her misgivings, as you say altruistically, would be a great way of opening herself back up to the idea. Then yeah, the lying comes back in over the course of the story until it hits its crescendo.

Her guilt might be an interesting angle.

Maybe they get married... and at the wedding, she gets a little tipsy and fools around just a little with the friend. Maybe just a drunken kiss.

The friend tells the groom.

The groom, jealous and angry, makes snide comments to his new bride who's feeling horribly guilty and is terrified that maybe he knows. He holds it over her head for a while, eventually confronting her with his "suspicions". She denies it. He admits that the friend told him. She falls apart in guilt and embarrassment, sobbing, begging him to not be mad, that it was just a drunken mistake.

She becomes super sweet and sexy toward him, haunted by her guilt and knowing she was caught not just with the act, but, lying about it as well... showing him extra affection in hopes it doesn't ruin their new marriage.

He finds he really likes her new behavior... the way she pampers him and is so much more available and open sexually... asking what he wants. "I want a blowjob" he says far more bluntly than he ever would before. Without a word she's on her knees, in the back of her mind showing him that she's all his and he need not worry.

And, to prove she won't lie, she answers any question he wants. He asks about the friend... has she always found him attractive? Has she ever THOUGHT about fucking him? etc. She answers honestly to prove she won't lie... "Yes. Yes"

But, over time, her guilt starts to fade, as does her new devotion and submissiveness.

He wants it back. In fact he wants MORE of it back. So, she tarts putting her in a position to cheat with the friend again, coordinating opportunities for them to be alone... and some alcohol. Maybe he travels for work and makes sure, before he leaves, something in the house is broken that his friend would have to come over to fix. Or, the friend comes over to watch football. They all drink. The husband heads to bed early because he has a business trip in the morning. The friend, as usual, has had a little too much to drive after which she either drive him home or, she makes up the couch for him to spend the night. Etc.

Maybe he tells the friend that he wants to test her to see if she'd cheat again... and that the friend should help tempt her across the line. The friend is all too happy to play along and try to tempt her.

The friend lets him know that one night... she does cross the line again a little.

The husband is just about to replay the "You cheated!" card again, when, it turns out he doesn't have to. She's even more sexually subservient than before.

Then, he does confront her again?

So, he keeps encouraging his friend to keep trying to seduce his wife.

Something's not QUITE right in that sequence or cycle to make it really work, but it's close...

 

[Fuumayami]

I feel for the husband, I too enjoy the idea of cuckolding, but if it was my wife, I'd bail too lol. I love the thought of it but man, putting it into paper would be so risky. If there's already talk about it and he's already put it into his wife and friend's mind, it's hard to take it back now. Maybe it has to start slow, a touch, a kiss, seeing each other naked, maybe a threesome just so he feels like he didn't giving his wife away... yet. Idk
Yeah, idk what you would want. It's a nice dilemma. What about it feels off?

 

[GlennJenko]

Maybe they get married... and at the wedding, she gets a little tipsy and fools around just a little with the friend. Maybe just a drunken kiss.

The friend tells the groom.

The groom, jealous and angry, makes snide comments to his new bride who's feeling horribly guilty and is terrified that maybe he knows. He holds it over her head for a while, eventually confronting her with his "suspicions". She denies it. He admits that the friend told him. She falls apart in guilt and embarrassment, sobbing, begging him to not be mad, that it was just a drunken mistake.

As a reminder, I already wrote three stories. They cover the initial cheating and its aftermath, so unfortunately this specific part is kinda moot, as the friend did not and would not have told the husband what happened. It could still be worked in though in part, with the husband having suspicions - in fact, it could be what starts his cuck idea. He sees his wife and friend be all flirty as well as slightly awkward. He then gets it in his head that while as far as he knows nothing happened, it would've been hot if something DID.

She becomes super sweet and sexy toward him, haunted by her guilt and knowing she was caught not just with the act, but, lying about it as well... showing him extra affection in hopes it doesn't ruin their new marriage.

He finds he really likes her new behavior... the way she pampers him and is so much more available and open sexually... asking what he wants. "I want a blowjob" he says far more bluntly than he ever would before. Without a word she's on her knees, in the back of her mind showing him that she's all his and he need not worry.

And, to prove she won't lie, she answers any question he wants. He asks about the friend... has she always found him attractive? Has she ever THOUGHT about fucking him? etc. She answers honestly to prove she won't lie... "Yes. Yes"

I love this part, though.

If there's already talk about it and he's already put it into his wife and friend's mind, it's hard to take it back now. Maybe it has to start slow, a touch, a kiss, seeing each other naked, maybe a threesome just so he feels like he didn't giving his wife away... yet. Idk

Nice thoughts. But yeah it's a Pandora's box - once the thought of sleeping with the friend again takes root, she can't get her mind off it.

What about it feels off?

To be clear, it was the original idea before I thought of the cuck angle that felt off. The story felt stilted and like something was missing to make it interesting and make it flow. I thought up the cuck angle to try and alleviate that.

 

[Fuumayami]

To be clear, it was the original idea before I thought of the cuck angle that felt off. The story felt stilted and like something was missing to make it interesting and make it flow. I thought up the cuck angle to try and alleviate that.

Ah so the cuckolding is the new angle. It seems like we'll be following two sides. The husband with his conflicting emotions and the two close to him having an affair behind his back.
Would you consider maybe something like this:
- Husband fantasize his Wife being taken by another man
- Puts thoughts into Wife and Friend
- They take action but Husband stops it before it gets too real
- Wife and Friend can't stop anymore so they fuck unbeknownst to him
- Husband loves the thought of it but doesn't know if he wants to take action, but he can't help his desire to want it to happen
- Affair continues to happen behind Husband's back but then they get sloppy
- Husband comes home one day and catches them!
- Everyone is distraught
- Husband and Wife wants to mend the relationship
- Husband replays in his head of his Wife and Friend fucking over and over. He's mad at them but it's also making him hard.
- This affair makes Husband realize he wanted this all along
- Day of the birthday, Wife sees the Friend! Husband says he wants to mend the relationship the three have together. They have a great time.
- It's late and it's just the three of them, as Husband plans, he wants to finally see them fuck as he watches. Telling them the truth, that he just can't stop thinking about the time he caught them fucking.
- They fuck right in front of him, feelings of arousal and turmoil and such.
- They make an agreement and thus started their new life style.

 

[GlennJenko]

Ah so the cuckolding is the new angle. It seems like we'll be following two sides. The husband with his conflicting emotions and the two close to him having an affair behind his back.

Correct.

Would you consider maybe something like this:
- Husband fantasize his Wife being taken by another man
- Puts thoughts into Wife and Friend
- They take action but Husband stops it before it gets too real
- Wife and Friend can't stop anymore so they fuck unbeknownst to him
- Husband loves the thought of it but doesn't know if he wants to take action, but he can't help his desire to want it to happen
- Affair continues to happen behind Husband's back but then they get sloppy

I'm 100% down for everything up to here, but I don't think I want the husband finding out about it, at least not yet. And I think I want the first sex scene to be at the party where they sneak off while the husband is busy corralling a drunk friend, so the threesome at the party wouldn't really work anyway. I truly appreciate the thoughts though!

 

[Fuumayami]

I'm 100% down for everything up to here, but I don't think I want the husband finding out about it, at least not yet. And I think I want the first sex scene to be at the party where they sneak off while the husband is busy corralling a drunk friend, so the threesome at the party wouldn't really work anyway. I truly appreciate the thoughts though!

Then there's nothing that needs to be changed. It's already a good angle with the whole husband wanting to watch.

 

[GlennJenko]

Then there's nothing that needs to be changed. It's already a good angle with the whole husband wanting to watch.

Cool! Thanks once more for the feedback!

 

[PoVhubby112]

Have you thought about maybe adding another lover? On her birthday party, she's being dp'd while her Husband and what's left of their friends are knocked out or still hanging.