Characters: Opposite Alphas and a Beta

MarlowBunny

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My last three stories have been an attempt to write three distinct male personality types. I would love any constructive feedback I can get. I am particularly interested in opinions about my degree of success or failure portraying fictional archetype men without falling into stereotypes.

Beta Male: http://www.literotica.com/s/irresistible-little-sister-in-law
Alpha Male (The dark side): http://www.literotica.com/s/wanting-impresario
Alpha Male (The light side with a twist): http://www.literotica.com/s/danielles-alpha

These stories contain sexy scenes in accordance with the story tags, but I was striving to create character studies. The sex is intended in part to reveal the characters' approaches to life. You have been forewarned ;) I found them a little arousing when writing, but many other stories at this site are hotter even for me.
 
Anyone interested in providing feedback on the characterizations of Alpha and Beta males?
 
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