Character help... is she feasible?

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Over the years I have meant women who were not really very sexual, not unattractive, just not interested. Some have husbands and boyfriends, but they don't really get anything from having sex with their partners. Some have no idea what an orgasm is, or very little knowledge of a way to obtain the ultimate sexual goal. I want to write about a character.... 32 years old, at the end of her 2nd uneventful marriage, never really having attained a real orgasm. She meets a partner who takes her over the edge for her first orgasm, and hopes for many more to come.
Does this seem like a plausible real life occurrence?
 
Why not? Absolutely nothing wrong with the concept... but two points need to be made:

1. There's a lot more to "character" than just the sexual experience business. If you want readers to buy into your tale, you need to make her much more detailed as a person. Otherwise you'll have yourself the usual Literotica two-dimensional creature who's only "female" from her... er... physical description.

2. Where's the story? We're having a lot of non-story ideas on this board lately.
 
Where's the story? We're having a lot of non-story ideas on this board lately.

The story is right there in the original post.

A woman who has never had an orgasm, finds a partner who gives her one and the rest of the story(series?) is about helping her find more.
 
Over the years I have meant women who were not really very sexual, not unattractive, just not interested. Some have husbands and boyfriends, but they don't really get anything from having sex with their partners. Some have no idea what an orgasm is, or very little knowledge of a way to obtain the ultimate sexual goal. I want to write about a character.... 32 years old, at the end of her 2nd uneventful marriage, never really having attained a real orgasm. She meets a partner who takes her over the edge for her first orgasm, and hopes for many more to come.
Does this seem like a plausible real life occurrence?

Yes, as I'm sure that similar scenarios have played out in real life.

Maybe the new partner is a sex-surrogate that she went to see, perhaps at a friend's urging or maybe it's just some random guy/girl (a one night stand?) and maybe a combo of cock-size, foreplay, dirty talk, how he/she touches her and just the way that the new person fucks, is the perfect storm to launch her into ecstasy.
 
No story there that I'd be interested in. Nothing but a simple background framework. Of course, I shouldn't be forgetting that Literotica readers tend to be, how can I put it... undemanding? Beyond the requirement for their own... "launch into ecstasy", I mean.

In my previous post I should perhaps have stipulated "readers with minimum half a brain"...
 
Once she orgasms and she realises what she's missed out on, she begins the search for bigger and better orgasms with more partners in more scenarios. As stories go, it's an oldie but a goody!
 
Does this seem like a plausible real life occurrence?
Yes and no.
Yes - I know there are women out there who have never had a partner give them an orgasm. For some women it can be difficult. The proper mood, the proper amount of wine, the right touches. And the slightest thing, can throw you off course. It took me a couple of years before I could get my wife to cum regularly.
No - most every women can get herself there, one way or another. A quiet night, the right fantasy, the vibrator on the right intensity level while her fingers do their thing.
 
Why not? Absolutely nothing wrong with the concept... but two points need to be made:

1. There's a lot more to "character" than just the sexual experience business. If you want readers to buy into your tale, you need to make her much more detailed as a person. Otherwise you'll have yourself the usual Literotica two-dimensional creature who's only "female" from her... er... physical description.

2. Where's the story? We're having a lot of non-story ideas on this board lately.

Why yes, there is not much of a story presented in the opening of my thread. Unfortunately, there is no forum for questions involving story parts. I merely requested if the character characteristics were feasible (using lit member to revel their thoughts and opinions), I apologize for not presenting a more detailed vision of my story but I feel that it was not necessary, I just wanted to see if the character trait was going to work.
 
Very feasible, and I think it's a good basis for a story.

If you want it to be less extreme, you could make the woman able to orgasm, but she has never had a g-spot orgasm. In fact, she believes it is a myth. Until she meets a man (or woman?)(or tentacle monster?) who shows her how wrong she is. Then she goes on her quest for more, more, more.
 
Over the years I have meant women who were not really very sexual, not unattractive, just not interested. Some have husbands and boyfriends, but they don't really get anything from having sex with their partners. Some have no idea what an orgasm is, or very little knowledge of a way to obtain the ultimate sexual goal. I want to write about a character.... 32 years old, at the end of her 2nd uneventful marriage, never really having attained a real orgasm. She meets a partner who takes her over the edge for her first orgasm, and hopes for many more to come.
Does this seem like a plausible real life occurrence?
It sure is plausible. I lived it with my 1st wife.
 
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