Nightscream89
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Good day everyone,
Chapter 5 of my series "The Gentlemen's club" has just been released:
Chapter 5: Jennifer
I struggled a bit with this chapter, alot happens at once and dynamics change a bit in this chapter.
I would love feedback, especially on dialogues since I struggled a bit with them.
Sometimes I want to add more because it feels too fast paced, but it seems weird to just add nonsense chatter to it. So I'm a bit unsure of how to handle those.
For people who have or are willing to read the entire series, I would love your opinion on how the characters are developing.
I try to write different personalities and different ways of thinking for each character. I think I'm doing allright on that, but it's of course hard to judge for myself since I already see them the way I have them in my mind. So my question is, do you notice distinct differences between the character's?
Of course all feedback is appreciated even if it isn't about the points I mentioned above.
Chapter 5 of my series "The Gentlemen's club" has just been released:
Chapter 5: Jennifer
I struggled a bit with this chapter, alot happens at once and dynamics change a bit in this chapter.
I would love feedback, especially on dialogues since I struggled a bit with them.
Sometimes I want to add more because it feels too fast paced, but it seems weird to just add nonsense chatter to it. So I'm a bit unsure of how to handle those.
For people who have or are willing to read the entire series, I would love your opinion on how the characters are developing.
I try to write different personalities and different ways of thinking for each character. I think I'm doing allright on that, but it's of course hard to judge for myself since I already see them the way I have them in my mind. So my question is, do you notice distinct differences between the character's?
Of course all feedback is appreciated even if it isn't about the points I mentioned above.
