Challenge: I can name that poet in 8 lines

[annaswirls]

I can name this poet in 8 lines

Bring back the slow,
because sharp tire marks
and streetlights' cold
cones of faux day
shines an overrated
script on the asphalt
of a strained city's
conceptual overflow.

Bring back the slow,
because sharp tire marks
and streetlights' cold
cones of faux day
shines an overrated
script on the asphalt
of a strained city's
conceptual overflow.

Bring back the breath,
that the million-minded
myriad has been out of
since the siren shrieks
of 6:30 alarm clocks
beat the dream out of
all it's foggy temples.


*using some good old boys, when we get to the more recent lit-errr-oticers I will give maybe 1 or 2 line hints

eagleyez
denis hale
liar
neonurotic
RazzRajen
The_Fool

 

[tarablackwood22]

I'm working...process of elimination...by style.

It's very clear you were once a teacher, anna.

 

[perks]

I totally voted for the Rajen, I hope I'm right.

 

[WickedEve]

I don't know... It doesn't sound like Razz. Darn, this is tough. It's perks! Right?

 

[perks]

I don't know... It doesn't sound like Razz. Darn, this is tough. It's perks! Right?

Rajen is my alter ego, *nods*.

 

[Lauren Hynde]

This is definitely not RazzRajen. Of that, I am sure. The style is his complete opposite.

It's not denis hale either. "Streetlights' cold cones of faux day" and "a strained city's conceptual overflow"? Doesn't sound like him.

I think it could conceivebly be either the Fool or Neo, but my bet would be Liar for this one.

This is a much tougher call than the other challenge, though!

 

[perks]

This is definitely not RazzRajen. Of that, I am sure. The style is his complete opposite.

It's not denis hale either. "Streetlights' cold cones of faux day" and "a strained city's conceptual overflow"? Doesn't sound like him.

I think it could conceivebly be either the Fool or Neo, but my bet would be Liar for this one.

This is a much tougher call than the other challenge, though!

see I was down to Liar and Rajen, but I swear it could be Rajen. I went with Raj, based on the clarity, however I didn't take into consideration, the out of context issue, and that should have been a major deciding factor for me... so, I wouldn't bet against you on the possiblity that it might be Liar.

 

[WickedEve]

This is definitely not RazzRajen. Of that, I am sure. The style is his complete opposite.

It's not denis hale either. "Streetlights' cold cones of faux day" and "a strained city's conceptual overflow"? Doesn't sound like him.

I think it could conceivebly be either the Fool or Neo, but my bet would be Liar for this one.

This is a much tougher call than the other challenge, though!

It's early lauren before she became late Liar?

 

[Lauren Hynde]

It's early lauren before she became late Liar?

Am I ever late?

 

[Reltne]

This is definitely not RazzRajen. Of that, I am sure. The style is his complete opposite.

It's not denis hale either. "Streetlights' cold cones of faux day" and "a strained city's conceptual overflow"? Doesn't sound like him.

I think it could conceivebly be either the Fool or Neo, but my bet would be Liar for this one.

This is a much tougher call than the other challenge, though!

I don't think it is Liar, but either Fool or Neoneurotic. If I choose the first I would be an idiot, but I would be crazy to pick the latter.

 

[Maria2394]

i think its ee

 

[Liar]

It's early lauren before she became late Liar?

"late Liar"? Sounds like I'm dead or something.

 

[perks]

"late Liar"? Sounds like I'm dead or something.

you will be soon *BONK*

 

[Liar]

you will be soon *BONK*

U gonna luv the life outta me or what?

Can it wait until later? I'm on my way to read and review this day's poems.

 

[Angeline]

I think it's later Liar. (Does that sound like I think you're leaving, Liar?). I tell ya--if it's ee, I'm gonna be pretty embarrassed, lol. I'm always telling him I could spot his poems anywhere.

 

[tarablackwood22]

I think it's Liar too.

 

[Guest]

I say it's neo but I bet it's not.

I said the last one was Maria but I KNEW it was perks.

 

[tungtied2u]

I'm saying it's ee cuz I'll look pretty smart if I'm right,

but will be hidden amongst all the other losers if I'm wrong.

 

[eagleyez]

it aint me babe
naw naw naw
it aint me babe
it aint me your lookin for babe.

 

[eagleyez]

like a choir
funny the singular rattling throatstring
accident, a chord of many so
vocal surely sings-

necks arched
like twelve string
fingers

evangalists
for
a little
bump,

hips and harumph-
words and
riverocks sweet-
to be
bounced
across
with
webbed
feet.

 

[tungtied2u]

it aint me babe
naw naw naw
it aint me babe
it aint me your lookin for babe.

ee, thanks for the opportunity to stand out here in the open, looking like a loser all by myself

 

[eagleyez]

ee, thanks for the opportunity to stand out here in the open, looking like a loser all by myself

oh hell,

I'll be a loser with you.

 

[tungtied2u]

oh hell,

I'll be a loser with you.

as they say

misery loves company

 

[annaswirls]

he could just be fakin' you out, tt

Okay more lines coming up answer this afternoon

 

[annaswirls]

another 8 for those who wait

Bring back the slow,
because sharp tire marks
and streetlights' cold
cones of faux day
shines an overrated
script on the asphalt
of a strained city's
conceptual overflow.

Bring back the breath,
that the million-minded
myriad has been out of
since the siren shrieks
of 6:30 alarm clocks
beat the dream out of
all it's foggy temples.

Bring back the time