Category help: Reluctance or erotic couplings or something else?

[blowhyoooge]

Hi all, just wrote my first story that wasn't about balloon/tuba fetish and i'm not sure how to categorize it.

it's basically an accidental penetration story. two strangers take a couple's amusement park ride, sort of a mix of tunnel of love and tramway, in which the couples have to sit in each other's laps. he gets partially aroused, the ride stops and he ends up inside her. once he grows to full size, there's not enough room in the cramped car for her to get off of him (it's very, very cramped!) so she realizes that to avoid a scene at the ride's end, they have to complete the act so he gets soft.

it's inspired by another story i read, categorized as reluctant/non consent, about two people trapped in a cramped escape pod in a similar situation, but in that story she really doesn't want intercourse, in my story she did not ask but is resigned to it. she's reluctant, did not consent to penetration, but... is that non-consenty enough? i am thinking the non-consent people want something more like outright sexual assault. should i just put it as an erotic coupling?

 

[EmilyMiller]

in which the couples have to sit in each other's laps. he gets partially aroused, the ride stops and he ends up inside her

I’m trying really hard (bad word choice) to imagine how this could actually happen

 

[EmilyMiller]

i am thinking the non-consent people want something more like outright sexual assault

 

[StillStunned]

I’m trying really hard (bad word choice) to imagine how this could actually happen

You need to watch more porn.

To the OP: I'd stick it in EC. Unless the focus is on either of them needing to be convinced/coerced/forced, just make it about a happy accident that two people enjoy. Give it a catchy title and a titillating tag line, and you'll do quite well.

 

[blowhyoooge]

I’m trying really hard (bad word choice) to imagine how this could actually happen

it's porn, suspend your disbelief a little. but if you want to know the mechanics... she's not wearing anything under her sarong (she sat in bird shit and had to lose her bikini bottom). he's practically poking out of his bathing suit, tries to adjust himself and makes things worse. she tries to lift herself off him, he springs thorough his waistband, winds up with his head just touching her lips. he's just about to move when the ride stops with a jerk, and she loses her grip on the bars...

 

[EmilyMiller]

it's porn, suspend your disbelief a little. but if you want to know the mechanics... she's not wearing anything under her sarong (she sat in bird shit and had to lose her bikini bottom). he's practically poking out of his bathing suit, tries to adjust himself and makes things worse. she tries to lift herself off him, he springs thorough his waistband, winds up with his head just touching her lips. he's just about to move when the ride stops with a jerk, and she loses her grip on the bars...

I can understand the anatomy and mechanics perfectly now, thank you.

 

[EmilyMiller]

You need to watch more porn.

I think you mean different categories of porn…

 

[StillStunned]

I think you mean different categories of porn…

Yes, some of the surreal French stuff from the 1970s, where you can tell the actors - the male ones at least - had classical training. This story would fit right in there.

(Not that I know much about the topic, obviously.)

 

[dirk2024]

Hi all, just wrote my first story that wasn't about balloon/tuba fetish and i'm not sure how to categorize it.

it's basically an accidental penetration story. two strangers take a couple's amusement park ride, sort of a mix of tunnel of love and tramway, in which the couples have to sit in each other's laps. he gets partially aroused, the ride stops and he ends up inside her. once he grows to full size, there's not enough room in the cramped car for her to get off of him (it's very, very cramped!) so she realizes that to avoid a scene at the ride's end, they have to complete the act so he gets soft.

My opinion, such as it is, is that it depends on two things: her attitude towards him pre-insertion and her reaction post insertion. There isn't much to go on here other than, "let's just get this over with". Is she mad at him? Humiliated? Or is she kinda happy because she'd been crushing on him and now she's into it?

Yes, they are stangers beforehand, but is she attracted to him and possibly flirty? Or does she find the situation, and him, offensive?

You need to make the decision which category you want the story to reside, then write their intentions, thoughts, desires appropriately. Category is one of the first decisions I make when starting a story.

 

[Bamagan]

Hi all, just wrote my first story that wasn't about balloon/tuba fetish and i'm not sure how to categorize it.

it's basically an accidental penetration story. two strangers take a couple's amusement park ride, sort of a mix of tunnel of love and tramway, in which the couples have to sit in each other's laps. he gets partially aroused, the ride stops and he ends up inside her. once he grows to full size, there's not enough room in the cramped car for her to get off of him (it's very, very cramped!) so she realizes that to avoid a scene at the ride's end, they have to complete the act so he gets soft.

it's inspired by another story i read, categorized as reluctant/non consent, about two people trapped in a cramped escape pod in a similar situation, but in that story she really doesn't want intercourse, in my story she did not ask but is resigned to it. she's reluctant, did not consent to penetration, but... is that non-consenty enough? i am thinking the non-consent people want something more like outright sexual assault. should i just put it as an erotic coupling?

I personally would find it hard to believe that the ride could be so cramped as to make it impossible for them to decouple. Leaving that aside, the scenario would probably fit better in EC, since the woman sounds like she considers it merely an inconvenience, and there's no power dynamic or aggression.

 

[Gamblnluck]

I personally would find it hard to believe that the ride could be so cramped as to make it impossible for them to decouple. Leaving that aside, the scenario would probably fit better in EC, since the woman sounds like she considers it merely an inconvenience, and there's no power dynamic or aggression.

I agree. It is an 'inconvenience' for the pesky penis protrusion, the woman had to deal with. If he'd stripped her panties down and ordered the woman onto his lap just to fuck with her (like her unknowing husband was nearby), then reluctance might be okay. All depending on presentation and the rest of the story.

 

[blowhyoooge]

I personally would find it hard to believe that the ride could be so cramped as to make it impossible for them to decouple.

he's very big. poor woman!

 

[EmilyMiller]

he's very big. poor woman!

Of course he is.

 

[dirk2024]

he's very big. poor woman!

Of course he is.

Aren't we all?

 

[lovecraft68]

If there's reluctance, it goes in NC/R. No different than if there's incest, it goes in I/T.

Reluctance, Taboo and GM are trump categories.

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

I'd say SciFi since we don't have a magic wandering wiener category.

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

This thread is yet another one that brings back a very bad memory from long ago.

 

[Britva415]

I'd say SciFi since we don't have a magic wandering wiener category.

or Fantasy since real life rides don't expect strangers, or really even anybody at all, to sit on each other's laps - rather, they would kick you off if you even tried. Making that make sense would involve some world-building.

 

[ShelbyDawn57]

I’m trying really hard (bad word choice) to imagine how this could actually happen

Well, the car is over packed and the only place for mom to sit is in the back seat with her son. In fact, she has to sit in his lap. The road gets bumpy, and...
Nah, no one would ever write a story like that.

 

[Five_Inch_Heels]

Aaaah... the magical mystery dick
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Roll up (To make a reservation), roll up for the mystery weiner
The magical mystery phallus is coming to take you away
Coming to take you away
The magical mystery schlong is dying to take you away
Dying to take you away, take you today