Category help; Loving wives or?

lovecraft68

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I was going through an old usb stick today and found some of my writing from a couple of years ago on it. Most of it was partial stories and ideas that led to the series I'm currently writing but a couple of others were attempted stories and really pretty crappy or just so vanilla it was why bother? I did however find one that had some potential so I dropped it into word and started working on it. It still needs to be finished but as I was working on it I realized that I am unsure of what category to post it in so here is the premise.

A very professional couple in their early forties who are very sexually active (with each other) end up having a spur of the moment threesome with some slut in a bar a couple of years ago. It was hot but with their careers they don't want to take chances but here and there they have brought up doing it again but with a certain type of girl. Very young (18+ of course) and preferably a virgin. They don't want to "rip her up" they want to be playful and pretty much enjoy her. The wife ends up meeting the perfect girl, brings her home to the husband they play with her break her in offer to help with her school if she'll move in and they basically make her their "pet" they take her on trips and when the husband or wife has to go away for business the girl keeps the other company. My question is does this fall under Loving wives? as it's the wife who meets her and brings her home. Is it group sex? I think it's to much for erotic couplings I was leaning towards loving wives but there's no cheating or cuckolding which seems to be the staple of those stories. Any suggestions?
 
It problably goes under "Group Sex"


Loving Wives can be brutal when it comes to another person getting involved in a relationship, especially if there's cheating (which isn't invonvled in this story, just saying)
 
I'd go with group sex...unless you enjoy the LW comments, of course.
 
I'd go with group sex...unless you enjoy the LW comments, of course.

Never ventured into Loving Wives as I never really felt like writing one I had forgotten about this one and wondered if it would work. You're the second group sex vote however so it's looking in that direction. For the record I think at some point I am going to have to try loving wives just because the abuse seems like some kind of badge of honor.
 
Group!

It's not Loving Wives, and you can thank your lucky stars for that as the category doesn't have the nicest readers. Loving wives is a weird category about either "loving wives" (rare--meaning a very faithful wife) or cuckholded husbands who may or may not avenge themselves on the cheating wife.

Readers in Loving Wives won't like this story and won't get it.

I'm in agreement that it not only belongs in Group, but that Group readers will love it. Put it there.
 
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