catch bf cheating

[brunette222]

ive got a fantasy id love to read a story about but cant find any good

i like the idea of going to a party with my bf and after a while realise i havent seen him for a while and go looking for him, when i find him he is fucking another girl but doesnt stop just carrys on, taunting me slightly. not sure where it would go from there though

 

[Vincent E]

Think about what your gut reaction to something lik ethat happening for real, and then go exactly in the opposite direction. If you would be outraged, hurt, and embarrassed write about being turned on, amused, and intrigued.

If, on the other hand, you think that you would be aroused watching him with another woman, write about being humiliated and the feelings that would come to the surface.

In either case keep your charatcer transfixed on the action taking place in front of her, whether her reaction is one of outrage or arousal. And don't be afraid to make the story more emotional that graphic. There are plenty of fuck and suck stories on this site, but a story that explores and develops a writer's emotions will be more highly regarded by readers and more satisfying to you as you write it.