It was a good story, haunting in its own way. Real and yet ephemeral. I enjoyed it more than most around here. Riven has his own style of writing, and it works well with the subject matter. I'll be waiting for your next story!
Got your e-mail. I'm actually pursuing writing it into a novel with the hopes of getting it published.
Thank you very much for your support. I'll let you know when I'm done the new story,
Riven, I showed your story to a friend of mine (he writes novels himself and is a respected autor here in Germany) and these are his words: "Once I got used to his "shortcut-sharp" style, it really captured me. Intriguing. With true potential."