Carlos the Bank Robber

JamesGaine

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Carlos Reyes - Argentinian bank robber has just been released from Rykers Island Penitentiary. Now 34 years old after a five year spell, the dangerous criminal is released into society. Its been five years since he's felt a woman's touch, now walking the streets of New York on his first day of freedom he drinks in the sights of the gorgeous woman of the Big Apple.

Carlos is 6' hair cropped, a coiling red dragon tatooed on his scarred muscular chest and belly. He has scars everywhere, bearing testimony to his reputation as the meanest knife fighter in Rykers.

Carlos eyes the sea of humanity, especially the female sea. His nostrils flare at there scent. Who will he choose to end his five year celibacy?
 
A girl, probably a college student. Long red hair, pale skin. Ample chest. Apparently fashion-challenged, wearing a T-shirt with a shopworn denim jacket, and shorts. A little dexterity-challenged as well. Parked on a side street, she is fumbling with a backpack and a set of keys....

JamesGaine said:
Carlos Reyes - Argentinian bank robber has just been released from Rykers Island Penitentiary. Now 34 years old after a five year spell, the dangerous criminal is released into society. Its been five years since he's felt a woman's touch, now walking the streets of New York on his first day of freedom he drinks in the sights of the gorgeous woman of the Big Apple.

Carlos is 6' hair cropped, a coiling red dragon tatooed on his scarred muscular chest and belly. He has scars everywhere, bearing testimony to his reputation as the meanest knife fighter in Rykers.

Carlos eyes the sea of humanity, especially the female sea. His nostrils flare at there scent. Who will he choose to end his five year celibacy?
 
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Looks like the OP has left the building...too bad, he seemed to be a good writer. if anyone else wants to take over Carlos, I'd love to continue this.
 
well i think i can play carlos's part if you had like to !
 
It was a long time since i had a nice girl, and as i passed the parking lot i saw this beautiful girl with ripe body barely 19 or 20 near her car and fumbling with her keys.
I had made m mind to have her and quitely walk in a stealthy mode and as the street was deserte i gently put thre cold sharp blade on her neck and ask her to remain quite and follow my instructions
 
emily123 said:
It was a long time since i had a nice girl, and as i passed the parking lot i saw this beautiful girl with ripe body barely 19 or 20 near her car and fumbling with her keys.
I had made m mind to have her and quitely walk in a stealthy mode and as the street was deserte i gently put thre cold sharp blade on her neck and ask her to remain quite and follow my instructions

She hears you come up behind her...she moves aside to let you pass, figuring you are in a hurry and seeking to go around her. Shock doesn't even begin to describe her reaction when you put the blade to her neck. But to her credit she remains calm and composed.

"You picked the wrong time to mug me," she says quietly. "I don't get paid until the end of the week. I have twelve bucks and some change. It's in the wallet inside my purse.
 
"No girl, oi have not found the wrong time to mug you" i say pressing the blade a bit on your neck and whisper again in your ears "Open the door girl, quickly"
 
Does this prick not understand fucking English, she wants to say. But he has the knife, so...

"All right, she responds. Carlos doesn't see that deer-pinned-in-the-headlights look that occurs all too often in these sorts of situations. The girl is responsive. She opens her car door, tossing her backpack into the back seat. She thumbs the power lock, and the locks all whir open.

"Are you driving, or am I?"

emily123 said:
"No girl, oi have not found the wrong time to mug you" i say pressing the blade a bit on your neck and whisper again in your ears "Open the door girl, quickly"
 
I sit next to you and say you are driving honey but follow my instructions or i wont take time to slit your throat" and then you start the engine and start driving along the route as i instruct and soon we are out of the city and driving towards my old forest hideout no one knows about and i ask you to stop the car before we reach there.
"Get out of the car you slut" and i take out a black cloth from my pocket
 
The girl feels a ray of hope...maybe the man intends to drive off and leave her here, figuring by the time she fnds help he'll be long gone. Fine with her. So when he told her to get out, she did so with alacrity.

She looked out over the field to the forest, slowly walking further from the road, expecting the man to drive off now in her car.
 
i smile as i see you walking off but in no time i grab you by the waist again and keep the knife on your throat and drag you back to the car.
"I told you to get out not walk off you bitch!" i spat at you
and then i put the blindfold on your terrified eyes as i laugh, now i need something to tie your hands and i smile and say, "Take off that top of yours bitch" and enjoty the really scared look on your face
 
The girl shows just the slightest hint of being flustered. "I thought you were interested in the car," she said calmly, hiding how her heart sank as she realized the Latino's interest in her had not ended.

She did not move further as the man blindfolded her. She was scared now...apparently the man intended to take her somewhere and he did not want her to see where.

At his shout to take off her top, the girl said quietly, "If you want to see my tits, just ask. It's simpler that way." She worked her way out of her top. "The bra too, I assume?" She reached behind herself, unhooking the bra, letting it slip into her fingers. She felt the cool air on her full breasts. The nipples poked up.

"Does that...satisfy your curiosity?"

emily123 said:
i smile as i see you walking off but in no time i grab you by the waist again and keep the knife on your throat and drag you back to the car.
"I told you to get out not walk off you bitch!" i spat at you
and then i put the blindfold on your terrified eyes as i laugh, now i need something to tie your hands and i smile and say, "Take off that top of yours bitch" and enjoty the really scared look on your face
 
No slut put it back and i quickly force your bra back hooking it and then i tie your hands behind your back and shove you in the back seat of the car and drive to my farm deep in the forest, i could not take my eyes of the rear view mirror as i saw your face in the mirror, finally i pull the car in the garage and pull you out of the car and put you on my shoulder and carry you inside a big basement hall and put you on the floor and untie your hands and take off the blindfold after locking the door and switching on the lights
 
emily123 said:
No slut put it back and i quickly force your bra back hooking it and then i tie your hands behind your back and shove you in the back seat of the car and drive to my farm deep in the forest, i could not take my eyes of the rear view mirror as i saw your face in the mirror, finally i pull the car in the garage and pull you out of the car and put you on my shoulder and carry you inside a big basement hall and put you on the floor and untie your hands and take off the blindfold after locking the door and switching on the lights

The girl looked around the basement, obviously dazzled by the lights. Her temper got the best of her. "Listen, if you're some sort of sick serial killer just fucking get it over with, you bastard." She looked around the basement, not knowing what else to say. "Why didn't you just take the fucking car like a normal robber?"
 
I chuckle and laugh and then reply "Well richy missy i am not a god-damn serial killer nor am i an idiot auto thief, I am Carlos the magnificient and i am the most expert bank robber in this god damn good for nothing country!"
i take a deep breath as my temper rose as i completed the sentence and now i pacify my self as i look at your ample bossom
"Now you must be thinking why i got you here are you not?" i ask as i move very close to you
 
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