Carla Gets Claimed

[SavannaT]

Carla doesn’t know how to feel about her singie mom dating the rough and tumble type but is too distracted by her new job as a stay at home mom to notice her ex-con future stepdad has his eye on her young now glowing body, she is horny from the rush of hormones as is her mom’s new beau from the sight of her swollen tits, she doesn’t expect the strange tingles she feels from being overpowered and objectified by the old man but in no time is ignoring her husband to get dicked down by the horny convict.

Thoughts?

 

[Brandnewbuddy]

I feel you might have one too many irons in the fire (like the stepdad aspect feels like it doesn’t add much aside from being a tag to throw in) But I could see it working. To clarify: does she live with mom? I think that would be the easiest way to do the story and allow for more encounters.

So here’s my pitch: her mom is rich and MC and hubby moved in with her as they aren’t doing so well financially. Mom is okay with this and her big house has plenty of room.

The baby gets born right around the time convict starts dating her mom and he moves in right away. Again, it’s a big house but MC and hubby don’t like the idea of a felon being around their baby…but it’s mom’s house. Wife wants to go back to work but hubby tells her she needs to be a stay at home mom (he’s partially influenced by mom’s boyfriend as he’s been subtly making him feel less like a man so he starts trying to assert himself in ways that pushes MC away)

Now at home with mom and her boyfriend, MC can’t help but be around them as she needs help with the baby. Hubby is gone and while convict is crude and lecherous, he is sincerely helpful and unlike hubby, finds her post pregnancy body intensely arousing. Once he claims her, they are soon fucking all over the house even if hubby is there. Mom meanwhile is fully aware and possibly even encouraging it.

 

[SavannaT]

I like the idea of the con manipulating and even emasculating the husband, slowly gaslighting him into cuckhood while turning the wife into his slut

 

[Wisconsin1965]

I like the idea of the con manipulating and even emasculating the husband, slowly gaslighting him into cuckhood while turning the wife into his slut

Very erotic and sexually charged. Keep going with it. Definitely a good start to a story.

 

[Rob_Royale]

I like this as a low income multiple generations in the same house story. Horny mom, biker boyfriend. Young husband smart and sweet and may someday be a good provider. Breast feeding daughter who is secretly elated every time the tattooed ex-con BF leers hungrily at her when she's nursing the baby in the living room.
I'd make it a David/ Goliath story. Maybe the young husband has to grow a pair and kick some ass.

 

[SavannaT]

I like this as a low income multiple generations in the same house story. Horny mom, biker boyfriend. Young husband smart and sweet and may someday be a good provider. Breast feeding daughter who is secretly elated every time the tattooed ex-con BF leers hungrily at her when she's nursing the baby in the living room.
I'd make it a David/ Goliath story. Maybe the young husband has to grow a pair and kick some ass.

But not before the ex con biker gives her the best fucking of her life hehe

 

[Brandnewbuddy]

I think a scene that could be fun to have is either when he first claims her or when she’s trying to break things off and he’s about to take her from behind and her baby starts crying. Here it is! The perfect excuse to end things and get away! And if convict forces himself on her, she can call the police and-

He lets her go and tells her to take care of her baby. He even tells her to take her time.

She looks at him puzzled and he merely smiles: “you’ll be coming back and we’ll pick right up where we left off”

It’s stupid. Of course she’s not coming back, of course not. She can just lock the door to the nursery and wait for hubby to come home. That’s all she has to do…that’s all she has to do. No…she should tell him that things need to be broken off, that he can’t be doing this…that they can’t be doing this.

And of course hours later she’s soon scrambling to put her clothes back on and cleanup the signs of her infidelity

 

[SavannaT]

I think a scene that could be fun to have is either when he first claims her or when she’s trying to break things off and he’s about to take her from behind and her baby starts crying. Here it is! The perfect excuse to end things and get away! And if convict forces himself on her, she can call the police and-

He lets her go and tells her to take care of her baby. He even tells her to take her time.

She looks at him puzzled and he merely smiles: “you’ll be coming back and we’ll pick right up where we left off”

It’s stupid. Of course she’s not coming back, of course not. She can just lock the door to the nursery and wait for hubby to come home. That’s all she has to do…that’s all she has to do. No…she should tell him that things need to be broken off, that he can’t be doing this…that they can’t be doing this.

And of course hours later she’s soon scrambling to put her clothes back on and cleanup the signs of her infidelity

Omg yes.. a small consideration on his part turns a mistake into a love affair love that… yess

 

[IARainman]

Does hubby ever come to understand that she needs more than just him?

 

[SavannaT]

Does hubby ever come to understand that she needs more than just him?

He does by the point he walks in on her being shared by the con and his friend.

 

[IARainman]

He does by the point he walks in on her being shared by the con and his friend.

Her milky tits hanging and dripping as she's railed by one and sucking the other

 

[Brandnewbuddy]

thought of a couple of good scenes

1. A twist on the “answering the phone” trope. She’s blowing mom’s boyfriend and her phone goes off and it’s her husband Either he orders her to or maybe her mom does this but after she sees who it is, she puts the vibrating phone against her clit. The vibes aren’t that strong but the sheer depravity makes her come.

2. While the story doesn’t need to go a full incestous route (though I think it would add an extra bit of spice if there are scenes where they compete for his attention), I think if her mom is in her early 40s or maybe late 30s, her boyfriend gets her pregnant in front of MC. Her mom always said she only wanted one child but now she wants his and her daughter watches her get knocked up with her brother or sister, and of course the boyfriend makes it clear he intends to one day get MC pregnant as well.